I'll Be Right Beside You - Comments

  • This story makes me want to go kidnap Ben and never let him go...
    Unless it's to games of course. :)
    I love it still.
    Update soon.
    January 23rd, 2010 at 07:02am
  • But but but everything was going so well. They were happy, a little buzzed/tipsy and having a good time. Then his dang hunger after sexytimes led to your usual drama that you always add haha. She should have talked to him about that. Buuut I guess she would have applied before they were married but still -- it would have a big impact on him too. *sigh* She just... ugh I'm all conflicted about what I want to have happen -- part of me says that she should stay and part of me says she should go. Dang it Lyss look what you did. Great update! You always keep it interesting and drama filled haha. <3
    January 23rd, 2010 at 07:00am
  • whoa whoa whoa whoa.
    HOW COULD YOU END IT THERE!?
    Oh jesus woman, you're trying to kill me. I know it.
    Loved this chapter as always. Playoff beards=big turn on. No one can deny the playoff beard!
    January 23rd, 2010 at 06:55am
  • Absolutely love this story
    January 20th, 2010 at 01:22am
  • I loved Burish's reaction to finding out Ben and Evelyn marriage. I can't wait to see wait happens next in regards to the CUNY application.
    January 16th, 2010 at 06:47am
  • Drama ahead ? uh oh ...
    I hope Ben is going to be okay with her following her dreams, if that's what she decides to do.
    Anyways, you probably know I loved the update =) Fabulous job as usual <3
    January 13th, 2010 at 03:16am
  • uh ohhh that's gonna be interesting
    January 12th, 2010 at 08:22am
  • omg! i love the new chapter.
    I wonder what's going to happen when Evelyn finds out about her getting into that journalism school. I wonder how Ben is going to feel.
    Boy this drama ahead is making me nervous but extremely excited for more.
    please more. please :(
    January 12th, 2010 at 06:54am
  • Damn, I knew that was coming.
    He didn't seem really all that upset but I'm sure the longer she waits to mention it, the more upset he'll get.
    It makes me a little nervous.
    More soon. <3
    January 12th, 2010 at 04:54am
  • Dun. Dun. DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN.

    Poor Benny boy. -_- But before I get to that, I want to tell you what I think about the rest of the chapter. First of all, I was really nervous (but really anticipating) their return to reality. I was wondering how the gang - Pheebs in particular - would react to their marriage and I thought it was quite hysterical how Adam spit out his drink. xD He's silly and goofy. Once again, I really love the interaction between everyone and how they all just gel together and Evelyn feels like its her little family. I've always wanted what Evelyn's got: a loving husband and a group of friends that can say anything to each other without feeling self-conscious.

    Secondlyyy, I absolutely melted when Ben carried her up to their apartment. <333 It was so adorable and so cute and gahalksdfjasl;djkfasd;fjasdfkeysmash. I HAVE SAID THIS SO MANY TIMES, BUT I LOVE BEN AND EVELYN'S LOVE. You are just AMAZING at character development and relationship development. You put the conflicts in there that eventually make the relationship stronger, but you put those cute things in there that just make all of us readers melt and go, "Omg. I want that." I feel so bad because I feel like my comments are repetitive, but its so true.

    I'm really nervous about how this whole CUNY thing is going to go with them... if she goes - which I think she should even if it means leaving Benny behind - then I'll be sad. But I'll be sad if she doesn't go, too. :( Looks like the drama llama has arrived.

    PS - this made my day:

    “Seriously,” She started. “How are we going to tell them we got married?”

    He shrugged, “We wait until someone notices the rings?”/i]
    January 12th, 2010 at 03:08am
  • Loved the update!
    I am so excited to see where this CUNY application leads!
    January 12th, 2010 at 03:07am
  • amazing update, like always!
    can't wait for the start of the drama!
    January 12th, 2010 at 03:05am
  • Oh no, here comes the drama. She better bring up CUNY quickly, because we all know it's not going to be pretty if Ben has to be the one that brings it up.
    And, I'm glad Phoebe wasn't too upset with Ben and Evelyn's elopement!
    Can't wait for more!
    January 12th, 2010 at 01:57am
  • Oh no... I'm reallly interested to see what Ben does about CUNY, and if he brings it up first or if Evelyn does. And if she doesn't, how he'll react!
    And yes, I'm a bit upset that my best friend didn't include me in her wedding. But it's okay, because then I think about the beautiful man I wake up to each morning and the world seems okay again. (: Lmfao.
    And um I agree, people really need to comment on this story. 108 subscribers is crazy! And this story is amazing, I love it. And I love you and you should defenitly update this quite soon.
    January 12th, 2010 at 01:45am
  • ohmygosh! i'm obsessed with ben and evelyn! i'm soo happy you made a sequal!! keep going with it the story is amazing! (:
    January 12th, 2010 at 12:47am
  • haha the comment above mine just made me literally LOL. I sense drama as well...secrets are never a good way to start off a marriage. yikesss! more soon! :)
    January 12th, 2010 at 12:26am
  • oooo i sense drama starting! please dont have them be mad at each other for too long or better yet mayb theyll have hot angry makeup sex...lol...update soon?
    January 12th, 2010 at 12:22am
  • i smell trouble and it doesn't have a very nice scent, lyss.

    okay, now, as much as i am almost embarrassed to admit this, my favorite part of this entire update was the mental image that i got when you wrote about how ben was biting his lip; i can just see his pearly white teeth sinking into his perfectly pink tinted lip. ungh, whenever guys do that it turns me on so much. they look so innocent and confused. ben doing it is even better because he's supposed to be this huge macho man and here he is, cautiously nibbling that plump piece of flesh as he thinks about snooping through his wife's mail. oh, ben eager, why do you have to make the most simplest things sexy? *big sigh* that man is amazing, end of story.

    thank you for updating <3 you know i love this story more than words =* love you! more soon, por favor!
    January 11th, 2010 at 11:53pm
  • I think Evelyn needs to keep it hush hush for awhile about the New York letter. She really needs to think long and hard about this. If she doesn't mention in a few weeks then Ben needs to bring it up. It may cause some drama but if that's what it takes to get her to go to NY then it needs to be done.

    I'm ready for the drama! Can't wait!
    January 11th, 2010 at 11:00pm
  • THIS KARA CHARACTER SOUNDS LIKE A REAL KEEPER ;D
    she'll definitely stir up the story, i can feel it. lololol.
    poor bennyben for being so confused by the letter. once again, evelyn needs to keep her trap shut and her eyes on the prize ; babies. lots of them.
    January 11th, 2010 at 10:30pm