You Can't Have Me - Comments

Really Brian what the eff is wrong with him?!
I hope he doesn't really do anything with that bitch at the bar either. Also I think the problem with not getting much feedback anymore is possibly the space between the updates? Imean it doesn't bother me much but to others it might. I do have a suggestion though if you don't mind me saying. Maybe take a week or so to finish the eight chapters that you planned on doing and post them periodically. I understand how you are with the motivation stuff, I consider a lot what peole have to say and the more I get the more I want to give back to then. But at the same time it's your story write because of that reason alone. And if you ever need any help because you get stuck or have writers block, let's know maybe I could come up with something to help you out. I hoe this helps you lots
Can't wait for more
<3 Michele

New layout still baffles Iggy. (And I only say 'baffles' because I cannot think of a different word to use.)

Wow, Grampaa, you are bipolar. First everything's all fine, and sort of lovey dovey and shit. And then, BAM! Here comes a giant wave anger and bitchiness.

*gasp* you did not just make me hate Brian. You're not allowed to do that shit, Grampaa. Not allowed.

Uuuuuuuuuugggggggghhhhhhhhhhhh, Ashleigh... You also can't be all mean and bitchy, and then make me like him again. That goes against two rules!

But calling Johnny an 'angry bassist' cheered me up a bit. You're still not in the clear, but you know, it's a teenie bit better now :)

Ooh, Johnny's being a little bipolar too, eh? First all 'Imma murder your ass' and then suddenly 'It's still fixable'. WHAT ARE YOU ON, GRAMPAA? (And don't say 'Rice Bubbles' again.)

Ugh, Iggy hates knowing what's going to happen with him and Slutty Mc...Slutface over there. (Shut up, there isn't one ounce of creativity in me right now.)

:O
Grampaa doesn't get as much feedback as before? Well Iggy gets pretty much no feedback, so shut it.

...Yes, I can sympathize. But I'm not in the mood for it right now, so you'll have to get by without it.

(And sorry for this being a tad shorter than usual. (If it is, I forgot what my length standards are right now...))

love love love the story please update or create a sequal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i loved your story. i really can not wait for more.
and i love the sappy hopeless romantic-ness haha
:D

Aw hun, I loved it! It was totally corny, but so cute and romantic! It made me tear up a little, haha. Can't wait for more! More soon? And P.S...got Nightmare...it's awesome! :D

Irri - ireevo - iravokab - irrevocably!
(I'm sorry, the use of a big word that I haven't seen before caught me off guard... And I'm generally very stupid when I've been caught off guard... SHUTUP!)

Dude, stop making her sound so deep. You're making me feel as shallow as the bitches who write teen magazines. (And I assume you realize how shallow that shit is.)

ZOMG ASHLEIGH, WOULD YOU FIND IT STRANGE IF I CALLED YOU A ROMANTIC?!?!?!?!
Fuck it, Imma do it anyways, you fucking romantic :)
That's just so... and all like... ohh, fuck you. How the hell am I supposed to write a bunch of lovey dovey shit now? I'll just be all like 'Pssh, this is shit. Need proof, you dumbfuck? You Can't Have Me, chapter 36.'

HAHAHAHA, IT IS TIME TO GET IT ON. WE MUST DO THAT ASHLEIGH, WE FUCKING MUST.

Aww, you so corny :)
That's all I have to say about the rest of the chapter, my amazingly corny evil hypothetical twin.
I don't even know how much sense that made... I used up all my brainjuice during Physics D:

Hehehe, Iggy must always quote the stuff line. Why? It's just... I don't even know. "Stuffy stuff" is weird, but "Stuff that involves stuff" is just amazing.

WHAAAT? IGGY GETS A NEW SAND BUCKET? YOU'RE THE BEST GRAMPAA EVERR!!!
(Haha, anyone else who reads this will think we're bonkers (Yes, motherfucking bonkers. Get over it.))

What the fuck, Ashleigh? Pigs don't need sunscreen. We're just too cool for that shit.

And you know, just because of how corny and romantic (and all trippy and shit) this chapter is, I do not know how you'll pull off - *ahem* that thing we talked about before. (Hahaha, I feel so smart and superior, just 'cause I'm the only one who knows. Share an evil laugh? Whatever, I can do it with or without you. So... MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! (.. Just don't ask. I'm tired and I have no brainjuice.))

ENJOY THE LONGASS COMMENT!
And BRB, WMD's gunna be out soon (hopefully... I think I'll avoid tumblr until the prologue's posted and the first chapter is done...)

LOVED ITTTTTTTTT
I WAS AWWWWINGGGGGG
LIKE EVERY FREAKIN MINUTE!!!!!
This is my favorite story on mibba right now, and im sad its gonna end...
only 7 more chapters, but its for the best i suppose.
7 chapters.... hmm... more drama??!! noo.. no drama with them, i'll die
:/
I LOVEEEE THEIR NEW ALBUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fiction is....ahhhmazing
:]

i loved this update
it was totally corny but i love the corniness
Love this line ------> 'And it was then, in that moment of happiness, that I realized that it didn’t matter that fairy tales didn’t exist. Because I had found my own.'

totally adorable
<3 Michele

Corny!! *sniffles* I hate corny..but that had such...ech...tears in...Brian was crying...that's just sweetness within it's self! xD
Hehe! ^.^
They still should get hitched...be tadramda man! :D

And yus, I have Nightmare too!! :D I got it the Saturday before it was officially released!! xD

that chapter SO wasnt corny my god are you kidding me? it was GORGEOUS i loved it!!!! and congratulations your like the only person to update in months (for me)

but yupppppp great update, excellent i think, cant wait for the rest/ending :) gunna be good i reckons

*Whimpers* Y-y-you've got me worried, i-is this the final chapter? I-I mean, the reason I fell in love with a7x is because of this story, i-it's not is it?

Aw I thought this was such a cute chapter! Brian is just way too adorable. More soon?

Hmm, you know what I haven't done in a while? Quoted some of your shit. (And I don't mean shit as a bad thing, just like, I didn't wanna say stuff. I'd just end up being all "...Stuffy stuff... You know, stuff that involves stuff...." and I'm just not in the mood today.)

And, not gunna lie, I saw the author's note first, so I am here to prove you wrong :)

My tears had long ago dried, but my body continued to shake and sweat, as if reminding myself of the situation I had been in. This is just amazing. In fact the whole paragraph is (It's the thrid from the top, I believe. Go reread that. NOW.)

‘I’m staying with Abby,’ he said strongly, although I could hear to small hint of desperation that filled his voice. The experience had been almost as damaging for him as it had been for me, and I knew that more than anything he needed to stay with me to make sure I was safe and alright.
Don't even bother asking why, I just love this.
... I'm serious, do not question it.

Hahaha, 'Yes sir.' I just love you for that. I can totally see Brian doing something like that to Johnny :)

Okay, every little thing she said about marriage is just amazing. Just pure genius.

So shut up, Ashleigh, you haven't lost a thing.

And by the way, I don't think you've replied to any of my comments! On any stories!
What a mean way to treat 'Iggy Piggy.'

... Fuck this, I'm going to the beach.

so i just spent the last few hours reading this and i am HOOKED. i cant wait for more. :D <3

Awe...!!!!

its good. i really liked this chapter

Pss, I think they should *nods*
Like...now...not the future butchy....:D
Yup, they should!!
Although...would be mushy and all that crap...still....they should.

ohhhh i loved this chapter!!!!
You havent lost anything
still fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh i hopes they get married!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
=DDDDDDDD
cant wait for next update, it should come sooner then later!!!!!!!!
But I'm being a hypocrite right now, I take forever to update mine
but still, update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(I love your descriptions and imagery, :])

it was an amazing chapter
i hope they get married too
=D
<3 Michele

oh also i agree with hotranger69 or w.e. it was
sequel might ruin it, i mean i want one and all but i think its like.......
all those stupid extra saws?
the unnecessary more toy storys
its like... you should have just stopped.
we all want more, but there is not much more u can do that can live up to this master piece
i want more, but i have plenty of your stories to read, and im sure ill fall in love with them just as much
you write so much.... idk how u do it. i think you should go...cough... update all your other ones instead, make a chapter or two more, and an epilogue, and let there story end
but..... if u want to go ahead, i will follow, though maybe not as enthusiastically..... my standards will be exceptionally high!!!