Did You Get What You Deserve? - Comments

  • Critical_Lemon

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    I'm not a stalker if you invite me to hang out and in fact we walk side by side. Okay update, I wonder how the Hobo died, I hope it was grousome.
    November 11th, 2007 at 12:19pm
  • Bellkura

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    But yay fluff. And I know that their parents won't question then too much.
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    I love her rant about how James really loves Dani. And yay more fluff despite plot devices being thrown everywhere.
    Can't wait until we get the trial of the rapist. You will do good and make it dramatic.
    AND THE FLUFF. <3
    November 7th, 2007 at 12:58pm
  • Bellkura

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    *flails* WHY THE HOBO, WHY?
    DO NOT WANT. DO NOT WANT.

    Atlhough you could've been a bit more sadistic without going further than you already did.
    November 7th, 2007 at 12:53pm
  • Bellkura

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    And and and, we must get Dubdub to forget law school, just be a writer girl!
    Agreed!

    In another comment for the story though, honestly, what the hell was that letter box thing all about?

    Oh and wait, the ** are end of authors notes.
    November 7th, 2007 at 12:50pm
  • Bellkura

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    *hugs* You know I love you too. <3 <3 <3 As I know you do me, even I'm really bad when it comes to reading chapters and do it five at a time.

    What's the stars after my name for though?

    I hate bitches. End of story.
    November 7th, 2007 at 11:47am
  • Superhero.

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    YAY I GET A MEDAL!
    I would like to thank my mother, my father and my dog. And all my friends who have supported me throught this. And to all those people who always have faith in me. Thank you.

    Aww fluff (:
    If I was Frank, I'd be 'I DONT CARE IF YOUR SISTER'S BLIND! GET AWAY FROM MY DAUGHTER YOU'RE ONLY... (how old are they?!)'
    November 4th, 2007 at 06:42pm
  • Critical_Lemon

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    And and and, we must get Dubdub to forget law school, just be a writer girl!
    November 4th, 2007 at 05:07pm
  • Critical_Lemon

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    This is a really cool story, I like it, I like it alot. Fluff is great. I try and inject fluff in my songs, I sing sad, depressive things then add something kind of cute.
    November 4th, 2007 at 05:06pm
  • Nurse Espinosa

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    Aw thats sweet (:
    Teehee
    November 4th, 2007 at 04:19am
  • Superhero.

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    Aww so cute!

    'I.. Love... You...'
    I would have just said it fast like 'iloveyou'
    And then he'd be like 'WTF?' And I'd be like 'MWAHHAHAH YOU SHALL NEVER KNOW!'
    November 2nd, 2007 at 11:59pm
  • Nurse Espinosa

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    :O
    I love this story.
    The last chapter scared me!
    Your a really talented writer, more soon?
    = D!
    October 30th, 2007 at 05:22am
  • Monique LA

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    !!!!!!! :shock:
    October 24th, 2007 at 03:04am
  • Superhero.

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    It's just habit for me to comment now...

    Anyway.
    Evil Man.
    I'm never helping a homeless person now.
    AND IT'S YOUR FAULT!
    :D
    But that was an exciting update :)
    October 24th, 2007 at 12:27am
  • Superhero.

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    Awww you put me on!
    YAYYYY!

    And um and um.
    How is a mail box a tree?
    Aren't mail boxes red?
    And trees are... not red.
    Or it could be autumn...
    October 21st, 2007 at 06:42pm
  • Superhero.

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    Gahhh!
    Can I punch Laura for her of something?
    October 15th, 2007 at 11:13pm
  • Bellkura

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    Ah.... the usefulness of sign language.
    Sucks if you have to spell out everything though.
    October 14th, 2007 at 08:04pm
  • Bellkura

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    I do believe that "?" has been stollen from me.
    And despite chapter 10 moving a bit too fast for my tastes, I loved the moment her dad announced he was betting with Frank on how long they'd take to realise.
    Although, the conversation had to be read through four times before I figured out the dynamics of relations of people to each other and... blargh.
    October 14th, 2007 at 08:00pm
  • Bellkura

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    *spazzes over the dialogue at the beginning of chapter 8* You know how to keep a person on their toes for a whole chapter don't you.
    That was actually quite brilliant. Makes me proud to be your onee-san.
    October 14th, 2007 at 07:51pm
  • Bellkura

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    GO JAMES!
    October 14th, 2007 at 07:07pm
  • Bellkura

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    I still get confused with who all the people are. Extremely confused.
    You were getting lazy in the dinner chapter, you left me guessing who was saying what.
    Shakespeare is hard to memorise. But not if you're trying especially hard to puzzle what it means.

    OH NO, James isn't going to be Romeo. But wait, he could be understudy and something bad will happen and then it'll be all good. Maybe? If I comment hard enough?
    October 14th, 2007 at 05:34pm