Colder Than My Heart - Comments

Highly Suspicious:

Mm, some stuff's 'boutta go down, huh?

Not just yet. But when it does it'll go down hard :)

Mm, some stuff's 'boutta go down, huh?

@JaffaCakes: Nope nope nope :) I'm so glad people are saying this is different! Like I'm literally smiling. And there's not gonna be a lot of drama if you're thinking clash of the titans. But stuff will go down. Uupdates today.
@theacademyis.: I'm glad you find it intriguing. It's hopefully gonna be a completely different plot than everyone would predict. I hate redictable stories so I'm trying really hard with this one. :D
@erractic: I don't care if I get banned or whatever for cussin. Thank fuck! That's EXACTLY the approch I was looking for :) And in all honesty, I'm team Lisa so I definitely didn't want him breaking up with her because she's bitchy or that dumb stuff. And I'm glad I'm not confusing people and it's all settling into the plot. There will be more to it though, I assure you.

This is definitely a switch from the usual 'rockstar meets sweet new girl and breaks up with bitchy girlfriend' plot that is common among fanfics.

Lisa is trying really hard to maintain her relationship with Alex, despite the fact that he's not settling down. That's definitely a difficult situation to be in.

I really enjoyed this chapter and I'm excited to read more.

Oh, no. I have an odd feeling there's gonna be some interesting shit going on soon.
XP I'm really intruiged with this story, and I'm really excited to see where Lisa fits in all of this.

<3

;o;o I really like this =]
I thought it was gunna be one of those stories where
she used to know alex as a child and they re-met up at warped!
but i likee it, different!

@theacademyis. Me too! I'm gonna force-comment people :)
@Highly Suspicious. Ahaha, Love the N*SYNC quote :')
@erratic. Yeah :) I'm almost sad for what's gonna happen :( And I'm glad you're excited :D
Unfoooortunately updates will be slow today, I have a lot to do :) But I'lll try and comment at any time up 'til midnight UK time. Thank you all <33

Aww.
Alex and Lisa sound adorable together.
I'm excited to read more.

Absolutely love it. Obviously, God must have spent a little more time on you (hahahaha, thanks N*SYNC!) because nobody should be able to write two stories as great as these at the same time.

I think more people should comment... just saying.;D
I feel like such a loser, cause whenever I see you update a story,
I get all happy and excited.

Anyway, I liked the second chapter.
Sarah is... interesting. I like her character, and I like the fact that Alex has a girlfriend,
who he loves and is faithful too, not one of those cliche cheap whores.

<3

erratic:

Sarah seems like a very interesting character.
I can't wait to read more about her.

-subscribes-
XD

In all honesty. Her confidence issue is something that happened to me, so it was easy to write the detail :ii
Thanks for checking it out though :)

Sarah seems like a very interesting character.
I can't wait to read more about her.

-subscribes-
XD

theacademyis.:

WOO! Haha, I'm weird.
Anyway, I was browsing the stories section, and I saw this,
and I was like 'ooh, All Time Low!' and then I saw you were the author,
and I just had to read it.
(:

I'm really excited for this! Keep writing!<3

COMMMENT VIRGINITY!

Aha! Why thank you! I saw your comment and thought 'wonder if it's a DED reader' :D
Thanks! And I'll update Dancing tomorrow, same with this :)

WOO! Haha, I'm weird.
Anyway, I was browsing the stories section, and I saw this,
and I was like 'ooh, All Time Low!' and then I saw you were the author,
and I just had to read it.
(:

I'm really excited for this! Keep writing!<3

COMMMENT VIRGINITY!