Scream It Like You Mean It - Comments

awwwwwwwwwwws I love how he threw out the number!!

And Raven.
I will help and assist you to jump into the fictional world & beat Hannah.

I don't like her one bit.

Thank goodness Gerard threw her number away.

Great! What's Hannah up to now.
and they are both major teasers ha ha!

Great update!

Just as I thought, HANNAH IS A SLUZ BAG! And I hope she chokes on her sick venomous vile >.>.
And if she even thinks about getting near Gerard, so help me god, I will find a way to get into the fictional world and kick her skanky ass!

Love the teasing between Gee and Londs, quite cute :D

UPDATE SOON! Not that soon >.>

I really hope that's the last we see of Hannah
She wants Gerard back and will most likely do anything to get him back.

SOMEONE'S LYING?!

.......AGAIN?!

WHAAAAA?

Love the update :)

Wow, quick updates FTW

Nice as always :)
well, i trust Gerard. glad they've sorted things out.
more?

New reader/subscriber :)
love the story. Your writing style is unique and the little paragraphs reflecting on life are clever and insightful :)

Maybe it`s just me, but I`m very interested in Pandora`s character. If you are ever at some sort of writer`s block, it might be interesting to explore her past :)

That argument reminds me of all the ones me and my boyfriend have, always thinking the other person doesnt want to be with them.

Very realistic, bravo :]]!

wuvs it!

And this shall be my last comment...

I love the other updates they where just so cute and I like how in them all even thought they've been physical you don't see or hear Gerard trying to get her to do it again or force her in to it, but they talk about it and how you can just feel the love the two share and how being physical isn't needed...

As I re read these chapters I smile to myself at how you've grown as a writer and at how beautifuly our charecters are growing and loving.. I can actually picture the scean's as they happen in this story even though you've given off very little detail, thats hard to do for some but you do it well, keep up the amazing work.

Update soon please.

<3 Kat.

I have to say the smut chapter was done wonderfully, I am glade it was you writing it and not me, if it was me they'd still be waiting on the update...

I love how Glow in the dark, Cherry, or normal ended up fitting in, glad all our perv readers, Just kidding guys, I am the perv not you, got a kick out of it... Makes me feel good to know I can atleast make people laugh with something I say..

Anyway way awesomly done, I've read a few stories on this site and the dreaded Quizilla, where talented writers have had good stories up till the sex part and it just tank there an never finish. But you my friend wrote it wonderfully and well..

I think its good you only wrote it out because you felt it was needed, I know a lot of writers who would have just thrown it in there because they felt its what their readers wanted.

Okay so I havent been my comment whoring self, because some how this story got marked as inactive which sadens me, so now I will comence to commenting this shit out of this.

Love the update.
I really want to know who lied though.

Someone else lied!?
Goodness, I NEED to know!
Excellent update. :)

Awww im so happy for them both.
I hope bert will just butt out!

the truth comes out!

wuvs it!!

That update was quite sweet to be honest.
I really enjoyed it.
I hope London really does stay away from Bert...

I don't like Hannah, she sounds like a slutty bitch >.>.

And Bert, grr. I really liked him, that lying little prick.

And if Hannah tries to get back with Gee I WILL NOT BEH HAPPEH!

Great update though :D