Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jimmy's so amazing and cute and sweet and aww waww awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! They're gonna make great friends ^^ I'm glad she's helping him and all. (: And that he respects her and actually takes what she says serously!! ^^ Matt and Johnny are so cute ^^ andandandddd I think I know who this friend of her mother is, but I told you that already.. Can't wait to see what happens next and all! Don't presure yourself though, I know school's hard and all now so don't worry if it takes you time to write an update...it really is always worth the waiting :D And this chapter was AWESOME, as I told you it'd be :mrgreen:
Jimbo! He's pretty awesome. And it's great that she built up the nerve to stand up to him when he was pickin' on Johnny and shit. And Matty, that was funny how he asked if she was a witch and asked her to marry him. He's such a silly boy. Haha.
Aww, Jimbo's livin' in his car. It's sweet of her to let him stay at her place. And I'm wondering about this friend of her mom's. I'm sure it's bound to be interesting. But I'm all antsy. Brian's gotta be in this one. When is he gonna show up? Haha.
Loved the update and I"m lookin' forward to more, when ya get the chance.
JIMMY!!!! Gotta love the guy. Secretly we all know he's the best!!! Gosh, this chapter was amazing, you know! For some reason I think it is really good. Just the whole interaction between the characters was good. I think Athalya is geting on better with the others now. She has more confidence, especially to stand up to Jimmy like she did.
Aw poor Jimmy! I'm glad he realized that it's stupid to fight with his parents and not see them because of that. In reality he's such a sweetheart! I'm really curious abouther mom's friend. Will it intrioduce Brian to the story too? I amalso wondering which guy will be the love interest. I mean seriously I had to add Jimmy to the list now too. It's getting pretty fucking long. I can't wait for more, but I do understand that you're busy. Life is rough sometimes...
Okay, so now I'm starting to wonder if Brian is going to be in the story at all. And even more, is Zack going to be the love interest? Or is it Johnny? Maybe more than one? The suspense is absolutely killing me, but it's keeping me on my toes too since I'm always looking for clues in the text that might help me tell what's happening behind the scenes. I love it, really I do! It's so well written and a complete mystery so far.
So her stay is only temporary. That's sad because this way she can tell herself to stay away from everyone. She's so lonely and it's probably because her mom died and now she doeasn't want to lose anybody close to her. Is it that her stepdad is adopting her or something? Maybe that's it.
Oh, I'm so curious what's happening in the next chapter! I wonder what the big thing that's coming is! Does it have anything to do with Brian? I can't wait to find out!
Yay for updates! I really loved the update and I'm glad that you found the time to update this week! Johnny's a sweetie. And the nickname's an interesting one. I suppose Frenchie's a nice nickname. It wouldn't be one I'd be fond of, but to each their own. Haha.
I loved the update and have a great time at your show!
yay !! new chapter :p toujours pas de Brian ds les parages? on va commencer a croire que c'est une Johnny fic' Oo et puis Zacky.. avec des moments comme ça, ça me donne envie de lui en foutre une XD tu trouves pas qu'il a une tête a claque, des fois? (a) ^^' ce doit être l'accumulation avec Eternal Triangle et son attitude de crétin parfois qui me fait dire ça :D youyouuuuuuuuuu DEMAIN !!!! Green Day Green Day Green Day... j'arrive pas a me concentrer pour faire des exos de biostatistiques.. c'est MAUVAIS toute cette énergie qui trouve pas de moyen de s'é évacuer XD euh, toute a l'heure tu veux venir avec moi chez Anthony? ca sera pas long, juste stu veux voir sa guitare :) et puis pour écouter American Idiot ou 21st Century Breakdown dans la voiture... comme tu veux :D et puis génial le chapitre, même si t'avais pas l'impression qu'il était passionnant, on s'en tape, CA ME VA !! XD et puis bientôt la suite... ou pas? ;) bisouuuuuuus, à toute !!
AWW Johnny is so cute and sweet and I love him! He's amazing and he and Athalya are gonna make great friends! (: Frenchie is an awesome nickname! It'll make me smile whenever I read it ;) It was actually an awesome chapter, I loved it. (though I hate Michelle ><" But it has nothing to do with the story lol) I bet it was Bee Jay on the phone! Or something like that, I dunno I've got a feeling. Can't wait for more. AND HAVE GREAT FUCKING TIME AT THE SHOW TOMORROW ! ! ! <3
yuuup !! je rattrape enfin le wagon :) :) génial le flash back !! tel que je l'avais imaginé XD et puis j'ai meme presque l'impression de voir la photo de BJ et Lya !! c'est enorme!! :p c'est bien que tu prennes ton temps pour écrire les chapitres, ils sont encore plus complets, plus longs, plus mieux, si c'est encore possible !!! m'en vais bosser :( ... bon we !! :D <3
Aww you're gonna take your writing break now? Well you most definitely need it with school being so tiring and the upcoming Green Day show... I hope when you come back to writing you'll be full of powers again ^^
NOW THE CHAPTER. LMAO banana...I cracked up reading it. I mean, as an SP fan just the word banana makes me laugh. lol Aww that's a great chapter, I knew it was Billie but then doubted it 'cause she didn't recognize him and then when he talked about his job I thought maybe it was someone like Jason White or something but apparently it really was Billie! And lmao Tre' is so weird <3333 He's the meaning of the greatness of weirdness! Andddd I just cannot wait to see what part Johnny will take in the fanfic ^^ Johnny <3 Hope your break of writing won't be too long 'cause I cannot wait for the next chapter. Andddd got nothing left to say lol. <3
Okay I'm super jealous of her right now! I mean Billy Joe! Fuck yeah!!!! I wish I could meet him and talk to him or be in the same car with him, or anything close to that.
So her mom is dead, that's so sad. I can't figure out the deal with her stepfather though, but I do kind of get that she lves him like a real father.
I just wonder why she had to move to Cali? So curious....
I'm sad you're taking a break from writing, I'm going to miss reading your things, because seriously, they are great. I can't wait for the next update! I hope we get to find out more about Athalya and her reasons for being so skeptical towards other people.
Dude, that's an interesting way to meet the guys in Green Day. Haha. But that is pretty freakin' awesome. I love this story and I'm lookin' forward to more!
yyyyeahhhhhh !!!!! Dreams Of Tomorrow, premiers chapitres !!! wooohooo... j'aime, j'aime, j'aime !!! quand tu dis qu'il faut qu'elle soit PARFAITE cette histoire, on voit bien que tu y mets tout ton coeur XD c'est encore un autre style différent de Wreckage ou Like Walking Into a Dream, mais ca reste toi !! c'était mon ptit Break, histoire de me sortir de mes cours de medecine, et je peux te dire que c'est génial ! maintenant j'ai trop envie de bosser, tellement elle me rend contente cette histoire ^^ je sais surtout qu'elle va etre géniale, donc ca me permet de me réjouir en avance ^^... t'as vu tous les gentils com's que tu reçois? serieux, c'est trop génial !! et puis recommencer une histoire qui se passe au lycée, je sais que ca t'avait manqué :) et on voit bien que ca te plait de l'écrire cette histoire là.. prete a ce qu'elle soit encore meilleure que Wreckage??... prends ton temps a l'écrire et ca viendra tout seul !! déjà, mdr, deux chapitres sans Brian et les gens commencent déjà a se demander s'il sera même dans l'histoire ^^.. without [strike]Johnny Christ [strike] Synyster Gates, Avenged Sevenfold would be nothing.." :D vivement le prochain chapitre.. mais ca va etre biennnn ^^ rattes pas ton année de BTS pr ca, non plus.. et pense a le préciser (pr ton année de BAC) dans l'A/N de Wreckage ;) bisouuuuuuuuus !! <3
Ooh, new story! I'm really likin' it! And seriously, if I didn't know better I would honestly have a hard time thinking that you weren't a native English speaker. You do so well with it. It's a really good story and I'm liking it a lot. The characters are slowly comin' in and I'm expecting Brian to show up soon. Haha. Lookin' forward to more!