Flatline - Comments, page 2

bloodravyn (100)

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aww, brian's such a sweetie

December 16th, 2009 at 02:25pm

ForeverPlagued (100)

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Omg this story is absolutely amazing and I seriously can't wait to read more! Great job, ladies! More soon?

December 8th, 2009 at 11:45pm

BooBoo FunnyFace (100)

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I'm gonna start readin this soon too...lol...

November 22nd, 2009 at 11:28pm

Its_RobynXo (100)

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aw I loved that!
such a sweet chapter!

November 8th, 2009 at 08:54pm

Johnny Christ; (100)

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omg that was the best chapter yet!!
And Elvis is mine haha jk
I love that man!!

I was really surprised that Brian sang that to her but it actually made me cry!!!

This was one of the sweetest things ever and I really was blown away! I knew it would be good but I had no idea that you'd take it to that level!!

I'm still blown away that you used an Elvis song haha. I didnt think people cared about him any more :)

Amazing, my dear <3

November 8th, 2009 at 07:43pm

drea_uhoh (100)

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the last chapter was the sweetest/cheesiest/amazing thing ever!
please update?
:D

November 8th, 2009 at 07:32pm

atrocious (100)

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Probably the sweetest chapter of anything I've ever read!

November 8th, 2009 at 03:16pm

ello. (100)

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I lovvvee thisss storrehhhh.

November 8th, 2009 at 11:45am

secrets-that-die (100)

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Aww, that was sweet!!!
<33

November 8th, 2009 at 06:50am

A7X-Gc-luver (100)

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this story is just amazing
i really hope to read some more
:)

November 8th, 2009 at 06:45am

Kismet (100)

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Aw, that was so sweet. I love that Brian sang to her; I was almost crying! And I also loved how all the guys were there. That was just awesome. But I was surprised that none of the guys were a little more shocked 'cause she's so young. Actually, she probably looks older considering Brian didn't know she was seventeen, either. Hmm...Who knows - maybe he'll catch some shit about it later. Or not. Haha. And I laughed out loud when she was saying how good the cheesecake was, and then Zacky said it was bought. Haha. I loved it altogether! <3

November 8th, 2009 at 05:27am

foREVer Synyng (100)

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looooooove it!! keep it up and let me know when you put up the next chapter...and Aja says thanks!

November 6th, 2009 at 01:00am

ello. (100)

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Seriously though, freakinnnn awesommmme.

November 4th, 2009 at 04:19am

secrets-that-die (100)

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Aww, that was sweet of brian!

November 4th, 2009 at 02:57am

ello. (100)

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Epiicccc.

November 4th, 2009 at 02:02am

Johnny Christ; (100)

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awww that was the sweetest things!
Brian is amazing!
I really want to see how the date's gonna go! I believe it will be unforgettable!
Thanks for updating!

November 3rd, 2009 at 07:37pm