There Are Still Rules To Break - Comments

  • thisafterlife

    thisafterlife (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    i loved this update so much and the layout and banner is so easy on the eyes ;D <3 great job, darlin'! i can't wait for more!
    November 16th, 2009 at 08:37am
  • schennsational;

    schennsational; (105)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE.
    I'm so mad at myself right now, I hope you know.
    And not just real me, either.
    HOW COULD I LEAVE PATRICE. I would tell myself to shove my fear away and GET THERE.
    Hot Patrice waiting? Fuck yes!
    But I seriously love this story and I'm sorry my update wasn't nearly as good as yours.
    I just. UGH THIS STORY IS SO WONDERFUL DAMMIT.
    I can never compare to your writing, no way.
    BUT YAY FOR UPDATES. I CAN HAZ MOAR?
    I love this.
    <333333333333333333333333
    November 16th, 2009 at 08:35am
  • schennsational;

    schennsational; (105)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    *ahem* I miss Patrice.
    November 5th, 2009 at 03:27am
  • Ltsghwks

    Ltsghwks (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Location:
    United States
    For a story that's really only had one kiss shared by the two, it seems about as steamy as Patrice's bathroom. I love it.
    October 25th, 2009 at 10:55pm
  • HockeyNightInCanada

    HockeyNightInCanada (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    103
    Location:
    Canada
    Awesome chapter!
    October 25th, 2009 at 10:33pm
  • the smitten kitten;

    the smitten kitten; (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Canada
    lovley chapter!
    October 23rd, 2009 at 02:20am
  • hockehhockehya

    hockehhockehya (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    I love this more and more with each chapter! I also love how you update so often!!

    I cannot wait for more :)
    October 21st, 2009 at 11:03pm
  • Rylie_

    Rylie_ (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    Snap, crackle, pop!

    I have never had a thing for a Bruins player but reading this makes me want to go look this dude up.

    Even though I know diddly about Bergy, I love this story. I find myself feeling like I'm in it. The way you write sucks me in till the last sentence. Keep up the awesome, out of this world updates.
    October 21st, 2009 at 10:55pm
  • lynne1988

    lynne1988 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    Well, you know how I feel about the whole, waking up on her stomach thing. And is it weird that when you said She felt his hot breath on the bare skin in between her panty-line and where the shirt she wore had ridden up. i could practically feel it? Kudos Lyss, for making it THAT real, lmfao.

    This story is so hot.

    And it isn't even SEXY TIMES yet.

    But heyyy, kissing is a start. =) Now all he has to do is get carried away, throw her on the bed and have his way with her.

    MORE SOON.
    October 21st, 2009 at 09:07pm
  • kare_bear

    kare_bear (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    so here's my proposition.
    drop out of school, stay home, and write all day.
    ksweethanx.
    October 21st, 2009 at 04:52pm
  • Jessica;

    Jessica; (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    Bahaha at Amanda's mines.
    It's true kids.
    She owns this beautiful man.
    Anyways, this was amazing.
    I like that Patrice is all like touchy feely and I'd probably pass the fuck out if he ever touched me like that.
    More soon. <3
    October 21st, 2009 at 04:51pm
  • schennsational;

    schennsational; (105)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    MINE. MINE. MINE. MINE. MINE. MINE. MINE.
    That is all I have to say on that subject.

    No, but really, this was really good and I know it took you forever to write and all, but just as I predicted it would be, it was amazing. Not sure how many times I can tell you this, but you honestly write me perfectly. Like, I don't even know how you manage to do it, but you do. You have me to a t and Patrice.. well you know how I love him no matter what but your characterization of him is also perfect.

    Because y'know... we really are meant to be and everything. ;)

    Seriously though, this story is perfect just like everything else you write and I love it so much. I don't even know how many times I can stress that without sounding redundant/like a broken record. It's just... so... perfect. I dunno, I love it. So, update soon? Please? For me? I'll update Ben!

    PS: I so want to be held hostage in his apartment. askdjfhaskjfasdf.
    JUST FUCKING GIVE ME MORE, DAMMIT.
    October 21st, 2009 at 04:37pm
  • gurlygirl87

    gurlygirl87 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    Canada
    aww i really like this story!!! Can't wait for more! :)
    October 11th, 2009 at 05:24am
  • the smitten kitten;

    the smitten kitten; (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Canada
    I LOVEE THISSSS!
    October 10th, 2009 at 10:14am
  • The Walrus

    The Walrus (200)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    Amazing. <3
    October 10th, 2009 at 02:36am
  • Ltsghwks

    Ltsghwks (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Location:
    United States
    Loved it. Patrice is such a flirt. I thought their cuddling together was really cute. And I so get Amanda's reaction to his bathroom.
    October 10th, 2009 at 01:45am
  • smilesandfrowns

    smilesandfrowns (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    i just read up to this chapter,
    and i really like this. (:

    it's super cute!
    update SOON!
    October 10th, 2009 at 01:05am
  • life.in.technicolor

    life.in.technicolor (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    awww.... that was the cutest chapter yet.
    October 9th, 2009 at 09:20pm
  • hockehhockehya

    hockehhockehya (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    If he speaks more french, I'm going to die. It's so great, like, so great. More soon? Yes.
    October 9th, 2009 at 04:16pm
  • lynne1988

    lynne1988 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    So, I'm definitely supposed to be getting ready for school right now, which means I'm going to be late. But I don't care. THIS NEEDED TO BE READ.

    "He laughed and grabbed her hand again, pulling her into what he told her was his favorite room, his bedroom."

    Your bedroom is my favorite room too, Patrice. HANDS DOWN.

    Duuuuuude. This story us going to kill me, you know. He's just so....sexy with her. I love it.

    I WANT HER TO LEARN TO LOVE HIS BED TOO. Just saying.

    More soooooon!
    October 9th, 2009 at 01:55pm