I've finally finished catching up on this story. Phew. And I'm probably gonna start on that Frank Iero one, too. ;D BUT WHAT A WHORE BERT IS. D:< But I am really curious about the whole thing. I didn't expect the Frerard thing to come up at all. And I wanna know who Hannah is. o;< Update sooooon. <3
Oh well I'm here to make a comment because we both want you to update ^__^...what is that Bert up to? I can't wait for the next part, keep up the wonderful work.
dude. You should write what you think is best. I personally find sexual scenes a bit awkward to read but for this i totallt see the point. It was to show that Genard is still worried about the age difference and about hurting her. I think thats it... But really. Just write what ever you think. Obviously no one will say thats wrong because they are not writing it. If they think its wrong... Well thats what a shank was invented for. :) lol. But yeah. I like the update. So adorable. Haha. Well yeah. :D update and i will comment. :) okay. :) Ciao!