Did You Get What You Deserve? - Comments

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Story luff!!!!

SO FLUFF! YAY!

*dances* Yay! My wish came true! ^w^ *hugs*

Yeah the cross-examination is a bit odd but not as odd as there being no closing statements or that the case wasn't thrown out for lack of evidence.

I'm really tired.
And my head hurts.
And I'm going round Ellie's.
Oh shit, that's gunna hurt my head.

I actually forgot what I was going to say.

So uhh...
I like it.
More soon?

Now I wonder how Neville even got himself a wife in the first place. Although if I recall correctly, Keith's mom left them. Or something. I have bad memory.
But it'd make sense if she did.

Stupid man doesn't know how to handle relationships, that's for sure.
Now all we need is some scene of Keith standing up to his father saying that all his relationships are his business and to butt out.
Going back to actually commenting on the story, the cross examination is a bit weird. Although I know practically nothing of the court process.

Critical: Yeah! I mean all the times you've ever had a sleep over with someone older than you. That surely can't count as molestation.
If so, Bleachathons are DOOMED. DOOMED to the deepest reaches of hell.

Hahahaha, what a cock Mr Dean is! I think you saved the storyline with that revelation.

I think it's meant to be a shocking revelation that Keith is maybe the teacher's son or something similar. Sibling or not its hardly molestation.

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I kinda feel sorry for the lawyer. Having to deal with little!Alec...

D: Keith is related?
Or is it just one of those flukes or am I forgetting something here? Knowing me, probably the latter.

But anyway, go the pointing out of invasion of privacy!
Even if the footage is rather silly and is barely incriminating. Because elder siblings are allowed to have younger ones sharing a bed with them. *nods*
Especially if it's nightmares.

PERVERTS.

I forgot who Keith was for a while. *giggle*

Moreeeee.
Grr.

Yay, update! I agree, it was a weird story line and I think I said that to you when it first appeared. How on earth would they even get those cameras in there? And that was hardly evidence to prosecute too :P

If you do that you will be held in contempt Cari.

In the trail there should beeeeee me.
In a pretty dress (:

And I should stand up and go, "I OBJECT!"
That would be fun (:

I'm in a self centred mood today.

More soon?

I don't suppose there's some way for you to do a retcon and bring up the exact details later on? *is sad over not getting the details*

Oooh, little!Alec seems to have a penchant for getting involved in things that lead up to court.

Response to chapter 54
Well, it does indeed appear as if Mr. Dean is an ass beyond compare. Althought the question is, what do he stand to gain by making these accusations? Is he trying to get back at the Way family for some past action or maybe he's trying to get close to someone in that class. *gives a critical look at Mr. Dean*

Odd paragraphing is... fun. Especially with an abstract story in which you need the odd paragraphing for it to make sense.

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........................................................Cari...........................................................................................
.......................................Just no......................................................JUST NO.

Yeah, this part of the story is more than a bit odd and unlikely.

TEENAGE.
IN THE PACE AGE.
THAT'S WHEN LOVE BURNS.
NOW IT'S YOUR TURN.

Ahem.
Sorry about that (:

I think Mr Dean should rape everyone and then film it and they find him jacking off to his porn videos (:

ILY.
More soon.

I Bloody Love This!

I said so in my last comment, but seriously, It's fXcking awesomme dude!

Update Soon!

In all seriousness, this has become my favourite Mibba story!

Xxxx
Laurie

I didn't think Keith was evil, I didn't really get anything from him, he was a pretty disposable character. I just saw a place to say something funny.

And why do you feel it nessecary to announce your ideas on who I do and don't like to the world? You are now excluded from my confidences on the issue :P

I find it sad but almost kinda funny how this is turning out. Funny in a wow, OMG the police actually believe the lies without having actually talked to Alec. Though it is realistic that they would. Charges first, investigation second!

Oh My Bob!

I Love This Story...
It Kicks Ass..
Update Soon!!

Xxx