And I Will Try to Fix You - Comments

I like this quite alot =]
I can't wait for more!

Thanks for the link!!
This sounds good!!
I can't wait to read more!!

This is pretty good so far ^^
Aw. Very sad chapter though.
I cant wait to see what happens next :D
Thankks for linking meh to this story =]

Alright first off: *SUBCRIBE*

2nd.The Prologue had so much emotion in it.I can totally feel his crappy self loll

3rd.Theres really no reason to feel nervous my dear.its all good.Just wright what you feel basically :D

and 4th thanks for showing my this story ^_^ i love it really XD

UPDATE SOON!!!

really liking it so far. *subscribes*

This is pretty good.
I like it so far.
It'll be cool to see what happens next. :weird

I'm excited. More please!

I like this, can't wait for the next chapter :]

-subscribes-
fantastic :)

omg this is awesome!!!

Angelus.:

Uh, I'll edit this when I've read it, but I read the summary, and I just thought you should know there's another original slash called The Harsh Truth, with the two main characters called Averi and Skyler..
It's still going, and it's pretty popular.

But yeap, good first chapter - maybe make it a little longer? :arms:

It's actually just a prologue, hence the shortness.
And we picked the names before realizing that they were the main characters in that story and another one by ChemicalTwoon. We didn't do it purposely, promise. :tehe:

Wow.
This is really really really good.
Really well written.
No need for the nerves, to be honest.
(:
xx

Do not be worried on your first co-written story. You need to just let it flow. Plus it seems really REALLY REALLY good. There is room for approvement but in the future this is going to be one heck of a story.

xoxo,
December

Uh, I'll edit this when I've read it, but I read the summary, and I just thought you should know there's another original slash called The Harsh Truth, with the two main characters called Averi and Skyler..
It's still going, and it's pretty popular.

But yeap, good first chapter - maybe make it a little longer? :arms:

I like how you've written this, with the story interspaced with dialogue from his memories. I think it adds a bit more depth to the plot, and I'd like to know who Skylar is, as you haven't mentioned him in the prologue. Is he the user, or someone differant?
I like the banner too. :)
Now I've read yours, will you read my story, Snooker'd, please? It's a X-Men slash fic, but you don't need to know X-Men to follow it. :)

I liked the prologue ^_^ i'll deffo subscribe

Sounds goooooood. :D

Once again, thankyou SO much for sending me the link to this! :mrgreen: It is off to a great start, I can't wait for more! There is so much emotion within the prologue, I can practically feel it myself, as I'm reading! Amazing! I love it so far. I'm subscribing.

Oh, and don't be suprised if I completely comment-rape this story. (;

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LOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I need more!

Awesome first chapter!
Thank you for linking me to this. :arms: