I love this. And yay! I guessed right! Though I wondered what would've happened if Braelyn walked in on Carmella having sex, now that would have been funny ;D
That was deff. not a epic fail. Just so you know. I thought that chapter was amazing :) You're a extremely talented writer. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Mackie, this was not an epic fail. I'm telling you. I honestly can't get enough of this story. It's so perfect and just bleh! EVERYTHING! I reallyyyy want more of this story. I want to see how all of these different relationships evolve. =].
Ok, I feel horrible bout the late comment. Like seriously,
So, here I go....
Firstly, I think her issue is that she is too in love with Nick Jonas. And she thinks his legs are far too sexy. Secondly, I really think she has some kind of addiction. Thirdly, I am so glad that Braelyn is finally opening up to Nick. Those two make a cute couple.
Okay, so I pretty much can't believe I haven't read any of your fabulous stories. And I'm glad I stayed up and finally remembered to read this one. Its beautifully written. One of a kind. I love how original it is. I'm glad for Brealyn's progress. She's making friends. Good for her. Update soon my dear,
i think she has a drug problem, or at least thats the first thing that i thought of... how did nick no to bring paper and a pen?? i LOVE this story btw!! :)
Oh, this is a beautiful story! You've got me hooked - I'm really looking forward to finding out everything. It's wonderful! Nick's so sweet, and I love your originality with the characterisation. (:
Carmella is going to be very interesting indeed.
Can't wait for the next update :)