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  • Orpheus

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    I'm so glad you finally updated. It's a great story! Cheers!
    November 5th, 2010 at 07:12pm
  • baby eyes.

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    That's the plan :D

    Thank you though <3
    November 5th, 2010 at 03:29pm
  • Rage

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    I really love this story. I think you should update it more often than you do because it is probably one of my favorite stories that I´ve read ın a really long time [:
    November 5th, 2010 at 01:18pm
  • blue.

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    Love love love.
    More more more.
    Please please please. :)
    September 15th, 2010 at 10:59pm
  • trecool567

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    I can't tell you how much I love this story. Its been sitting in my subscriptions unread and I finally started to read it and I am extremely addicted to it. Haha. I can't wait for more!

    -Katie
    August 10th, 2010 at 08:32pm
  • courier six

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    Gahhhhh. I've been dying to find one of these. D:
    I finds I finds!
    I freaking love this.
    She should dump the zero and get with the hero, just sayin. xD

    Just, hun, you've got incredibly small typos here and there, just missing letters, wrong words and such. Nothing to throw the story out of sequence, but I just thought you should know.
    July 31st, 2010 at 11:52pm
  • thePHunkmaster

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    I like his mom! She seems really cool, like an older sister rather than a mother. Although I'm positive she becomes strict whenever she has to.

    "Everyone else is allowed to break down but for some reason, that card didn't come in my deck in life."
    Nice statement! That's really creative.

    No more Dave!
    July 28th, 2010 at 03:56am
  • amanda51295

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    I'm very happy that one of your stories have been updated. I think ur a very talented writer. I hope there will be more updates soon. All of your stories are very interesting and creative. I am really hoping that u will update charisma soon. I think that is my favorite so far.
    July 27th, 2010 at 11:44pm
  • Julie Black

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    Just read the whole thing- And loved it!! Update soon!
    July 27th, 2010 at 09:26am
  • whatsername924

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    I just stumbled on this story and read it the whole way through.
    Im already addicted, your writting it soo well! keep it up
    and p.s. pleaase update soon ha
    July 27th, 2010 at 08:15am
  • shesmywynonna

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    this update was so cute. i wonder what she'll tell him >:D
    please dont stop updating or i'll have my evil ninja bitch cat on u >:D
    July 26th, 2010 at 05:35pm
  • syncerelymikayla

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    Awh. I really enjoy reading this story. I hope there will be plenty more in the near future. I loved the story.
    Don't stop updating, or I will have to sick the evil ninja cows on you :D
    July 12th, 2010 at 01:14pm
  • Straight-outta-Dodge

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    awww, its just the makings of one of those couples that everyone is like "hey, them two are so cute". I really enjoy this story and I have been a lousy commenter....i appolgise but thanks for the update, it was a great satisfaction to see that it had started to be updated again.

    - Hannah, xxx
    July 3rd, 2010 at 12:23am
  • hessicusz

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    ah i love this story <3
    June 29th, 2010 at 05:31am
  • who cried wolf?

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    AWW!
    Billie's a cutie, update soon please :)
    June 27th, 2010 at 11:51am
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    Aww! :)
    June 27th, 2010 at 05:19am
  • Sassafras Roots.

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    I'm so very happy you haven't forgotten about this! Love the updates!!! I'm so glad they kissed, hopefully Billie will remember it in the morning though lol. =)
    June 26th, 2010 at 10:08am
  • thePHunkmaster

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    I'm happy you didn't forget about us!
    The chapter at the party was really cute. They way they mimicked each other was too adorable. I'm surprised Dave didn't run up to Billie to punch him in the nose.
    June 26th, 2010 at 05:38am
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    Ahh! I love it!!
    I'm so glad you've updated!
    It's been ages!
    June 22nd, 2010 at 06:55am
  • who cried wolf?

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    Awww, billie and shayla are getting close!
    Update soon please!!
    June 22nd, 2010 at 05:14am