Friction - Comments

This is quite amazing I must say, although I am only on the first chapter I just thought I would go ahead and comment and say that it sort of reminds me of Chuck Paulaniks story "Survivor" with the whole phone call scene.
This is completely astounding, please continue the great work (:

O.O
Oh dear god, i have a story similar to the first chapter D:
With the fake hotline and a fat cat too D:

...great minds think alike?

I love how weird this story is.
:)
Update?

i love this story when are you going to update?

I love this story, I swear...I'm addicted to they way you write...update soon please.

I love this story.
It's so weird and quirky.

Great .. (As in I want to read much more of this as it is inventive and entertaining)

I reall like this story. Update soon, yeah?

Wow, this is an amazing story. I'm a new reader and I just have to say: WHOA.
The way you describe Frank's almost apatheticness is fantastic; the way he can just send people off to their deaths is frightening. When Mikey died, I nearly did the same, lmao.

This story... I can't even put it into words. Seriously, this is completely, insanely brilliant, and you are an amazing writer. I bow down to your awesome writing skills, forever.

damn poor gee fand frank

lol

Gee reminded me of a little kid there!!

I remember doing that too..

getting the phone to listen to my 'rents convo's....

yet somehow my Mother knew the moment I picked the phone up.

hehe

Update SPoon!

He picks up the phone...that's hilarious. And he doesn't even pretend like he didn't, he just automatically talks and asks what kind of vibrator.

What will poor Frank do, having to babysit that child in a grown man's body? I wish him luck.

:lmfao :lmfao
Oh my god.
lmao.
I'm sorry, but I found that alarmingly funny when Gerard answered the phone in the room. :XD

Hm, so Frank got rid of all the phones? Hmm...

Update soon.
AND A WEEK BETWEEN UPDATES ISN'T TOO SHORT.
It might actually be too long, don't yah know.
:file:

:tehe:
ily.
:arms:
:cute:

One of my favorite parts of this chapter was definitly describing Gerard as a dead body; I'm not sure why, I just loved it. Another moment I loved was how Gerard just picked the phone up, regardless of what Frank said. It was kind of cocky, which is a side of him we haven't really seen so far.

I think that just because Frank unplugs his phones and such, his "other" life isn't just going to go away that easy. There's going to be some consequences, and I personally can't wait to see what they are.

:XD only gerard would do something like that....
:tehe: he's such a little kid trapped in a grown man's body.....
i love how frankie had to go all parental on him...:lmfao
i wonder what would've happened if he did find out about the Suicide Hotline...

I dont know why but this story kinda reminds me of fight club. gerards apartment goes on fire, reminds me of it.
this is just an amazingly weird story.

your story is just... breath taking.
the story seems like poem-ish and film-ish. this would make into a really good film.
his personality is so different from what I've read in here.
he makes me so mad but at the same time, I love him. xD
you almost like you read his thoughts and know everything about him. I know deep inside that hes a sweet and kind person in this story.

keep up the work! :]

I haven't commented this in awhile.
The last time I did, I was a complete and utter noob. x)

But :cheese: your details... they're... fantastic, for lack of a more appealing word.
And your writing, it just leaves me in this state of awe with so many things running through my head, which is why all of my comments I leave to you are insignificant and lame.

But regardless of how terrible my comments are, keep up the flawless work.
I can't wait for more of this story, seriously.

wait...

wtf?

What happened?

I'm so confuzled on the first part!!

but.. basically... Gee is now staying at Frankles house?

Yay!

Update SPoon!

God you make their imaginary sex sound so amazing... *takes a moment to catch breath* *fails and passes out*