Flatline - Comments

So original. Make her die eventually, please? I know it sounds morbid, but it would be awesome if they are together for a while, she gets better, but then it comes back again and she dies.

amazing story

I just started reading this and I seriously can't stop crying!
My prayers go out to the families of those who have lost someone because of this horrible disease :(

This story is absolutely amazing!
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this chapter was amazing!! seriously! and thankx for adding her...it means alot. You even made me cry.

I only recently started reading this story, and I just subscribed the other night. I was thrilled to see that there was an update to this fantastic story so soon!

You girls are good writers. I love the fact that you haven't tried to gloss over the finer details of this story, like having Brian freak out about Jane's age. I couldn't tell you how tired I am of reading some horribly written fanfiction about a teenger and an A7X guy, where everyone just shrugs their shoulders when in reality, it would be a huge deal. I'm really enjoying the slow pace of the story; which sounds weird when I phrase it that way. What I mean to say is that it's nice you're not rushing the story, and going through the effort of establishing the characters and relationships.

I wanted to take the time out to commend you for your list in your A/N for the last chapter. It really touched me. Not going to lie, it made me tear up a little bit, remember my friend who passed away from leukemia. I greatly respect you for using something like this, a fiction story, to express hope and remember those who have suffered and passed away from it.

I just read this (Thank you, Jena) and I swear to fucking God if you kill her off, I will jump into my PC and kill you both, but not before making you re-write it so she doesn't die. This is just...it's adorable, and I love it. But then again, I have a thing for age gaps...and Brian. Hehe...it's amazing, and you shouldn't take my death threats seriously, but I needed it to get the point across. This story takes my breath away, and both of your writing styles mesh so well together. I'm seriously looking forward to the next update. Really. :)

I love it, im so glad Brain is back. I loves this story...i really don't want janey to die =(

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amazing writing. i will definitly be reading this one untill the end. it hits home with me cause 5 years ago i had a friend pass away at 17 from lukimia

I just read through the story, and I'm crying my eyes out*sob* It's so sad!! Love this story!

WOW girls!

Those updates were simply amazing! I love this story so much!! So glad they kisssssed!

Great story!!!
:D It kept me reading right from the top up till the recent update
more soon?

i'm so glad he went back

Leukemia is a terrible disease. My heart and prayers go to the people suffering through it:)

haha i was about ready to kick your ass when it said he was gonna leave but it all worked out so im pleased to say you're going to be fine :) Haha jk i would never do that
I love this story so much you're both brilliant writers! The storyline is awesome and they are so cute together!
Please update soon!

i like it! my best friend has cancer, and she's only 16. It reminds me alot of her, her personality. This might be my favorite story on here so far...

This is so sad:( I almost cried!

this story has once again snagged an addiction out of me. it love it so much!! i want more now!

ooooh, brian seems a little freaked, don't he?!

Oh me oh my! THAT UPDATE WAS INCREDIBLE!

Brrrrrilliant! Good job girls, keep em coming please!