You Can't Have Me - Comments

So, I know this has been over for a while & I've been suscribed for God knows how long & since I'm cleaning mu subscriptions, I stumble on this one & let me just tell you, I absolutely & utterly loved this story. I'm not gonna lie, Abby went through a lot of things & there were times when I wanted to slap her cuz she made me so mad, but I loved the character & everything about it. My favorite chapter was the one of the formal Brian arranged for her... I'm really corny & I loved that chapter to no end. (I read it 3 times) Hahahahaha!!!! But I just wanted to let you know that I think you did an amazing job, loved the ending (I'm a hopeless romantic that loves happy endings) & I can't wait to be able to read more of your stuff. I think you're a great writer. Congrats.

Loved it! I'm so sad that this story is over, but man was it good!

This was absolutely amazing! Really well written and had a brilliant plot.
Honestly one of the best stories I've read on here, and I've read quite a lot.
Well done you! <3

omg! okay its like 4:20 am and i just finished reading your whole story.
I absolutely loved it!
The way you wrote it gave the story so much meaning and emotion.
You had me in tears in almost every chapter, no lie.
I like it when stories have emotional parts that actually make you overwhelmed with emotions.
You are a brilliant writer:]

Ugh. I just saw my earlier comment, and I'm just like, 'Woah woah WOAH. Back this shit up. What badass motherfunger has that theme? That font colour is boos. I need that colour. And I swear to God, I will ge--Oh. Never mind then. I'm the BAMF. That's cool.'
[/I bet you know who this is even if you don't recognize the username. Oh, lawl. The username probably gave me away. Lulululululululululululululululululululzin']

[/...yeah, 'lulzin']

Wow, Grampaa. You are so cheesy. Like, seriously. You are the master of cheesiness. Not even joking there. You just are. [/don't even try to deny it. Iggy is no fool]

You know what I really hate? When really good writers comtinually insist that they're and their chapters are shit. *stares at you pointedly* That just really irks me, you know? It's like, my number one pet peeve - well, behind chewing with your mouth open, of course. I already know you're eating, I don't need to see the food, or hear you chew. Kthxbai.

Siriusly, though, this is amazing. Like, can I steal your writing abilities for myself? I'd even steal your updating abilities, bro. I'm seriously lacking in those two departments.
My planning skills are boss, though. In under two hours, I looked over countless maps to find 147 cities that my unsub passed through in chronological order from when Alyssa was like 15 to 25. Those skills are just amazing.

[/tooting my own horn like my life depends on it]

Anyways, though, it's weird that this story is over. It's the first one I read by you. Does that not bother you as much as it bothers me, or...?
[/it bothers me to no end, by the way]

Although, I would have killed you had you dragged it on any longer. And not just because you update sporadically, but because it's already pretty fung long.

Yeah.
[/excuse this shit comment - even I don't know what's wrong with me this time]
[/I'm not even tired]
[/it may be because my brain is still in fangirl overload from all the shematthew stuff]
[/...assholes. It's like they knew that this would kill me]

...
Yeah. BYES!

NOOO! *Cries forever* I haven't been this sad since Dobby died! NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! WHY?! I never wanted YCHM to ever end! WHY, WHY, WHY, WHY, WHY, WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! :(

:( I'm gonna miss this story
but i am looking forward to more that you are writing
<3 Michele

***SPOILER**** I'm still reading the chapter, but when Brian "Will you marry me?" I almost squealed like a pig in a slaughter house!! Hmmm, I wonder what would Michelle say?

Awwww that was sweet :)

Awesome chapter as always! But I can't believe this will be over soon! I will be so sad, but at least you are writing new ones. More soon, please?

AWE!!! I am so happy that they are getting married!!!
Please update soon
<3 Michele

Awww so damn sweet<3! I can't wait to read the epilogue ^^

Hope you are doing well and I loved the update! Great job ^+^

awesometacular!!

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER SO EFFIN' MUCH! Johnny finally grows a pair, good for you Johnny (!) I took a break from Mibba for a couple of weeks....Which felt like years, I'm back now and I got more bullets and puppies!! Hehe, Good to be back! ;)

im like dying right now haha
cant wait til the next one!

GUESS WHO'S FINALLY READING THIS?!
IGGGGGGYY!

...Yeah :)
'Cause she's awesome. (And because she is now morally obliged to comment on every update of every story... (I hate myself for commenting so damn much... I has other shit to do, too...))

...I thought you said your readers would hate you for having her and Kyle together. But I thought you meant like kissing and being all 'I luurves you!' to each other. Not just 'Oh hey. Go get the door, is my brother... ZOMG, I LOVE YOU, BRI BRI! Oh, yeah, bye Kyle.'

But anyways, it was good.
And yes, I'm rushing this comment, because it's cutting into my Tumblr time, and I'm also talking to you on Messenger.

So, the descriptions were great. (Damn you. Damn you to hell, for being so fung good.) And it was all sappy, and enjoyable.
AND SHUT UP ABOUT US GETTING SICK OF IT.

God.
Can't you say one positive thing about this story? Well, besides something like 'It's almost over.' Because let's face it, that's not what I meant by 'positive'.

So, good job!
BYE!

I'm liking this story, it's taken me a couple days to read up to the last chapter updated but for one thing I'm not sick of it. I really hope you do continue and since I'm too lazy to go back through the chapters, are you writing a sequel for this?

I'm so happy that things got cleared with them!!!!!:) they should be together. Im sad that this story is going to be over soon:(

I literally sat down & read this today, I haven't done anything else ha. This story is awesome, update soon please! :)

Aw I loved it as always, hun! And I am soooo glad that they are back together now. More soon, please?