Watch Over My Life - Comments

This story is my life now . I love it :]

This story is my life now . I love it :]

Hey so I'm reallllllyyyy glad your back writing this!!! It makes me laugh so damn hard. Please write more and you will be my favorite person in the world<3

IT IS BACK! YES YES YES!!!!!

Wow, I'm SOO glad this story is back... when I think of good stories on here, I think of Watch Over My Life. I even came back to reread the story a few months ago and that's when I learned that you were rewriting the story [uh, squee!].

best of luck, xo

Loved this the first time....can't wait to read it again!!!!

Oh, I can't wait to buy your book. Best of luck; Publishing is hard. :)

WOOT WOOT! :P

Good Luck! and maybe you could post when it will be on sale please.

Nuh uh! That's so awesome!

Good Luck!! =]

Good luck! It was so good, I will definately buy a copy! =]

great update

Cant wait to buy a copy!!! :D

Wow! You send it out? I know its going to be published, it's really good. Has such a good story and moral to it. I will definently be picking up a copy when I see it in stores! Good luck with everything!

Goood luck! I'm sure someone will see the amazing talent and passion in that story.
All I can say is can't wait to read it in print! :D
Good luck!

ngaaw good for you ;D
hope all goes well ! cheering you on :DD

i loved your story and i even cried in the end. i really hope your story will be published. :)

Oh my god! No words can describe the way I feel about this story!
Its amazing! NO, amazing isn't a great enough word to describe it!
Cute and original.
The way you write makes me dying for more!!!!!
I'm subsribed.

I've been following this story since you first started posting it and it is truly an amazing story. The last two chapters, especially the last, made me cry. I understand why you ended it the way you did, and I agree with you. As much as I would've loved to see Jess survive the impact of her dying made the story so much more emotional and real.

I agree with domious on her comment about this being more a love story, and how it reminded her of a Nicholas Sparks story. The way you wrote it and made everything come together was amazing. It did prove how strong Love truly is.

In all honesty I've been on this site for over a year, and I must have read hundreds of stories since I've been here, but this is one of the best stories I have read not only here on Mibba but on several other sites as well.

I've been reading this story for the past two days i think? I just finished and I loved it. I never cry. Like never, but my eyes kind of just watered abit at the end. When Jay said "but everyone else has a mommy" God, I felt for that kid.

I wouldn't say this was a "pregnant" story, it was more of a love story. But in your describtion you made it more of a pregnancy story, so I was like "great, another 16-year-old pregnancy story. I clicked on it anyway, and I was supppppper glad it wasn't! It kinda reminded me of a Nicholos Sparks story or something. But you definently made it your own, thats for sure. When she was gettin married, I was a little bummed out. I thought it was just going to be a happy little ending(which in a way it still was, a sweet little ending) but then you made you die...that definently made the story, and you definently proved how strong love is.

This is by far one of the best stories I've read on mibba since I joined.