I'll Be Right Beside You - Comments

The wait was totally worth it.

I can only imagine how hot Ben looks in nothing but swimming trunks.

Love the story so far. It's starting to get really good.

oh my. this is just SO perfect.
and dude.. this new guy at work
is a SKETCH!
seriously.. I don't like this punk.. :/

Ben’s words, I miss you. Kaner says he does, too
ohhh KANER!!! :D

He had only shrugged his shoulders in response and told her, without missing a beat, that he’s just have more of her to love.
BEEENNN!!! OH MY GOSH! YOU CUTIE! :D so adorable <33

Ben didn’t have the patience to teach her. (They had tried that once. Ben had gotten frustrated when Evelyn couldn’t understand the difference between hooking and slashing. He walked away in a huff and told her to look it up.)
oh ben.. you WOULD be impatient :D still love him tho

more soon pleaseeee!
sorry it took so long? at least I think it did?
idk I haven't had much time to do ANYTHING with this torture called school...
<333 lovedd it darling! :D

I can so picture Ben Eager wearing that Hawaiian shirt, just like I can so picture him struggling to drive while Evelyn is changing cloths in the car. I can't to see what happens next to the two of them and if anything happens between Phoebe and Hjalmarrson.

I can so picture Ben Eager wearing that Hawaiian shirt, just like I can so picture him struggling to drive while Evelyn is changing cloths in the car. I can't to see what happens next to the two of them and if anything happens between Phoebe and Hjalmarrson.

Phoebe & Hammer?
Nice.
Btw, picturing Ben in that Hawaiian shirt made me literally laugh out loud.
More soon. <3

Also I would KILL to see him or any of those boys in that shirt!!

Aaaaaaaaaaaahhh theyre going to hawaii!!!! If you need any help with anything let me know haha, and I promise no pressure. =)) So Excited for more. Be Te Dubbs. Emotional... Could she possibly be pregnant?!?!? I get carried away sometimes with drama hahahah.

Oh totally loved it!
Michael is already stirring up some drama.
Not really liking that.
Ben and a Hawaiian shirt...love it!
Can't wait till the next update.

Well guess who fail-boated and didn't comment on chapter two? Me! I'm so sorry about that... I did read both updates and they were lovely (: Um I'm just gonna comment on chapter three sooo I can get on writing some of my own things... mmm kay? Okay.

I find it kinda cute that Evelyn gets so concerned whenever something happens to Ben. I can see that happening in real life... anyone being concerned about their boy when they are on the ice. Concussions are on the rise (thank you research methods for letting me know this). Anyways! You would have your character wearing stilettos, a tight skirt and a blouse to a hockey game. That's so not how us Canadians roll.

I love how Kaner is her best friend. That's just hilarious. =D

Phoebe and Niklas are cute the way they are 'gawking' at each other haha.

Lol at Ben wearing a Hawaiian shirt with dancing girls on it.

Oooh beach time! Hawaii time! I want to go to a beach but no... I am stuck in the land where snow IS coming. Although I should not complain it's been sunny lately. But I'm digressing.

Great updates Lyss. I can't wait to see where you are going with this one... as I have no idea! More soon I hope! <3

Oh snap! MICHAEL IS ALREADY CAUSING DRAMA. No me gusta. Even though it didn't last long, haha.

What I wouldn't give to be in the Hawk locker room. Mmmmm. I loved the way you described Niklas. Totally true, haha! ROCK HARD BODAAAAY.

OMFG. I hope you describe their Hawaiin vacation. I want some sexy hammock times. And bunt Eager. And him twirling her in the ocean and stuff. That's right, TWIRLING HER IN THE OCEAN.

THEY SHOULD SURF.

loved the update!

OH God it's like you know Phoebe!!!! it's freaky accurate.
But anyway i realllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly loved it and i can't freaking wait for the next update!!

NIKKKKKYYYYYY!!!!!! =D
You are my idol. I'm running off to go update Davey because this chapter just made me so happy. And mucho gracias for the shoutout, haha (:
I love this story, I love you, I love Bevelyn, I love Phjalmy. (That's our couple name, shhh.)
I can't wait to see what goes down in Hawaii!

give me this story.
it's actually mine now.
just fyi.
i think pkane needs a cute little girlfriend.
he seems lonely to me...
=]
i kid
LOVED IT LYSS!
<3

I just read all 3 chapters & I love love loveddd them : P ! I was so happy to see that you were doing a sequel ! I read the first story and thought it was amazing ! Evelyn is one lucky girl to be going on a trip to Hawaii with Ben Eager ! What I wouldn't give...hahaha : D Anyways, great job with this story ! I can't wait for more !

You know, I have the flu... but now I have Ben's naked upper body stuck in my head. So all is good. I praise you for that.

awwww tease. poor ben. (L)

Awww I am so happy for Pheobe!! And ben and her are just ahhh so adorable

loveeed it!
moreee soon, pleaseee!

Picturing Ben in a Hawaiian print shirt had me laughing so hard, you have no idea!
I can't wait to see what happens when they get to Hawaii.
More soon!