How Can You Look at Me and Say That You Don't Love Me? - Comments

Oh wow, typical Tom. "I know I am." So something he would say.
Nice.

Ironic that they both end up being famous. I have a feeling this is going to cause major problems between the bands...

Tom's so blunt XD
"I wanted to call you up, so I am.”

Story:

The emotion and the meaning behind their songs was like, mind blowing.

Exactly! Gah, one reason I'm in love with this band <3

I can't wait until they finally see each other in person!
Bill is -more than likely- going to spazz and well, I'm not quite sure what the others are going to do, but I'm excited =]

Ch. 1

The only criticism I have for this one is to put spaces in between quotes/songs.
It's easier to read and decipher who's speaking.
(it also makes the chapters look longer )

Ooooh Tom's going to be touring with Lizzie!
This should be incredibly interesting.
Question: Does Lizzie know Tom is in Tokio Hotel?

Bill's Skittle fight with the band is epic!
I can totally picture them fighting like that. I enjoy when stories are realistic like that.
Great start!

YAY I am with John lolz. Love ya Tomi!
Great as always dude Mike is an angry son of a bitch lmao

Your story is like my new one (that's not posted yet...) I'm the lead guitarist in mine, too! XD
Ok I just had to share that info first. I'm not even done with the first chapter... but I felt you should know =]
*goes back to reading*

lol ok 3 things.
1) TOM FARTED! lol i knew in some story somewhere somebody was gonna have some normal body functions.
2)ummmm. i forget number 2
but 3)Dont get Mike Greggors angry

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QuoteHe wrenched it open and Aislinn came tumbling in, falling into Mike as she did. Mike pushed her out of the way and stormed off down the hall.

Bahahahha, at least I didn't fall! :D

ON THE FLOOR!

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And believe me, it was a relief to be a guy again.

Ahahah when taken out of context, that sounds so bad. XD

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We ordered room service. Bill was eating his food, and I decided to be really mean. I was standing on the opposite side of the room. I farted and walked over to Bill and sat down.
“Hey, can I have some?” I asked, pointing to his plate of spaghetti.
“Sure…UGH! DUDE! I WAS EATING! DID YOU HAVE TO DO THAT?” he shouted after smelling the air around him.

Bahahhaa poor Bill!!!! XD

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pushed it away, disgusted. “Ew, I can taste it!” He said.

*barfs* that's sick, Tom

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John snapped out of his daze. “Oh, that. That was Syd, my girlfriend.”

Awww, yay John's not alone. :]

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If you want the rest of my bio, look it up on the internet.” Gustav said.

Ahahha Gutsi's a dork. XD But it's true. XDD

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“No, it wasn’t.” I said.
“Yeah, it was.” He argued. “What was the point?”
I stood as well. “I figured that I would get to know you guys a little better.” I said calmly.
“Why now? What? Are you paranoid?” Mike asked.
My face burned. “No. I just wanted to get a better understanding of you two.” I said, trying to stay calm.

Uh oh they're gonna fight.... >.<

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Bill came between us. “Guys, chill out.” he said.

Yes, Bill's right, just chill...

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Mike pushed Bill out of the way. Bill went backwards and landed on the floor.

........... Mike's dead.

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Big mistake on Mike’s part. I got in his face.

Yup, that's why. XD That's Tom's baby brother!

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He wrenched it open and Aislinn came tumbling in, falling into Mike as she did. Mike pushed her out of the way and stormed off down the hall.

Bahahahha, at least I didn't fall! :D

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“Yeah, I’m fine. I’m going to go calm myself down and see if Aislinn’s okay.” I said, leaving the room. I went in the opposite direction as Mike did.

Heehee, Tom's gonna make sure I'm ok. x]

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I wasn’t angry at Mike. He defended himself, just as I would in the same situation. I was, however, peeved about the fact that he shoved my baby brother. All Bill was trying to do, was defuse the situation, before we got into a fist fight. Which happened anyway. Mike was right, he did have a temper, and so did I. I just hoped that it wouldn’t get in the way of our friendship.

Hopefully it won't cause that could just get so awkward. But Mike should have known not to mess with Bill...

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I made a note to myself: Do not piss off Mike Greggors.

Ahahhaaha favorite line in the chapter. XD

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This is going to the real Aislinn. Please read her story, "Instant Star" and do comment.

:D I loves you my twinnie! x] No one ever comments it. ;-; But I'm glad you do! :D

Loved the chapter! Tom and Mike fighting.. *shivers* that could get scary. >.>
But I hope they're okay. :]
Can't wait for an update!

Damn, that got nasty fast.
=D
I totally wasn't expecting that.
Hope everything goes okay for them!

Loved the update!
Update soon!

<3

Sounds really interesting. It seems from all the favorite lines comments from Ich.Werde.Fliegen.Weg; I'm not going to able to stop laughing on my own, so can't wait to read those. I did find something that was confusing me though: {Seven_String: It was! God, I was lucky to have gotten tickets. You like Riot City?
TK1989: My brother does. He’s a really big fan.
Seven_String: Lol. Yeah. I g2g. Can we trade numbers; I’m going on tour soon and will be out of touch.} Why did she say that she was lucky to have gotten the tickets then go right into saying that she's going to tour soon *which I understand*; it's just the tickets part, I don't. Well anyways, awesome start. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

SEEEE I told you I would read it!!!
And it was goooooooooddddd
Hehee DING DONG DITCH!

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Next thing I knew, she had scissors! I screamed loudly and practically jumped to the other side of the room.

Oh God I would do that! I don't know if I'd trust someone I just met to cut my hair!!

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I shook my head furiously. “No! You were going to kill my hair!”
Lizzie laughed. “It’s already dead you moron! Let her cut it. She does do a great job.”

Ahahah brain reading, my twinnie! You're great at it. XD
I always say things will get killed. Even things that are already dead. XD

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I winced with each snip.

0.0 *really does do that when I get my hair cut*

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My hair that was once down my back was now layered above my shoulders. It was fluffy and neat. The cut was perfect and it actually complimented my beauty. My light tanned skin and brown eyes looked even more radiant with my new hair.

I don't know if I told you, but I've actually been wanting to cut my hair! XD

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“Truth or dare…” Natasha smirked.

Oh God!
I don't see this ending well! >.>

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“Oh god!” I laughed and joined the girl’s on the floor.

Ahhahah predicted me again! XD

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Lisa laughed. “Well, first, he took me to a fancy restaurant, trying to impress me, but the food was nasty, so we went out for something else. We had pizza instead. We looked so out of place in the pizza joint, because we were all dressed up. Then he took my sight seeing and since it was so cold, he gave me his jacket. Then, we walked around town, talking and laughing. Then we went to a club and danced the night away.” She said. “Then, we went back to the hotel, via limo. It was like the prom night I never had.”

Awwww, that sounds so sweet. x]
You're making me want to date Geo..... Ahahah Jk! He's all yours. XD

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Lisa blushed and started on me. “Truth or dare, Aislinn?” she said.

Oh scheisse, I've never liked this game. It always ends in trouble. >.>

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“I dare you to…play ding-dong-ditch on the boys.”
I gulped.

*gulps* You see?!?! XD

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She is my Twinny and I love her to death!

Yay!! :D Me loves you too, twinnie! x]

Ya you are constantly just reading my mind!!
I swear the thing I say and do in this story are things I really would say and do!!
Anyways... loved it! x]
I'm nervous about the ding-dong-ditching. *bites nails* knowing me, I'll trip trying to run away and end up laying on the floor as the boys come out. >.<
Ahahha well I can't wait to read th next chapter!! :D

lol ding dong ditch! i haven't played that in a long time...*gets a good idea* thanks!

AHH!!! i <3 it!!!!!!!!

YES I DOO!!!!
I LOVE YOU BILLA!!!!!!

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I noticed that Aislinn wasn’t sitting with anyone and she kept looking at her phone as if it were going to bite her.

o.o I swear you must like steal from my brain for this story. I would SO do that.

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“Bist du okay?” I asked.
“Come again?” she asked.

Bahahahaha!! True, true! Me+ German= fail. XDD

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Aislinn brightened up a great deal. “Really? New York? Wow!” she said.

O.O Brain stealing again! How did you know I love New York?!

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Aislinn was looking scared as Lisa talked the poor girl’s ear off.

XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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which was coincidentally room 483

Ahahahah cool! :D

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Her height was a slight problem because with me being 5’6 and her being about 5’9, she towered over me.

0.0 You made me tall!!! :D

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“Can I cut your hair?” she asked.
Aislinn choked on her ice cream, spewing it all over the floor. “What?”
“I want to cut and style your hair! I’m certified in the States to do hair.” Lisa said.
Aislinn looked frightened. “Um, I guess so…”

Uh oh this can not be good! XDDDD

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I exchanged looks with my sister. “Uh-oh!” is what we both thought. “This can’t end well.”

Ahahaha I was just thinking that. XDD

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This chapter goes to the real life Aislinn! IchWerdeFliegienWeg. (I think I did that right)

Yay! :D And you got close. XD It's Ich.WerdeFliegen.Weg.
XD You just forgot the dots. At least you spelled it right! :D I usually don't. XDD

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next chapter will include the mentioning of a new character. That person knows who they are!

*gasp* Who is it?!?!

I can't wait until the next chapter!! I really love how you make me character. x] A lot of the stuff you have her do is stuff I actually would do!! :D
Anyway... I loved it as usual and like I said, I can't wait for the next chapter. :D

Well it took you lng enough Tomi I swear! Teehee so yeah you know the deal, more updates soon or I come and slap the hyper outa you!

i love Aislinn! can't wait for more.

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Aislinn’s POV

*squeeeee*!!

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Oh, how I longed for curls, but my father never allowed them. I was only seventeen and still a child to him. My dad hated everything I did. He hated my guitar, my talent, my taste in music; the man was a total Nazi about my life. MY life!

All true!!!
....... Do you know my dad or what? O.o

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I picked the phone back up. “Um, do you have the right number?” I asked.

Yup that'd be the first thing I'd say. XD

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as well as my Gibson Les Paul Standard.

Tom's favorite! x]

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I walked out the door and into the cold. I walked my way into a new life, filled with freedom and free of pain.

Oh God you have no idea how much you made me wish I could really do something like that with this line.

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I couldn’t believe my luck. I was going to be apart of my favorite band, and I was going to meet the band that had saved my life countless times before.

*died imagining that*
and not just the TH-ness of it. It'd be just amazing. :]

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Then, I saw the one, the only, Tom Kaulitz.

*faints*

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He came up behind Lizzie and put his arm around her.

*alas it was not meant to be*

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“What kind of guitar do you have?” Tom asked.
“A Gibson les Paul Standard.” I replied.
“Hey! Me too!” he said.

Ahaha of course. Gotta love Tomi's guitar. x]

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I smiled and said: “Thank you, so much. I hope that you won’t regret adding me to the band.”

Gah!! I can't wait for more!!!!!

You plugged my story again. x] Thanks.
I feel selfish having a chapter for me. >.> But I really liked it at the same time. :D
Great job once again. I love this story. x]

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I was moving with the crowd as Tom’s arms wrapped around my waist. I turned and beamed at him. I kissed him full on the mouth. He pulled away, smiling.

Ahaha, you know what I was thinking here. XDD

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Tom listened to the words and leaned in towards me and said: “I never want to be in a world without you.”

Awwww. x] that was so cute!! I love when Tom says adorable things like that. x]

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He had stolen a pair of my baggiest Tripp pants

:D I love Tom in Tripps! [Now that I finally know what they are. XD

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and one of my lip rings.

Sharing lip rings. :D You make me want to try these things.... >.>

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“Yeah, but I haven’t met my complete idols before!” I said.
“I’m not your idol?” he said cockily.
“No Tom, you’re my boyfriend.” I said, playfully hitting his arm.
Tom beamed. “I’m your boyfriend?” he said in a voice that sounded like a child who just got a cookie for dinner.
“I’d like to hope so.” I said.

Hahahahaha Tom's not her idol. XD
Wah! Tom's her boyfriend!! :D

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“We know this girl; she’s like, a virtuoso guitar player,” Aki said.
Lauri nodded. “Her name says Aislinn.” He said.

Gah! Me! :D

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“Are we going back to the hotel?” Tashy asked, with her head on Bill’s shoulder.
Tom shook his head. “No, we are going to go shopping.”

Ahahah this can't be good! XDDD

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“SHOPPING! SHOPPING! SHOPPING!” Bill chanted. He was acting like a child being refused a toy.
“FINE! Stop acting like a two year old!” I barked.
“Yay! I win!” Bill said triumphantly.

Two year old? Yup that's Bill. XDDD

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“Wow. What two year olds we’re related to.” Tom said in a wow tone.
“Pfft…I know right. We should leave them here.” I joked.
“Let’s go.” Tom said seriously.

Ahahaha Tom loves ditching people! XD

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Tom and I walked hand-in-hand out the door and walked along the sidewalk

*imagines* x] I wish that was me. x]

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Before I could react, he kissed me. It was a long, passion filled kiss.

I'll just let you imagine what I thought here. x]

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“EW! NO BABY MAKING!” we heard Bill shout. We broke apart and turned.
“Bill, you arschloch!” Tom shouted. Bill poked out his tongue and put his hands on his hips. “Well, stop trying to make babies in the middle of Finland.”

Ahahahaha Love that. XDDDD

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I lulled myself to sleep with thoughts of everything we had done that night. I knew that the following morning, I would have to call this Aislinn girl.

...... :D

Loved the chapter! The date was cute. Bill and Tashy are so alike. :]
And Tom and Lizzie are just adorable.
Can't wait for more. :D

awww tom und lizzie had a cute moment. loved it. who will this Aislinn girl be? i wonder if she'll cause drama...