Breaking The Silence - Comments

Wow, I really like this story! It's like nothing I've ever read on this site before. Thanks for the change of pace, because I'm getting sick of all the boring fan fictions on mibba. You always know how to write interesting stories :)

THis seems really good Can't wait for your next update

I really wanna know why she doesn't speak. The only things I could come up with were:
-injured speakbox from accident
Well, that's all I could come up with.

I like how she's noticed the boys. WOO JONAS!
And this chapter was not boring at all. Your writing is no where NEAR boring.

Wow. This seems like a really interesting story you have on your hands. The muteness coming from her is an interesting aspect. I wonder what the true reason for her not talking is. And her living in a church is COMPLETELY different. I can tell. This story will be great, and your writing is fantastic as always. Please update soon!

=] love it so far.

Agreeing with Kim there, this is wickedly awesome and I claim this. No claim-age, just CLAIM.

Ha Kim, you can have Claim-age, but not Claim.

I love how you've written this. Some people could stuff the idea up but you make it sound really good and professional. :)

yet again no ownage.... so
OWNAGE! PONEAGE AND ANY OTHER 'AGE' YOU CAN THINK OF :P

sorry, couldn't resist.
haha Alex :P
nahh Im kidding,

Anyways, back to the story.
You have been toying with this idea forever! And now, you finally put it out (again, I think) so you better keep it.
or Else some serious butt kicking is in order.
I love this idea, and I think you started it perfectly.

FIRST COMMENT..

This is really gooooood.
Be proud of yourself...
Exh Oh Exh oh :lol: