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  • bloodravyn

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    aww, brian's such a sweetie
    December 16th, 2009 at 02:25pm
  • ForeverPlagued

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    Omg this story is absolutely amazing and I seriously can't wait to read more! Great job, ladies! More soon?
    December 8th, 2009 at 11:45pm
  • BooBoo FunnyFace

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    I'm gonna start readin this soon too...lol...
    November 22nd, 2009 at 11:28pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    aw I loved that!
    such a sweet chapter!
    November 8th, 2009 at 08:54pm
  • Johnny Christ;

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    omg that was the best chapter yet!!
    And Elvis is mine haha jk
    I love that man!!

    I was really surprised that Brian sang that to her but it actually made me cry!!!

    This was one of the sweetest things ever and I really was blown away! I knew it would be good but I had no idea that you'd take it to that level!!

    I'm still blown away that you used an Elvis song haha. I didnt think people cared about him any more :)

    Amazing, my dear <3
    November 8th, 2009 at 07:43pm
  • drea_uhoh

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    the last chapter was the sweetest/cheesiest/amazing thing ever!
    please update?
    :D
    November 8th, 2009 at 07:32pm
  • atrocious

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    Probably the sweetest chapter of anything I've ever read!
    November 8th, 2009 at 03:16pm
  • ello.

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    I lovvvee thisss storrehhhh.
    November 8th, 2009 at 11:45am
  • secrets-that-die

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    Aww, that was sweet!!!
    <33
    November 8th, 2009 at 06:50am
  • A7X-Gc-luver

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    this story is just amazing
    i really hope to read some more
    :)
    November 8th, 2009 at 06:45am
  • Kismet

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    Aw, that was so sweet. I love that Brian sang to her; I was almost crying! And I also loved how all the guys were there. That was just awesome. But I was surprised that none of the guys were a little more shocked 'cause she's so young. Actually, she probably looks older considering Brian didn't know she was seventeen, either. Hmm...Who knows - maybe he'll catch some shit about it later. Or not. Haha. And I laughed out loud when she was saying how good the cheesecake was, and then Zacky said it was bought. Haha. I loved it altogether! <3
    November 8th, 2009 at 05:27am
  • foREVer Synyng

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    looooooove it!! keep it up and let me know when you put up the next chapter...and Aja says thanks!
    November 6th, 2009 at 01:00am
  • ello.

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    Seriously though, freakinnnn awesommmme.
    November 4th, 2009 at 04:19am
  • secrets-that-die

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    Aww, that was sweet of brian!
    November 4th, 2009 at 02:57am
  • ello.

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    Epiicccc.
    November 4th, 2009 at 02:02am
  • Johnny Christ;

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    awww that was the sweetest things!
    Brian is amazing!
    I really want to see how the date's gonna go! I believe it will be unforgettable!
    Thanks for updating!
    November 3rd, 2009 at 07:37pm
  • atrocious

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    Aww! I loved it guys!
    November 3rd, 2009 at 01:26pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    aw great chapter
    cant wait for her reaction!
    November 3rd, 2009 at 07:09am
  • Kismet

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    OHMYGOD! Brian's so insanely sweet to do that for her - all of it. The date, the wig, everything. He's just so...amazing. Update soon? :)
    November 3rd, 2009 at 05:52am
  • atrocious

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    I so want an update, lol.
    November 1st, 2009 at 04:41pm
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