Whow, i was hesitant to read this at first, but i'm really liking it. Alot! It's sort of...wonderful? It's definitely a nice break from the constant MCR and Slash that i read/write. [not that i'm complaining, i pretty much in love with it all] And it's well written, too! There's an actual story! =]
I can't even put into words how much I love this story. I love how you're developing Shayla's character. She's very vulnerable, but strong...i think someone in an above comment mentioned that too. Another awesome chapter. =)