I'll Be Right Beside You - Comments

so I actually ended up printing out this chapter this morning so I wouldn't have to wait until after school to read it and I'm so glad.
I had a huge grin on my face in math and I was getting weird looks, but it was worth it.
I wonder what Ben will do if she decides to go..will she go?
AHH ITS KEEEEELING. Updatee moarr!

I love it!! Please update soon!!

Awwww! Seriously, Ben and Evelyn are, like, the cutest couple ever! I love how they decided to just get married. It's soo romantic. :)

He shrugged, “We wait until someone notices the rings?” Evelyn laughed, wondering how long that would take.

Well we all know I would not be the one to notice, so it's a good thing everyone else was there. Hahahaha.

Cam and Aimee were late for everything, and even though Ben and Evelyn had just gotten off a plane an hour before, somehow she still expected to be at Phoebe’s before Cam and Aimee. HEH. I CAN'T HELP IT. Cam sex > Being on time.

And, I must say, Phoebe handled that a lot better than I would have. I would not have forced a smile, I would not be all "Oh it's nothing, I'm just selfish," I would not be "I'll get over it."

I WOULD CUT YOU.

But you know this.

Also, I'm not amused with this upcoming drama. I haven't been amused with it FOR A LONG TIME NOW, but this little wedding didn't distract me. Oh no. It just made me more anxious. Evelyn better come clean to Ben soon. OR HE WILL BE AS UNAMUSED AS ME.

awwwe.

LOVED IT!!!! They are so cute, such a perfect couple!!! Hope they can work through whatever drama comes there way!!! More soon please!!! :)

I love this story! Ben and Evelyn are so real and perfect...I'm just nervous now that he found out about CUNY...I really don't know whats gonna happen with that.
update soon! :)

:( but they just got back! and now its gonna be ruined??:(
uncool.hahha.
cant wait to see what happens next!
sooooon please?
keep up the ammmaaaazzzzinggggg work(:!

Alyssa:

Make sure to send me a link with all those stories onto my page :)!

I love this story!! And your awesome girl!

Love love love it!! Your story of Ben and Evelyn is amazing, it's sensual, emotional, and pretty much everything somebody wants in a relationship.
I can't wait to read more, but I have a bad feeling that there's going to be more drama....
Oh noes. D:
Well, keep writing! And I can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh, and thank you so much for reading the first chapter of my very first story!! I have posted up to chapter three now if you'd like to read it and tell me what you think, it'd be very much appreciated.
Dirty Little Secrets

such a fantastic chapter ;)
loved it!

first of all, swoon swoon SWOON at ben being all "I love you mrs. ben eager." love it.
second of all, rawr rawr RAWRRR at the sexytimes! how cute she got all choked up doin' the mattress tango with her new husband. so cute. babies now, pleage. and an appearance by a hot brunette who likes to pounce a certain captain. or a certain mophead. jussayin. KSWEETHANXLOVEYOUBAI.

I LOVE this story, and Eager.
Update soon
Oh, I loved the wedding night!
can't wait for the bumpy ride ahead!

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, me goodness! I mean, I'm speechless. This is amazing. It makes me think about the coffee shop and Ben leaving his wallet and then WHAM! They're married and they're making amazing love. xD It seems like just yesterday I was reading the first chapter going, "Oh! Ben Eager! Cool. Must read." Little did I know it would totally be sooo epic. So, so, so, so, SO epic.
And I want to say that even though I get all blushy and stuff when I'm reading sex, I love this because it has details, but its not like reading an anatomy textbook. And its got EMOTION. Okay, so that's my pet peeve - when I'm reading a story with sex in it and its purely physical and what the characters are feeling on the outside. This has both the emotional side to sex and the physical side, which is apparently not an easy thing to do.
It was so funny when I got the notification - yes, I did, but it might have been late or something. I was out in the middle of my pasture with my horse before I left for school and it was eerily silent. My phone beeped to send me the notification and I opened my email. I squealed again! Hahahaha. It scared my horse so much that he flinched and backed away from me about five feet. Well, when I got to school, I got on the internet on my phone and started reading it in the middle of my Latin class. I started blushing madly and got a few comments from people wondering what was making me blush so much. To get them off my case, I just said, "hockey player" and they all went, "Okaaaaaaaaaay... don't wanna know."
Anyway, I'm definitely sad that there is going to be trouble for the newlyweds, but drama is always loved by me. :)))))

Love love loved it !
They are so damn adorable together.
Evelyn, you're extremely lucky ! Sooo jealous right now, hahaha.
I'm a little scared of this future drama for the newlyweds. Hopefully they will sort everything out.
Anyways, great update & great job with this story =)

i'm late for this =[ i'm sorry! the past couple of days have been pretty hectic and i haven't had the chance to do much writing or reading, but this was the most important update on my list!

thank you, thank you, thank you for updating <3 i cannot say it enough. i love this story so much that it's ridiculous, as i'm sure others do, and this update was just like icing on the cake. such a romantic and cute update, but with some serious undertones. everything's going to be different now! so exciting!

more soon, okay? ;]

that was cute :) very nice update. i want more. :]

that was perfect! is she going to move to new york still??

Whoa heeeyy, that was hot (:
Um I still can't wait to see what everyone's reactions are back home,
and what happens with Evelyn and New York!
More soon, please?

Nice way to spend a wedding night.

I'm ready for what ever you throw at us, bad or good.

Can't wait for the next update :)