Breaking The Silence - Comments

  • Joseph Adam

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    Wooo! Beautiful, darling. This is one of the most memorable stories I've ever read.
    Love it. Really really well done. :D
    February 22nd, 2010 at 07:16am
  • helpless dreamer;

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    That letter was too sincere for me to take seriously. Haha I'm kidding. Lovely way to end this fabulous story (:
    February 20th, 2010 at 06:24pm
  • Nanook

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    Aw, the last chapter! I'm sad. :( But I loved the ending none the less. The letter was good, and I think you pretty much just summed up everything enough for an excellent ending! :) I loved reading this story, you're still an amazing writer! Overall, one of the best stories I've read on Mibba. :)
    February 20th, 2010 at 05:49am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    :]
    February 20th, 2010 at 04:55am
  • light house;;

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    That's like the perfect ending to a story. I loved it. =D
    February 20th, 2010 at 02:02am
  • swell

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    ZOMG IT'S FINISHED.
    When I was reading it I was like, where's Nicky?
    And then when I read the bit at the end I was glad.
    The way you finished this story off was perfecto.
    Loved it :D
    February 20th, 2010 at 01:35am
  • Be My Escape

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    That was the prettiest ending. sorry, pretty sounds weird, but it just fits. It was so wonderfully written. The entire story from beginning to end, everything just fit, and it was written perfectly to a T. You should be so proud of yourself. I loved how the letter tied up everything in the story. The PS was awesome as well, haha. =].
    February 19th, 2010 at 09:50pm
  • SeeUInTheDark;

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    are you gonna have a sequel??!?! I think you should!! I loved this story and I'm sorry i didn't get a chance to comment!! :( but I'm commenting now! ha, I love this story and I really hope this'll have a sequel!!! :D

    Once again, I loved it :D
    February 19th, 2010 at 05:36pm
  • Imperfectly Perfect.

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    amazing. i loved the ending because it wasn’t some fairlytale ending, the girl gets the boy and they live happily ever after, you know? she still may have struggles in the near future. AMAZING. now, off to read another one of your stories. aha
    February 19th, 2010 at 05:30pm
  • glitter on the floor

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    Sad it's over but it was really good.
    February 19th, 2010 at 10:46am
  • dreamer;;

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    Awww I can't believe its over... i loved this story and I think that was the perfect way to end it.
    I loved the PS bit.
    So great!!!
    Well done! You should be proud :)
    February 19th, 2010 at 10:43am
  • Imperfectly Perfect.

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    Update??
    February 15th, 2010 at 05:44am
  • glitter in the air;

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    I love this story :))
    Oh, and I'm Lexi, by the way. I'm new to mibba :)
    February 9th, 2010 at 11:51pm
  • Joseph Adam

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    Aw darling, this was wonderful. Nick is an amazing boyfriend - I'm so jealous of Braelyn!
    Haha, great job. And I'm sorry this took so long for me to comment. I'm such a slowpoke these days.
    February 8th, 2010 at 10:50pm
  • Be My Escape

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    I loved this chapter. I thought you did the future chapter very not cheesily, which made the story even better in my opinion. I also liked how Nick's and Braelynn's relationship progressed. This letter should be very interesting...
    February 7th, 2010 at 09:17pm
  • dreamer;;

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    I loved the first part of this.
    I think its great that shes talking, its great that Carmella has turned her life around
    and I love how her and Nick are together!
    I can't believe this is just about over.
    This is an amazing story :)
    February 7th, 2010 at 06:30am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the first part of the epilogue! :) Can't wait to read the next part-- I want to know what she writes to her mom. But none the less, loved the update! I'm happy that her and Nick are dating. :D
    February 7th, 2010 at 05:36am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    :]
    February 6th, 2010 at 07:44pm
  • Imperfectly Perfect.

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    Yay! this is amazing, can’t wait to read the letter!!
    February 6th, 2010 at 07:37pm
  • glitter on the floor

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    yay they kissed!!!! haha i can't wait for the next one.
    February 6th, 2010 at 06:34pm