November 15th, 2008 at 11:11am
Did You Get What You Deserve? - Comments
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Do I have to comment properly? Cause I'm just..........awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!November 15th, 2008 at 09:44am
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Comments? Like this?
I liked it. Your writing genuinely is improving. No cringe-worthy dialogue!November 15th, 2008 at 05:59am -
Awww... *wibbles*
Not too overdone with Lloyd's confession either.November 15th, 2008 at 05:54am -
OHMIGOD I LEARNT HOW TO SAVE PEOPLE AT SWIMMNG.
You have to drag them by either the chin, or around the chest. :)November 6th, 2008 at 09:18pm -
OH SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT DID I MISS YOUR BIRTHDAY?
AAAH I'M SORRY IF I DID.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY LOVELY. (:
Aaaaah yay meee! i was laughing so hard when i read it ;)October 27th, 2008 at 05:26pm -
Heee, cuteness. Although I do feel sorry for Cari... jet lag AND a four-or however long it took recording session.October 23rd, 2008 at 06:21am
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That chapter was love, glorious, glorious love. I really felt it too, really sweet and beautiful.October 22nd, 2008 at 10:15am
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CARI CAN COME BACK!
I've always wanted to play drums :)
(I thought that was quite a good idea. :))August 27th, 2008 at 05:56pm -
Chapter 70: Ticket to Ride or Why You Should Never Have MSN Conversations With Someone Looking Over Your Shoulder Who Knows The Other Person
Also, I see the real-life (kind of) as well.August 27th, 2008 at 02:30pm -
Drum machine, duh. They don't empty your fridge or steal your girlfriend. Or alternatively, a session musician.
I love being able to spot the little bits that are going on in your life that you put in the story =DAugust 27th, 2008 at 12:26pm -
James is a pervert.August 4th, 2008 at 01:09pm
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Strangely, that cafe scene was AWESOME.
I almost want to draw fanservicey anime style fanart with Alec fishing the coins out. *grins broadly*August 4th, 2008 at 10:51am -
*fangirls you for making Lachlan mention how truly ancient the laptop is*
Dementia/deludedness is not a funny thing, but still, it's somewhat amusing to see the utter confusion arising. And it's so fun to see the little 'game'. :D
*huggles you better*August 4th, 2008 at 10:48am -
Yes, yes I did.August 4th, 2008 at 05:46am
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Deluded people, lulz.August 4th, 2008 at 04:47am
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I like Alec.July 25th, 2008 at 10:40pm
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I dunno... Alec does seem playful and he has been given the right motivation to be suggestive... and the fact that he is (obviously) loyal to those who've done something for him suggests that the entire sequence WASN'T unbelievable.
You've also been writing him for ages now. Trust yourself.July 24th, 2008 at 08:48pm -
I refuse to support your addiction! =PJuly 24th, 2008 at 07:57pm
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Family reunions are even more love than comments. Gosh you make all the kids so cute!
I would say the dialogue was a bit...meh. Sort of agreeing that it was built-up in an over-dramatic fashion, and then a bit of what they were saying just didn't flow or seem 'right'.July 23rd, 2008 at 11:13pm
I think James leaving should be sadder.
if you do a last chapter with him, i want to be crying, okies?
good.
goodbye.