Repercussions of Love - Comments

  • MojoMod

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    I would also like a sequel. But I'd prefer if it was mostly about Marc or Jared, or even Jordan. Not Eric and Caitlin. It seems the more you write about them, the more I dislike them. But it's entirely up to you.
    July 8th, 2010 at 08:54pm
  • pretty-glamorous

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    Would love a sequal to thisss!!!!
    Can't wait for yor new storiess!
    July 6th, 2010 at 07:21am
  • DemonSeed

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    Great ending! I would love to see an Eric and Caitlin engagement and/or wedding but it wouldn't be right without some drama. I hate when they fight but I feel like they get closer when they fight and I fall even more in love with them as a couple. They have such a strong relationship that I love to read about! Anyway, looking forward to whatever you have planned!
    July 5th, 2010 at 09:05pm
  • chiquechick20

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    awesome ending! Great writing, I´ve really enjoyed following this story. Please continue with a sequel!
    July 5th, 2010 at 08:47am
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    You know it's going to be an awesome chapter when it starts off with someone tied to the bed. If kinky isn't a sign that something fantastic is about to go down, I don't know what is. I thought it was great that you ended the story with a sneak peek into what's going on with all of the boys and leaves us wondering what's going to happen next. I love Eric and Caitlin together. I really do. And while I want them to just jump right into happily ever after, at the same time it just wouldn't be Eric and Caitlin if that happened. Know what I mean? The drama and the angst just follows them around and honestly, I think they thrive off of it. I think it's what makes them work so well; the intensity of the emotions, the inability to stay away from each other, the bantering back and forth and the feisty tempers and the volatile fights and then the extremely hot makeup sex. I don't think they'd be happy being a boring old married couple. But that's just my opinion.....

    Jared. Goes from sort of awkward virgin to total stud in the blink of an eye. Glad to see that the apple doesn't fall far from the tree and he's finally acting like a true Staal. I was beginning to wonder if he was adopted ;)

    I love Sam and Marc. I know there's not a lot of people that seem to like her, but I tend to favour the dark horse and I don't really like Mary Sue-type OCs (look up Mary Sue girls, you'll know what I mean about there being a lot of Mary Sue's out there) so I think that's why I adore Sam. All of your female characters (except one that I won't name here) for that matter. They're aggressive and assertive and take no shit and they aren't all meek and mild Stepford wife bullshit. They're not perfect and that's what makes them 'perfect', if you get my meaning. Sam is wild and crazy and eccentric and I think so many people in real life are scared of people like that. Most likely because they wish they had the balls to be that way.

    Jordan. Jordan. Jordan. I feel bad for the girlfriend. Well, now ex girlfriend. I don't think it's fair for any woman to have compete with another and I think he needs to grow up and find someone that he'll love. Someone that won't tolerate his shit and put her foot down. I'm up to the challenge....

    I already said what needed to be said about Caitlin and Eric.....

    I truly loved this story and I'll miss it. And whatever you chose to do with a sequel (if you choose to do one, that is) I will support you a hundred million percent!

    <3
    July 5th, 2010 at 05:42am
  • Jessica;

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    Ohh, I'm gonna miss this.
    I would DEFINITELY read a sequel if you wrote one.
    It's all up to you, though.
    It's your creation.
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    July 4th, 2010 at 11:51pm
  • cmhsharkgrl19

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    omg sequel!!!!!!! i like eric and caitlin together, but a lil drama might be nice... just nothin too terrible. jor needs someone totally down to earth who's tough enough to deal with his shit and keep him in line.
    July 4th, 2010 at 09:35pm
  • mully17

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    Ok first off I see a wedding for Caitlin and Eric and it can be filled with drama! Marc and Sam are cute together! Jareds hillarous gotta love him! And jordan well he needs a girl like Caitlin one that is as wild as him but keeps him in line!

    Also when you start all your new stories make sure to tell me please!!!!
    July 4th, 2010 at 09:36am
  • Rylie_

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    Gawd, I'm going to miss getting excited for an update of this. But, I do have the sequel to look forward to!

    So Eric and Caitlin are made for each other. After all they've been though, it's time for them to be together for good. Now Jordy, I think he'll find his girl someday. She may play hard to get but I think he needs that.

    You're an amazing writer. I can't wait to see what you put out next. You'll always have me as a loyal reader.
    July 4th, 2010 at 06:03am
  • layna loves her caps

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    I've loved this story. The way you write the Staals is just fantastic. As for the questions:

    Caitlin and Eric definitely belong together. There's no need to add more drama around them. And of they just so hapepen to have a fight, I'm sure she's always welcome back with Jordan.

    As for Jordan, I'm not sure who his perfect girl is. For some reason I feel like she would someone really into settling down and having a family (maybe she'd already have a kid) and there would just be something in him that realizes she's the one and it's time to settle down. Weird and cliche I know, but that's what came to mind.

    Can't wait for the sequel!
    July 4th, 2010 at 05:30am
  • Ally4647

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    such a good story...hope you do another sequel :)
    July 4th, 2010 at 03:23am
  • headintheclouds

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    Loved the ending!!
    I think Eric and Caitlin deserve to be happy TOGETHER. just saying.
    And Jordan, well there has to be a girl out there that he can fall in love with.
    Looking forward to the sequel!!!
    July 4th, 2010 at 01:14am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    I loved this story! what a great ending!
    Caitlin and Eric deserve to be happy in the sequel! obviously they should have some drama, but no splitting up! and I'm very curious to see what kind of girl is gonna be right for Jordan! of course Marc and Sam have to stay together, they're perfect for each other! and I can't wait to see what's gonna go on with Jared and Grace!
    can't wait for your other stories and the sequel for this!
    July 4th, 2010 at 12:21am
  • JustCallMeTrouble37

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    Sorry - totally great end to a great story. Whoops!
    July 4th, 2010 at 12:07am
  • JustCallMeTrouble37

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    Torpor great end to a brilliant story. Well done.
    July 4th, 2010 at 12:06am
  • MissLis

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    you definitely CANNOT split Eric and Caitlin up again.
    that just... no. NO.
    because we already went through so much fucking trouble with them, now that they've finally figured it out, after TWO WHOLE STORIES!!!, they need to be together.

    throw as much shit at them as you can come up with though :P *evil cackle*
    that'd be awesome haha
    you know, test them on how firm and solid they stand in their newfound relationship... because I think there's a lot of things they need to learn and experience, now that they're finally really together :)

    and I wouldn't mind more Marc and Sam, to be honest :) but it depends on the layout of the new sequel, whether they fit in there still or not... but with how those two stories went, I figure you're going to keep that style and then it would fit :)
    July 3rd, 2010 at 11:54pm
  • Addyliners

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    This was sinfully good! Lovely, lovely. Never have I expected wine to be this sensual. You gave a whole new meaning to red win.

    Will be waiting and anticipating!
    June 28th, 2010 at 11:27pm
  • Chickydee6

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    Well then.....that's all I can say.
    More soon please!
    June 27th, 2010 at 01:28am
  • Jessica;

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    Hotness!
    I'm going to be sad to see this end but I'm excited for a sequel!
    <3
    June 26th, 2010 at 11:23pm
  • elizabeth87

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    Love your story its one of the best story on here about the staals. hope you keep writing!!!
    June 25th, 2010 at 01:26am