Where the Road Ends - Comments

I finished the other chapters. :D It's wonderful. This would make one badass freaking movie. ._. It's so original and just. GOLLY. Update soon, yeah?

Oh my gosh. I love love love it. :D

only read the first chapter but it looks like a good story and it is very well written.

This was really cute, And I liked the concept a lot :]

This is a really good story. There were some grammar mistakes and all, but not enough to make it an unbearable story. I can't wait for the next update(:

Well, I have to get off because my dad needs on. ._. So, I only got to read the first chapter. And I must say, I love the concept of this. It's soo captivating. I really don't know what else to say. I just love how she offered to help after just meeting him though. XD

I'll comment once again after I've read all the other chapters. (:

I wished they had kissed.
Their cute though.
I like this story :)

...the ending was so cute...

This is really intresting. I usually tend to read Acid Milk.'s work, I'm not sure why I haven't read this before. Both of you have an beautiful writing style, it leaves me wanting to read more. So give me more! :) this is a cute story, I can already feel that it will grow cuter. :)

Chapter 5 is by far my favorite chapter, really cute. :D

I don't have much to say, the story is good, you seem to know what you're doing and dragging the story in an interesting direction. Flawless job!

Update soon!

Cuuuute.
I am in love. <3

I enjoyed the new chapters. They are very sweet and your descriptions are amazing
I love where you two are going with this and it's really encouraging to see how amazingly well you both write for this!

I love this story.
It's so.... simply complex.
I fail at describing things.
But maybe somebody understood what I was saying.
:)

I really enjoyed this chapter.
:)
The little boys were cute!

I love this story so much! Good job!

I've read this before. But I think it only three chapters. Now its five and I like it even more. This time I am subscribing. :)

This is so adorable. I loved the two little kids. This is greatly written. One of my favorites on Mibba. :)

Update soon! <3

I love the concept of going on an adeventure with a complete stranger. Very cute ^^(sorry it took me so long to comment, i got distracted)

I just read the last fourth chapter.
And I really really like this.
It's quite amazing.
And I really really want you to update it. XD

:O Yay, you continued it! :D

"his voice sounding a little bit like he was a mixture of stoned, lame, fat, and a loser."
Hahahahaha I loved that part.

Chapter Four
and covering my
^^ covered

I always felt the needed to
^^ need

“Nope, just Dex,” the girl told Cadee, pulling us down an aisle filled with clocks. “No last name, no middle name. Just Dex.”

“You needed something cool, right?” Dex asked, stopping in front of a shelf. “These are the coolest clocks we have.”
^^ That should all be together, because it's the same person talking.

she froze to the spot
^^ she was frozen to the

clock down in the floorboards,
^^ on not in

:]