How Can You Look at Me and Say That You Don't Love Me? - Comments

OH BTW GOOD CHAPTER!

Fuck yeah man!!! Hey fuck you Tommy! I wanted another chapter sooooo its only natural I bug the hell outa you!

YAY !!!! Bam was in that one I fucking looooveee BAM hehe just look at my damn profle its about him lol funny ass chapter!

yay! i love that gusti had a part. lol drunken ice skateing?! Bam was halarious.

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Mike, John, and I sat in our hotel room, playing cards, bored as hell. It was all we could do. We couldn’t watch TV, because it was all in Finnish.

Ahaha they got left behind!! That sucks! XDD

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“I’m sick of being in the back! Everyone else is out having fun, and we are here.” He continued. “I want to see some action!”

Uh-oh I'm nervous about this action they're going to see! XD

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“To friends and our music.”

Aw, I really liked that line for some reason. :]

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Ville nodded and said. “Like what?”
Mike stood as well. “Let’s ice skate!” Bam agreed and slapped him a high-five as John and I exchanged terrified looks. Drunken ice-staking?

0.0 Oh God this can't end well. >.>

Uh I'm a little confused about who Ville and Bam are. Are they just friends of the guys or are they famous people I should, but don't recognise? >.<;

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Bam fell immediately on his ass and Mike did the same when he started laughing. John made an attempt to make it around the floor, but only got half way around before knocking into another person. Ville was doing a smooth job of not falling flat on his behind. I, however, was not so successful. I fell the moment my foot hit the ice.

Bahhhahaahh all of that just described me at an ice rink. XDDDD

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“Having fun?” he grinned drunkenly.
“Yeah, but my ass hurts.” I said.

That's what I said too!! XDDDD

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“Ouchies! I hurt my ass. Gustav, can you kiss it all better?” he said.
“Ewwie!” I giggled. “Bam that’s nasty!”

0.0 Woah....

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I could shit a rainbow and fart butterflies.” He grinned. John never said anything that random and retarded.

BAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA oh God hat was priceless!! XD

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“I WANT TO STRIP OFF ALL MY CLOTHES AND RUN NAKED THROUGH FINLAND!” He shouted

0.0

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“No, you will not run outside naked!”

XD Ok good cause that could have ended badly! XD

I liked it! You really made it a fun boys night out chapter. :]
And hearing from Gustav was interesting... in a GOOD way. :D
Can't wait for the next chapter. :]

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her and Bill’s relationship skyrocketed.

Aw! x]

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which with some arguing; Tom let me pay for it myself.

Ahaha he's trying to be "the guy" and pay for her stuff. That definitely sounds like a Tom thing to do. XD

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As for Lisa and Georg, they’d gone out for the evening and told no one of their whereabouts.

Oooooooooo! :D They're hitting it off nicely!

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You know how impatient Tom is!

Hahaha *could make sexTom joke, but won't* XDD

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I chose to go for comfort than style. I figured that if Tom liked me at all, he wouldn’t care if I wore a pair of fucking boxer shorts, which I would never do.

0.0 Now we know Tom would love seeing his girlfriend in just his boxers. XDDD

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“Gothic Tom”

Bahahhaahhahaha!!! Gothic Tom I love that!

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He was dressed as “Gothic Tom” as he usually did when we went out in public together. He was even wearing a small bit of eyeliner. He wasn’t wearing his signature hat and ponytail, but instead one of my black beanies. He was wearing one of his own black hoodies.

OH. MY. GOD. *imagines* *jawdrops* *dies because of that visual*
How do you imagine these gorgeous things.

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I turned to Tom and grinned. “You got us Rasmus tickets?” I said.
“Bill’s idea.” He nodded.
“We’ve got backstage passes, too.” Bill added with a grin. He opened the door and led us out into the cold.

>.> Evil cliffhanger......

Loved it! I can't wait to see the rest of their date!
And I'm still stuck on that image of GothicTom. x]

i love this story! and chapter 10 was the funniest ever update soon!

Awww yet another cute two chapters I loved them. Bill and Tashy are a couple YAY!!!! They are all just so dang cute lolz update woman! teeehee

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Tears began falling from my eyes. “Please! I can’t live with out you! I love you too damn much!”

Oh God I can picture Bill doing something like this if the girl he loved passed out. ;-;

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Tom did all he could to comfort her. I knew how she must’ve felt. I would be inconsolable if Tom were in the hospital.

Oh, God now that would be even worse if the girl he liked died. ;-;

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I loved Tashy. Scratch that. I love Tashy.

*sniffle* Some sweet in the midst of tragedy. :]

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“Never scare me like that again!” I sobbed, crying all over her. “I can’t live with out you!”

x] Just as cute reading it the second time.

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“Tashy, you have to know something.” I said uneasily.
“What is it Bill?” she asked.
“I-I think that I-I’m in l-love with y-you.” I stammered on the words.

Awww! Billa. x]

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“Bill. Bill, Bill, Bill.” She said shaking her head. “You are so slow!” she started laughing.
“Why are you laughing?!” I asked.
“Because, you fool, I love you too!” she said, flinging her arms around my neck

Ahaha Lizze and Tashy's reactions were similar, but that makes sense since they're twins. XD

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She loved me back, and that was all I cared about at that very moment.

Cuuuuuute!!! x]

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I couldn’t believe my luck.
Natasha Livinia Heart loved me back.

Yay!!!! for Bil!!!

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This chapter is so corny!

Ahaha, maybe a little, but it's super sweet. x]

*jawdrops* OMG you mentioned my story!! *loves you*
Ahaha and my username.... XD I know I change it back and forth too often. XDDDD
But OMG thank you so much. x]

Anyway... I really liked hearing what BIll thought.
It's nice hearing about Bill and Tashy as welll as Lizzie and Tom. :]
Can't wait for more. :D

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“Were you serious back there? You really want to go on a date with me?” he asked seriously. His eyes were even serious.

Aww! Tomi's doubting himself. Of course she loves you, Tom! Everyone does! XD

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He relaxed a little and smiled. He crossed the room and gathered me in a hug that, literally, swept me off my feet. He picked me up and spun me around. He put me down, but kept his arms around me. His eyes connected with mine.

*imagines self as Lizzie* Ok I would die if he did that. x]

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He leaned in closer, about to kiss me. A knock on the door broke our eye contact.

Gah! And I'd die a very different death if that happened. >.<

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“Lizzie, it’s about Tashy. Come quickly.” He said. My eyes, heart, and mind filled with fear.
“What happened?” I said my voice cracking.
“She’s fallen, and isn’t regaining consciousness.” He said.

Oh no! Tashy!!

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“Call an ambulance. She’s having an allergic reaction to what ever was in the sauce. She’s allergic to Bleu Cheese and mushrooms.”

0.0 oh no!!!!

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Tom had me in his lap as I shook violently. Bill was rocking back and forth in his seat.
.......
I was crying by now. I didn’t know if I was going to lose my beloved twin sister. I couldn’t have been more scared. Tom said nothing to me as I cried.

Oh Tashy and Lizzie!!! Oh no! ;-;

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“Your sister is fine. She can come back with you tonight.” He said.

Yay!! Phew!

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“Bill, you fool, people are watching!” she giggled. Bill turned and ran for her, nearly knocking the poor girl over. He clutched her tightly.
“Never scare me like that again!” he sobbed, crying all over again. “I can’t live with out you!” Tashy patted his back.

Awwww!! Bill!! x]

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I cuddled up close to him and closed my eyes. Tom pecked me on the cheek.
“Guten Nacht, liebe.” He said.
“Good night, Tomi.” I mumbled into his chest. I was soon asleep.

x] That part was super cute too. *wishes she was Lizzie right then* >.>

Great chapter as usual. :]
It was sad that poor Tashy was sick, I was reading this thinking "Oh no what's gonna happen?"
But I'm glad she was ok. Update soon please. :D

HELL YEAH I AM THE FIRST AND SECOND COMMENT ON THE SECOND PAGE BooYaa

YAY new chapter was great I was like NOOOOOOO TASHY CAN'T DIE THAT JUST AIN'T RIGHT!!! You know I would have screamed myhead off at you if you had killed er off you know that right? Cause well I love her and Bill. Oh yay like I said Tom has balls now and comforts Lizzie she was sooo sad I felt bad for her. They are gonna make such a cuuutee couple YAY hehe...HE WANTS IN YOUR PANTS AND YOU WON'T DENY HIM ACCESS!

Update! Yay!!

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Once we made it to the airport, we got through the checking system

*going off topic* There's this video where Tom talks about how it took him forever to get through airport security once. He says the metal detecor kept going off cause the metal in his pants[like zippers] but I bet it was because of his lip ring. XDDD Just thought I'd tell you. XD

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Mike leaned over. “Those are my pants, Tom.”

Oh God again! They need like name tags or something. XDD

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“Do you know how Lizzie feels about me?” I asked nervously.
“She likes you. A lot. It’s pretty obvious.” She smiled.
“It is?” I said.
“Well, duh!” she said in a duh tone. “We, everyone, can totally tell.”

XDDD clueless Tom is adorable. x]

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“Jesus effing Christ, Tom! You are so stupid sometimes, you know that?”

Bahahaha poor Tom!!

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“What do I do about it then?” I asked.
“Take her out Goddammit! It’s not hard!” Natasha snapped. “Stop being a fucking coward and grow a pair, why don’t you?”
“Okay, fine. Where would I take her?” I asked.
“Use your imagination!” she snapped again. “You do have one right?”

Geez! Mental note, don't ask Natasha for help. >.>

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“Yes, I do. Jeez, ask a question and het your head bitten off.”

Oops, typo!
And it was funny. XD Tom needs to be more careful around her! XD

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I looked at my shoes. “Would you like to go on a date with me?” I asked, peeking up at her.

*is picturing that*
*squeeee!* That was so cute. I can almost see Tom actually doing this, but he's too cocky to be shy about it. XDD

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I smiled. Natasha was right! She did like me!

Aww! He sounds like a little kid who just got the cookie he wanted before dinner. x]
So cute. I love it.

I really liked this chapter. Have I told you that I like hearing from Tom's point of view? Well I do. :D
Good job, I can't wait for the next update. :]

Haha FUCK YEAH MAN NEW CHAPTER!!! Hehe ask a question get your head bitten off soooo true, I mean men can be so idiotivly oblivious! WOOT that was good Tom finally grew a pair!! (shhhh he never had any him being a man whore is all a cover up) Teeehee

Gustav came running looking scared.
“Natasha just stormed into the bathroom while I was peeing and threw me out!” he said. “I almost got a cigarette jammed up my ass!”
We all laughed. Gustav got more upset.
“IT WAS LIT!” he shouted, turning red. “SHE SAW EVERYTHING!”
We laughed harder. “Dude, that’s some crazy ass shit!” Mike said.
“It’s not funny.” He pouted, flopping into the recliner.
POOR GUSTI!!! *rapeglomps Gustav* LOL i loves it. MORE PLEAZE!

Hehe I like it so far. Tomi licked Lizzie.. O.o

Sorry for taking forever. >.<

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As soon as Georg said what he did, he bolted and Lisa ran after him. They talked for a few hours and came out, hand-in-hand.

:cute: Awww.

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The room pairings usually went as so:
Bill and Tom
Georg and Gustav
John and Mike
Me, Tashy, and Lisa

But by the end of the night it was:
Bill and Tashy
Georg and Lisa
John and Gustav
Me and Tom
Mike with Gustav and John

Bahahaha nice!! I'd so do the same thing though. XDD

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I peered out the door to see Tom stripping off his shoes, hat, and shirt.

*imagines*
Ahem, excuse me while I go find my brain.
Oh God that sounds so.... Idk, just *melty*

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“Tomi, stop it!” I cried.
“Say it!” he cried. He was referring to our safety phrase with was “pudding”.
“No! I won’t say it!” he kept on tickling me.
“Say it!” he repeated. It was too much, I had to give in.
“Pudding! There I said it!” I screamed. Tom stopped.

Hahaha aw, play fighting. x]

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He was not going to win. I lunged and tackled him on the bed.
“Oh, kinky…” he said in what appeared to be a seductive tone.
I climbed down and hit his arm. “Oh, baby, you know that makes it worse.” He said.

:XD Oh God that is so Tom!

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I turned to go back to my own bed, but was grabbed by Tom. He pulled me back onto the bed and held me there, beside him.
“Stay!” he whined, clenching on to me like a teddy bear.

Aww x] *is thinking* IwannabeTom'steddy >.>

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I could feel Tom awake beside me. He was running his fingers through my hair and humming “Reden” to himself.

Awwwww! Idk why but Tom laying there humming is just adorable to me.

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“Lizzie, I have to say something to you that I know I could never tell you in person.” He said. “And that’s that I think I’m in love with you.” My heart stopped and I didn’t move for a long time. Then I rolled over and cuddled up closer to him. Tom wrapped his arms around me

Gyah!!! You are killing me with this cuteness. x] :cute:
Mostly cause I like pretending I'm Lizzie when I read this story. >.<

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“Why am I such a coward?” he said.

Aw! Tell her Tomi, tell her!!

So so sorry again for taking forever.
I really liked this chapter, it was a little filler like, but it was cute at the same time, so it was worth it. x]
I can't wait to read more!! :D

YAY new chapteroni teehee that was freaking adorable cute little Tom and his hopes and dreams of being with Lizzie

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW he likes her!!! Hehe threatened him with spoons I still cant get over how funny that is. Loved loved loved the chapter!! You gots to write more cause I need stuff to read sense I am home sick for the rest of the week.