September 28th, 2010 at 04:04am
so.... several different thoughts raced at me randomly, till the very end did i have my final thoughts
okai so play by play:
okai shes crying like a fucking pussy, little fucking girl who can go suck my dick
god yeah i hate abby, no question about it
SHE FUCKIN BOTHERS ME everything
u little piece of shit. u should know what to fuckin do not ask lacey
next brians part......
good description i might say, i thought that was good
sounded like rape
okai abbys part/brians
YOU FUCKIN ASSHOLE PUSSY BITCH SLUT. yeah u obviously dont love gates as much as u elt on b/c u believe that shit. that part was cliche and repetitive, but i thought it fit.
god u little bitch u dont deserve him. he is there for u only, and u believe every fucken thing. god suck my 13 inch cock u mother fucken saggy pussy. i hope u choke on my jizz as u deep throat me, little bitch
so yeah i wanted her to find him at first, then when she was all like "cliche crying and shit" putting his ring down and stuff, i was like fuck no, leave u whiny ass cocksucker.
yeah u go to kyles house and u really cheat on brian.
i want u to never ever get brian for some reason, and u live in pain for the rest of ur life crying bitch.
last thoughts:
ABBY IS A SLUTTY ASS HOE WHOREO FUCKIN COCKSUCKING ANAL-FUCKING HOBO-BLOWING WHINY SAGGY MUSHY OLD PUSSY WHO CRYS AT FUCKIN EVERY STUPID ASS THING BECAUSE HER HORMONES ARE EVEN WORSE THEN JUSTIN BIEBERS!!!!!!
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Another update!
I think it's really well-written, and unique in the sense that they haven't had sex yet or anything.
Wow, good for you. I'm actually hoping to take a few college/university level courses in my senior year. But can you please tell me exactly when I called you stupid? Yes, I said 'Bad grammar and stupidity...' but, just as with 'bad grammar,' I was referring to the comment.
It'd be stupid in itself for me to call you stupid, for the exact reason you said. I don't go around messing around with people I don't know. Therefore, I wouldn't call you stupid, especially not somewhere where you could easily see it.
Little kid? Little kid? Wow, I'm guessing you consider yourself pretty damn little then, too. I'm 15, you're 17. Forgive me for thinking that there isn't much of a gap between ages.
Oh, and please tell me how fighting via story comment threads helps anything. I'm pretty sure it's only going to annoy the writer, and it sure isn't going to do anything for me. But, I guess if you see it that way, then so be it.
Really? I'm not afraid of you. Just as I'm sure you're not afraid of me. In all honesty, I don't fear people that I never come in contact with. You're just another person behind a computer screen to me. And I doubt that that will ever change.
Honestly, I'm sorry if I touched a nerve with you, but all this 'Bring it on, bitch!' shit is taking things a little far, don't you think?
@ Old McDonald
You've gotta stop having such good descriptions. You have to. I'm actually serious here Grampaa. You're not just making Iggy look bad, you're making her look terrible.
Although it is good.
At the very least, I'm not as much of a softie as I was when I first started reading this; I'm not going to burst out into tears upon reading it.
Okay, I like Lacey in this. That's just... I don't know. I'm at that 'out-of-brain-juice' stage already. But I did do lots of math, so I suppose it only makes sense.
Zomg, Brian's part is so fung amazing.
*Ah-maze-zing.
That was described perfectly. Once again, you've got hammy ol' Iggy green with envy, just wishing she could write like you.
Otay, I knew that was coming, but NONONONONONONONONONONO!!!
You is so mean...
(Even though Iggy over here is the mastermind behind it all...)
Aw, Iggy gets no reply. Oh well. This'll be long enough anyways.
GE is over, Ashleigh. Less stories to focus on, now. Even if it is only one less.
And you've got me doing all your dirty work! Judging, making layouts. No, it does not matter that lifeless Iggy offered to. I'm still using it against you.