Breaking The Silence - Comments

Ooh, leverage! I like the way Braelyn thinks.
And now I'm feeling more and more sorry for her dad. Can he help it that he's a klutz? Although that acid burn attack on her mother was kind of out of line. Even if she seems like a total wench.
Keep up the great work, love.

i neeed to know what happens !! please update soon ;)

Great Chapter(:

Psshh. As if you need more comments XD
But I'm going to give you one anyways.

So let me get this straight.
B wants to talk to her father because her father gave her acid burns that were meant to be for her mother. But I don't get the slapping bit. Why he did it. Even though it was an 'accident'. Maybe he has anger problems towards his wife?
He didn't seem very sorry though when B was hit by the acid...

Anyways, I'm going to be pondering this until you update, so please make it soon!

The second part sort of threw me off, but I totally get everything now. Ah. Loved loved loved the update.

:]

im a little confused, but anyway, update!!

~E!sie

whoa talk about a messed up family. jeez. i see why she doesn't talk.

amazing update though.
so another update soon?

her parents are messed up dude. really good though.

Oh my gosh. No wonder that girl doesn't talk! If that happened to me, I'd be traumatized to no end! That is so horrible, and I want to go find her father to punch him! Oh my gosh!

I have a feeling that maybe just maybe, Nick will help her find her dad? I hope so! Thanks fir the lovely update (:

Carmella's friends are creeps. But I'm glad she appreciates Brealyn's help (: now I'm off to read Chapter 14 !

Didn't see the acid burn coming.
Fantastic update. I wonder what her dad did to stop her from talking...
like the Acid Burn wasnt enough already. psht.
haha, anyways more soon :)

I don't know why, but I kind of have faith in her father.
She seems to believe in him.
Really beautiful writing - still loving it!

Oh my gosh. Acid burns?! No wonder she is in so much pain! I can't believe her father would do that, whether it was an accident or not. I wonder what else he did to her. This is CRAZY!

SCORE! ACTION!
well, kind of.
And her father better not have raped her or something like that. Because that'd be suckish. The raping.
But then why would B wanna find her dad if he raped her. That doesn't make sense o.O

And yay for Nicky finding out!
Gosh, I LOVE THIS. :D

i bet she isnt talking because he didnt talk to her after the accident because he felt so bad. that's just a guess tho.

Loved the update! Can't wait for the next one! I want to know why she isn't speaking! So please, update soon! :)

an acid burn D=
ouch.
and an accident...psh what ever.
i hope she finds him and can find closure so she can talk.

oh and amazing chapter =]
update soon?

great chapter!!! update super soon!! =D

~Elsie