Breaking The Silence - Comments

  • dreamer;;

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    This keeps getting better and better.
    Carmella is going to be very interesting indeed.
    Can't wait for the next update :)
    October 31st, 2009 at 07:26am
  • light house;;

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    i agree with everyone else it was so not an epic fail.
    amazing update can't wait for more =]
    October 31st, 2009 at 04:54am
  • Juno

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    definitely not an epic fail! it was awesome.
    October 31st, 2009 at 04:45am
  • swell

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    I love this.
    And yay! I guessed right! Though I wondered what would've happened if Braelyn walked in on Carmella having sex, now that would have been funny ;D
    October 31st, 2009 at 02:11am
  • crookedsouls.

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    That was deff. not a epic fail.
    Just so you know.
    I thought that chapter was amazing :)
    You're a extremely talented writer.
    Can't wait to see what happens next.
    October 30th, 2009 at 10:46pm
  • Be My Escape

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    Mackie, this was not an epic fail. I'm telling you. I honestly can't get enough of this story. It's so perfect and just bleh! EVERYTHING! I reallyyyy want more of this story. I want to see how all of these different relationships evolve. =].
    October 30th, 2009 at 08:00pm
  • helpless dreamer;

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    Awe, that was so nice of Brealyn(: I totally thought Carmella's problem was like drugs. Haha. But I hope she gets the help she needs soon.
    October 30th, 2009 at 05:15pm
  • dreamer;;

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    Ok, I feel horrible bout the late comment.
    Like seriously,

    So, here I go....

    Firstly, I think her issue is that she is too in love with Nick Jonas.
    And she thinks his legs are far too sexy.
    Secondly, I really think she has some kind of addiction.
    Thirdly, I am so glad that Braelyn is finally opening up to Nick.
    Those two make a cute couple.

    :)
    Can't wait till the next update.
    October 27th, 2009 at 11:59am
  • helpless dreamer;

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    Okay, so I pretty much can't believe I haven't read any of your fabulous stories. And I'm glad I stayed up and finally remembered to read this one. Its beautifully written. One of a kind. I love how original it is. I'm glad for Brealyn's progress. She's making friends. Good for her. Update soon my dear,
    October 26th, 2009 at 05:07am
  • iheartAlexGaskarth!!

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    i think she has a drug problem, or at least thats the first thing that i thought of...
    how did nick no to bring paper and a pen??
    i LOVE this story btw!! :)
    October 26th, 2009 at 12:18am
  • ExFRIEND

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    i love it continue xD
    October 25th, 2009 at 06:03am
  • harris.

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    I like the original plot of this story.
    It's pretty rad.
    I can't wait for more updates.
    October 24th, 2009 at 08:29pm
  • Poison.The.Hero

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    update soon
    October 24th, 2009 at 05:55pm
  • Beautiful.mess;

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    Love it!!!!! Update soon!
    October 24th, 2009 at 03:56pm
  • Joseph Adam

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    Oh, this is a beautiful story! You've got me hooked - I'm really looking forward to finding out everything. It's wonderful!
    Nick's so sweet, and I love your originality with the characterisation.
    (:
    October 24th, 2009 at 08:44am
  • glitter on the floor

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    really good :]
    October 24th, 2009 at 08:10am
  • JayyJailbait

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    i love your stories so much, they get addicting :D
    October 24th, 2009 at 04:09am
  • swell

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    Gosh, finally Nick gets some brains.
    :D

    Carmella has a druggie problem, slept with the Reverend - hahaha. Alcohol? Started to NOT believe in religion?

    She's anti-religion, isn't she.

    Hehehe, update soon!
    October 24th, 2009 at 02:44am
  • light house;;

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    finally a little communication between her and nick!
    i loved the chapter and the new twist with the youth leader.
    update soon =]
    October 24th, 2009 at 12:59am
  • Violent Ends

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    love this story its so awesome !!!!
    October 24th, 2009 at 12:35am