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  • the smitten kitten;

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    likin the new layout
    and good update <3
    December 25th, 2009 at 05:23am
  • Concord

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    :D I just found this story and I dont really know alot about Patrice B.
    But this story is H O T <3 great job!
    December 25th, 2009 at 05:14am
  • hockehhockehya

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    So cute!
    December 25th, 2009 at 05:13am
  • Ltsghwks

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    I liked the wide range of feelings from the sadness after the loss to the sweetness that was the two of them holding hands during breakfast.
    December 19th, 2009 at 09:16pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    such a cute update
    loved it
    December 18th, 2009 at 07:01am
  • the smitten kitten;

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    cahuute updatee
    December 18th, 2009 at 02:14am
  • Rylie_

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    Sweetie, don't worry about not updating in a month. We all understand. I forgive you!

    So, this chapter was emotional. I could feel the sadness in the locker room. Losing in the playoffs is always hard on a team. Bergy is a strong man, shoot all those guys are strong.

    Did I see some forshadowing? (I think I spelled that wrong!) I think an epic chapter of sexytime is ahead.

    Can't wait for more!!
    December 17th, 2009 at 11:57pm
  • lynne1988

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    Ughhh they need to DO IT already. (Lmfao, I'm not sexually frustrated or anything.)

    I felt bad for Patrice, seeing as I was rooting for the Bruins (MY BF MILAN LUCIC) and this brought up those old disappointed feelings. BUT, now they have more free time to be cute and steamayy togetherrrrr. Lol.

    I want a boyfraaan like Patrice. A real boyfran, not Cam or Milan.

    ....In case my absurdness (HEH, remember when I made fun of you for making me say "absurd" in your story?) didn't tip you off, I'm having a bit of an issue with my guy. HOPE YOU AND YOURS ARE DOING BETTER. Blahhhhh.

    MORE SOOOON. I think I'm going to update Carlos later, because I really have no excuse for not having that out. Unless it's the chapter where I still have half written in my notebook.

    Lmfao, aaaaand I'm done.
    December 17th, 2009 at 09:10pm
  • hockehhockehya

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    Love it! They're sooooo cute together.

    BTW, wicked glad I'm following you on twitter to see that you updated then I get my lil "story update" email. Very exciting.

    Can't wait for more! Best of luck with school and work!
    December 17th, 2009 at 05:15pm
  • Jessica;

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    An update!
    It was nice to see the effect Amanda had on Patrice even after that tough loss.
    It says tons about their relationship.
    And uhhh, they both want each other.
    So, sexy times soon?
    <3
    December 17th, 2009 at 05:15pm
  • schennsational;

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    OM NOM NOM NOM NOM.
    This was the best possible thing to wake up to because a] it was fucking freezing this morning when I went to drive my mom to work. She was all "no, its not cold. you don't need a jacket." Me being an idiot, I believed her and went outside in my pajamas. WELL GUESS WHAT. IT'S MINUS FUCKING SIX DEGREES OUT AND I WENT OUTSIDE IN SHORTS AND MY BERGY JERSEY AND I WAS FUCKIN' COLD.
    Anyways, enough of that.
    THIS CHAPTER WAS SO CUTE BB. I liked how you didn't focus too too much on the loss.
    That would have killed me. (because no, I'm still not fuckin' over it!)
    But this was really good. And fuck yes do I want Patrice.
    I MISS YOU.

    PS: Ben update; it's coming up! <3
    December 17th, 2009 at 01:20pm
  • thisafterlife

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    sexy time nao, plz ;D

    i loved this update, the entire tone of it was wonderful despite the loss. the way you phrase things just flows so well and i hope that you can update again soon, darlin' <3 ily!
    December 17th, 2009 at 09:53am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    love this!
    November 27th, 2009 at 07:50am
  • HockeyNightInCanada

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    Great update! :-D
    November 20th, 2009 at 09:17pm
  • squashedbychara

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    I just caught up with this story and I'm absolutely loving it!
    November 17th, 2009 at 01:53am
  • Ltsghwks

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    Yay! An update. I loved that Amanda was there waiting for Patrice when he got home from Carolina.
    November 17th, 2009 at 12:32am
  • lynne1988

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    Omg. I know you sent it to me before, but IN CONTEXT, this: Flipping on the light, he froze in his tracks. Passed out among his sheets and blankets, wearing nothing but one of his jerseys was Amanda. So many questions ran through his head, but he couldn’t be bothered to figure out the answers. He stripped down to his boxers and slid into the bed next to her, wrapping his arms around her. She stirred lightly in her sleep, her eyes briefly opening. She smiled up at him before she drifted into sleep again, clinging onto Patrice tightly. was even more perfect. Like, seriously. I like how he was like "fuck the questions for now, I'm going to cuddle." SO. FUCKING. PERFECT.

    And omfggg, when he got all posessive, that was hot. Since they barely know eachother and she was all "Are you jealoussss?" And he was all "YES. YOU'RE ALL MINE."

    Okay, so it didn't happen like that, but whatever.

    OMFG ALYSSA. SO STEAMAAAY. Heh. Omfg. That was hot. Like, I thought chapters before this were all sexual tension-y, but this one is by far the best. And then Patrice had to be all "Okay, time for my questions nao."

    Stupid.

    But sweet, I guess. =/

    Lmfaoooo. Okay, it was fucking adorable.

    I loooooooooove this story so much! Update it sooooooon!!
    November 16th, 2009 at 09:15pm
  • ComingxUpxShort

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    ...

    I repeat,

    ...

    WHERE THE HECK HAS THIS BEEN ALL MY LIFE? (Well, not really, but, yeah.)

    omFgItotallyloveditespeciallywhenhewasallclosetoherbutdidn'tdoanythingIwantedtosmackoneofthem!

    Well. Now I have to calm down because I was getting myself all excited by of how awesome this story is. I love it. I love Patrice... once again, I love this, and I demand some serious sexy times. :P
    November 16th, 2009 at 06:48pm
  • Jessica;

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    Aaaaaamazing.
    I liked that seeing Amanda immediately put Patrice in a better mood.
    It was cute of her to just show up there.
    And I love the was so adamant about telling her how beautiful she was.
    Perfect.
    More soon. <3
    November 16th, 2009 at 05:17pm
  • the smitten kitten;

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    yay finally an update!
    November 16th, 2009 at 05:09pm