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    Bahahaha oh God, let me tell you...
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    Lisa had started threatening everyone with knives! Not spoons, but fucking knives!
    Oh no! Lisa, be nice! :XD
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    Catfights had become a regular hourly thing.
    Something I'm sure the guys loved and watched with popcorn. XD
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    “Georgie!” she screamed.
    Georg looked up. Lisa had leeched herself to him and hooked her legs around his hips.
    “I’m so sorry! I’m sorry for everything I’ve done to you this week!” she said.
    Georg patted her back a bit, looking scared. “It’s okay…” he said slowly.
    Lisa jumped down and stuck out her hand. “Frenemies again?” she said.
    “Of course.” He laughed, taking her hand. “But, only if you go back to spoons.”
    “Deal!” she laughed.
    Hahaha aw, that was cute :cute:
    I'm glad they're getting along again.
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    Tashy came in and flopped down next to me and pecked me lightly on the cheek. Well, this was new.
    “What was that for?” I asked.
    “For everything I’ve done this week.” She smiled.
    Aw, I'm glad they're all better too.
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    “Oh, and Gusti, I’m sorry for the bathroom incident.” She added.
    “It’s okay…” he said
    Hahaha again, poor Gustav! XD
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    Lizzie came in and threw herself onto Tom’s lap.
    “Back to your form of normal?” he mused.
    “Yup.” She laughed. Tom grinned and wrapped his arms around her.
    Awwww. x]
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    “How deep a sleeper is Georg?” I asked.
    “He’s a pretty heavy sleeper, why?” he said.
    “I’m curling his hair in his sleep.” I grinned.
    Oh no, this can't end well!
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    Tom walked in and had to restrain himself from laughing. I pulled out my camera and took several pictures of the sleeping Georg and his new hair.
    OMG she's evil!! XD
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    Georg snapped awake. “What the fucking hell!” he shouted, his new curls bouncing.
    “I just wanted to know what would happen if I slammed your book on your lap.” I said innocently.
    “Well, silly girl, you now know that it wakes me up and pisses me off.” He grumbled.
    Bahhaa nice Georg. :XD
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    “Oh mein Gott!” Gustav said, doubling over. “You look like Shirley Temple!”
    BAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHA I can so picture that!!! XDDD
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    “Well, you know what?” he said. “I think you’re cute.” His face went tomato red and he bolted down the hall and into the back room.
    0.0 wasn't expecting that, but I like it. It's about time Georg!
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    I couldn’t believe what he had just said. He thinks that I am cute? Me? The girl who ragged on him and constantly threatened his life with spoons? How could I tell him how much I liked him back?
    Gah! Yay! x]

    I liked it as usual. :D
    Poor Georg. :XD But at least he finally confessed!
    Yay, now I can't wait to see what happenes from there. :D
    September 21st, 2009 at 08:48am
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    THAT WAS FUCKING HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I could not stop laughing I gotta say I am a lil on the moody side when its 'that time of the month' but NOTHING like that. I was seriously laughing so hard with all the little encounters the guys made like asking for a ciggeret, spoon is now a knife, and the best was when she stormed into the bathroom while Georg was in there! woooow you gootaa write quick cause that was some funny ass shiza right there!
    September 20th, 2009 at 06:19pm
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    Bahhahahhaha oh God these poor boys!! :XD
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    “Um, this kinda just dawned on me, but, do we have enough ‘ladies products’ for the ladies?” he asked.
    “Like what?” I regretted asking this the moment I’d said it.
    “Like tampons and Midol and chocolate…” Bill replied.
    Hahaha Tom's sitting there thinking "Oh geez, why'd I ask. >.>" XD
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    “So, what’re we gonna do about the clothing situation?” I asked.
    “LEARN TO FUCKING SHARE YOU STINGY BASTARDS!” Lisa shouted. “IT’S NOT LIKE ANYONE’S GOING TO FUCKING NOTICE!” Mike and I cringed.
    “SHUT THE FUCK UP, LISA!” Lizzie shouted coming into the room and shoving her, hard.
    “BITCH!” Lisa screamed and shoved her back. Mike and I exchanged looks. Cat fight!
    BAHHAHAHHAHA of course they'd get excited over a cat fight. XDDDDDDD
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    “PUT ME DOWN OR I WILL UPGRADE MY SPOON TO A KNIFE!” Lisa screamed.
    LOOK OUT FOR THESPOON KNIFE!!!
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    “I’m so, so, so, so SORRY!” she screamed as Bill came back into the room, he face was riddled with confusion.
    “I’m sorry too!” Lizzie cried. They were both crying.
    Hahaha such a girl-on-that-time thing to do . XD
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    “Can I have one?” I asked. Big mistake.
    “FUCK OFF AND GET YOUR OWN!”
    :XD
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    “Natasha just stormed into the bathroom while I was peeing and threw me out!” he said. “I almost got a cigarette jammed up my ass!”
    We all laughed. Gustav got more upset.
    “IT WAS LIT!” he shouted, turning red. “SHE SAW EVERYTHING!”
    We laughed harder. “Dude, that’s some crazy ass shit!” Mike said.
    “It’s not funny.” He pouted, flopping into the recliner.
    Bahahhahhaa aw poor Gusti!! XD
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    “Georg, if you don’t leave me alone, you are going to wake up to bloody tampons up your fucking nose!” we heard Lisa screech. Georg came running into the room looking as though he had been held at gun-point.
    “What did you do?” Bill asked.
    “Nothing! I just asked if she needed anything!” he replied.
    Hahaha aw, poor Georg! They're all getting attacked... as Tom sits back and enjoys the show. XD
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    “They are going to kill us, so we’d better sleep with our eyes wide ass open.”
    Yup, boys. Beware the PMSing crazy girls. :XD

    Nice chapter as usual. And funny as hell as usual. XDDDDD
    I loved it. x] Those boys were really just getting killed by those crazy girls. XD
    Hoping for more soon! :D
    September 20th, 2009 at 01:06pm
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    Yay! I was mentioned ^-^ Ok I've been mentioned before, but it still makes me happy. x]
    On with the comment...
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    “If you don’t, I’m going to find my spoon and beat you with it!” Lisa added. I laughed. This girl was a riot!
    Bahaha yes she is! XDDD
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    Tom and Lizzie exchanged frightened looks and stood up and hugged.
    *imagined hugging Tom* That'd be so nice. x]
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    “’Authur and the Minimoys’ of course!”
    Bill voiced that!
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    “Bwoah! I did the voice of Authur!”
    XDD Oops you knew. XD
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    Tashy kept scolding me because I kept saying all the lines before the characters in the movie said them. She fell asleep once the credits rolled. I covered her up with the blanket and soon drifted off to sleep.
    Aw, :cute: That was really sweet.
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    “I do believe I detect a frisson between those two.” Lisa said in a weird British accent.
    “You detect a what?” Mike asked.
    “A frisson. An intense attraction.” Lisa said.
    “Oh, why didn’t you just say that?” Mike asked.
    “Because dear Mikey, it’s fun to confuse you!” she laughed.
    “Bite me.” he muttered.
    “Gladly!” Lisa said, getting up and biting him on the arm.
    “OW!” Mike cried. “Jeez, I was kidding!”
    Bahahahaha gotta love Lisa! :XD
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    “Uh, Mike, that’s my shirt.” I said. Mike looked down then back up.
    “Shit! Wait, those are my pants! And my hat!” he said. I had changed out of Lizzie’s clothes hours ago.
    “Aw fuck!” I said, removing his hat and tossing it to him. My dreads fell down around my shoulders.
    Lizzie laughed at us. “You guys are morons.”
    XDDDDD Nice! And yes they are morons.
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    “Mike, those are my pants.” I told him.
    “Jesus fucking Christ!” he said taking out the earphones. “That’s my shirt!”
    “God Damn!” I mumbled.
    Mike stood up. “Man, we gotta do something!” he said.
    “Yeah, we do!” I agreed.
    “Yeah, and that’s to never let the girls do our laundry ever again.” He agreed. “We cool?”
    “Yeah, we’re cool.” I said. “Go ahead and wear my clothes for today. It doesn’t matter right now.”
    Hahahaha again!! :XD
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    “Guten Morgan, sexy.” I said over a mouth full of cereal.
    Silly Tom! XD
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    John noticed my puzzled look and laughed. “It’s ‘that time’ of the month for her. Don’t piss her off.” He said.
    My face went from puzzled to disgust. “Ugh! I didn’t think about that!”
    OhmyGod Poor Tom! XD
    He should have known that would happen. XD
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    John laughed. “Well, look forward to it every month for the next eight months.”
    “John, stop scaring him.” Mike said. Homeboy’s got my back.
    “I’m not trying to! I’m just warning him.” John interjected.
    “Well, I’m pretty sure he doesn’t want to know about Lizzie’s cycles as much as I don’t.” Mike said.
    “Thank you!” I said. Mike laughed and turned his attention back to my iPod.
    Ahaha once again poor Tom! :XD
    [Homeboy’s got my back.] XD Loved that line!

    I really liked this chapter! It was so hilarious. XD
    The fact that Tom and Mike keep getting their clothes mixed up just makes me laugh even more. XD
    Can't wait for more!! :D
    September 20th, 2009 at 10:58am
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    “Well, this beats wearing Bill’s pants.” He sighed.
    “When the fuck did you wear my pants?” Bill asked as Natasha stripped him of his make up.
    “It was that time when we played Truth or Dare and Georg dared me to go outside wearing your pants and shirt.”
    XDDDDDDDDDDDDD I would have LOVED to see that!!!
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    “NO! NO EYELINER!” he screamed.
    Bahahaha poor Tom! That's another thing I've always wanted to see him wear! XD
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    “No! No! NOOOO!” he cried. He was being a big baby about it. It was just fucking eyeliner, not damn cough medicine. Tom twisted and wiggled underneath me, Lisa, and Natasha. Bill couldn’t stop laughing to do anything to help his twin, despite his desperate cries for help. Tom finally got free and tried to crawl away, in a fit of rage; I grabbed the leg of his jeans and pulled. His pants came down. I didn’t know just how baggy my Tripps were on him. Tom immediately scrambled to his feet and yanked his pants up, red as a tomato.
    *jawdrops*
    BAHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA
    I'd have laughed so had if I saw that! XD Poor Tomi!
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    “You just pantsed me!” he cried over the room filled his hysterical laughter.
    “You licked me!” I shouted back.
    “You attacked me with make up!” Tom shouted.
    “You had to be a big baby about it!” I screamed. I was getting really pissed.
    “You’re an evil, evil little girl!” he shouted.
    “Little? I’m glad I’m short! At least I’m not a tall, skinny freak of nature who wears clothes that makes him look anorexic!”
    XD I liked the aguement. It's very believable that he'd actually say stuff like that.
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    Tom, because his face was reddening and his was seething.
    “You’re a fucking bitch.” He said. That’s all he had to say to make me cry. The tears spilled out of my eyes as I shoved past him.
    “YOU ARE AN ASSHOLE!” I screamed as I locked myself in the bathroom. I broke into hysterics. Why did I have to like him so much.
    0.0 and then it got serious.....
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    Bill shook his head. “We are all going shopping. You and Lizzie are staying here until this is settled. And it had better be when we get back.”
    Never mess with a serious Bill! XD

    I liked the chapter. :D
    Oh and Idk if I've mentioned this before, but I really like the title.
    Can't wait for the next chapter. :D
    September 18th, 2009 at 07:47am
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    YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY ! New chapteroni!! It was good, dramatic, but good
    September 17th, 2009 at 01:25am
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    HAHAHA IMA GET YOU WITH A SPOON! Thats a new one, wonder if it would work on my evil sister??? Haha Danny should jump infront of a buss..I love the new person Lisa! Cant wait for the updates
    September 17th, 2009 at 12:17am
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    Bill heard this and came over. “Who’s cheating on who?” he asked, eyes full of rage. Lisa pointed to her boyfriend and sobbed loudly. Bill looked down and picked up a rock. He threw it forcefully and it hit Danny in the head. “Run fool, run!” he said. Danny’s eyes filled with fright and he ran.
    XDDDDDDDDDDDD OMG it would be so hilarious if Bill really did something like that! XD
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    “One…two…um, ten drinks.” She said holding up three fingers.
    Bahahhaha that sounds like Tom in this one interview, except he's not drunk, he just can't count. XD He says three and holds up teo fingers, when it's really four and then when he realizes that it's four, he holds up five fingers. XD -- It's here.
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    re-dressed her in a pair of Tom’s clean boxers
    0.0 *faints* that would be so weird... in a good way..... >.>
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    She stumbled over to the couch and sat down, on top of Georg.
    “This couch is really lumpy.” She stated.
    Bahahahhaa nice Lisa. XDD

    The way you made DrunkLisa, was really funny. XD
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    “Don’t you come any closer or I’ll stab you with this…” I looked at the object in my hand. “Spoon!”
    XDDDDDD
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    “And I’m Tom!” a voice said from behind Lizzie. Lizzie screamed and dropped to the floor in fright.
    “Fucking hell, Tom, give me a heart attack, why don’t you!”
    XD Ilove HATE when guys do that! XD
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    “That crazy lady beat me with a spoon!” he cried. Tom laughed.
    XDDDDDDD
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    “Oh, you didn’t do much.” Tom said. “Except for almost peeing in our trash can!”
    I blushed. “Sorry.” Everyone laughed. Even Georg. I glared at him. “Do you want me to get my spoon?”
    Georg shut his mouth instantly. The room once again erupted with laughter.
    Hahaha aw, poor Georg. XD
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    Tom was pretty cool, but a complete pervert. He commented on my Hello Kitty panties that he must have seen last night while I was in my drunken stupor.
    Yup, definitely sounds like something Tom would do. XD
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    “Oh no.” Tom said. “I am not wearing Bill’s clothes again!”
    AGAIN?!?! I'd like to know about the first time! XDD

    I liked it! Stupid Danny deserved to be hit by Bill's rock :coffee: That's something I absolutely can't stand, cheaters.
    And Lisa sounds like she's going to be a very fun character. :]
    Can't wait for more! :D
    September 16th, 2009 at 10:04am
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    She was smirking.
    “Did you sleep well?” she asked.
    “Yeah…” I said slowly.
    “I’d bet so.” She smirked. “You and Bill looked quite…cozy, last night.”
    I froze. “I have no idea what you’re talking about, crazy lady.” I said, and pushed by her.
    “Who shall I sent the pictures to?” Lizzie grinned. I froze again.
    Hahahah she's so evil!! XDDD
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    “No shit, Sherlock, I had no idea.”
    XD Idk why, but I've always liked that saying. XDDDDD
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    “HEY!” Lizzie said standing up. “Are you calling me short?” she said.
    “And if I am?” I asked.
    “I will tear your lip ring out and jam it up your nose.” She said. “Then, I’ll tear your testicles out of your kneecaps and you will eat them. Raw.”
    0.0 holy crap!
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    I cringed and sat down. Where’d she come up with this shit? No one in the room laughed except for Natasha. The other guys were holding themselves, with looks on their faces that said that they were imagining what that would feel like.
    Ya I get why they're cringing! And I'm not even a guy! It's just sounds that awful!
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    Everyone tried and failed. She shoved Georg, punched Gustav, spat at me, kicked John, slapped Mike, and pulled Lizzie’s hair. The girl is nuts when she is nervous!
    Hahahaha I'd probably be the exact same way! Slapping and snapping at anyone and everyone. XDD

    I liked the poem! It was great! :D

    Danny?
    Lisa?
    ?_?
    Guess I have to wait till the next chapter. >.< Damn!!
    Update soon!! :D
    September 15th, 2009 at 02:09am
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    Aww this is soo cute I love the story, you should deffinitly write more puh-lease!
    September 15th, 2009 at 12:52am
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    Oooo, I really like hearing from Bill. :D
    and the whole arguement over food. XDD
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    Lizzie stood up. “WE ARE ALL GOING TO EAT PANCAKES AND YOU ARE ALL GOING TO LIKE IT!” she bellowed in a voice that would have made me shit my pants as a child.
    “And what if we don’t?” Tom asked, being a smart ass.
    “THEN YOU WILL EAT DOG FOOD!” Lizzie shouted. Tom cringed and shut up.
    Bhahahahahahaha I'd be scared if I were Tom. XDDDDD
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    “I wonder where Bill and your sister went.” I smirked.
    “Probably somewhere to fix their make up.” Lizzie laughed.
    XDDD of course, cause Bill probably would do something like that. XD
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    Bill and Natasha were sleeping, in the same bunk. They were curled up all romantic like. Natasha had her head on Bill’s chest and Bill’s arm was around her waist. I looked at the small TV. They were watching ‘The Notebook’.
    Awwwww, so cute :cute:
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    Then she took out her phone and took several pictures. I did the same.
    Uh-oh. >.> This could end badly....
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    This chapter goes to once again, LetMeRise..LetMeFall.
    x] ...... Yay x]

    I really liked it. :D Can't wait for more.
    September 13th, 2009 at 01:21pm
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    Chapter 4:
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    “Lizzie! Stop killing our drummer!” I heard Georg say.
    XDDD nice
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    “Pineapple!” Gustav and I shouted. “With Canadian Bacon and sausage!” I added.
    “Yeah!” Gustav said high-fiving me.
    “Ewww…you two are so gross!” Georg laughed.
    Bahaahhaa I love my pizza like that too, without the sausage. But I never get it cause people think it's gross. XDDD
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    “Iz coz I’m seffy, vright?” he said, getting pizza sauce all over his chin.
    Oh wow that is so Tom it's not even funny! XDDD
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    “What ever puts you to sleep, Thomas.”

    “That’s not my name!”
    XDDD Poor Tom.
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    “Aww, wanna kiss?” Tom said, making kissy faces at me.
    I do. Hahaha but really, that must have looked so gross with all that pizza on his face. XD

    Chpater 5:
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    Bill had done her make-up similar to his. I was right, they were going to be the best of friends.
    x] That was part was cute, I'm glad they're close.
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    wearing a pair of purple skinny jeans, a black Tokio Hotel shirt that was torn artistically
    Sadly I can see myself wearing a TH shirt to meet them too. >.<
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    “I look hot in pink, don’t you think so Tomi?” he said.
    Hahahahaha very Bill. XDDDDDDDDDDD
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    “No.” Tom said.
    Bahahahhahahhahha VERY Tom! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

    I really like this story. x] It's really cute.
    I can't wait to read more [and find out what they decide to eat. XD]
    Update soon please. :D
    September 13th, 2009 at 09:17am
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    Hahaha cute. <3
    I liked Bill and Lizzie's arguement. XD
    And uh-oh! What's going on with Lizzie????
    Can't wait for more. :D
    September 12th, 2009 at 11:44pm