Ruby red suspenders? I'm in love. Could you write more? I'd love to read it! I like Ava. Usually I prefer sassy heroines who are strong, or ones who are on their way to being strong and sassy, but I like Ava. She seems honest, not in the way that she doesn't lie but in the way that she's an honest portrayal of a person. She also doesn't lie to herself, as far as I've noticed, which I like. Did Dylan write her lyrics on the bathroom wall? That might be one of the cutest and weirdest things I've ever heard of in romance.
It's a really good story, and I've really missed your writing after you left quizilla.. but you haven't posted in a year, and I'm quite worried about you (and your writing) even though your laptop is broken and you're trying to get it fixed. Hope everything's okay!
YOU SHOULD REALLY TAKE THIS DOWN YOU FUCKING BITCH! AFTER THE LORI HART INCIDENT SOMEONE SHOULD REALLY FUCKING HURT YOU. SERIOUSLY? YOUR LAPTOP SUFFERED? SHUT THE FUCK UP! AND NEVER WRITE AGAIN YOU FUCKING CUNT! :) And, oh, yeah, I know I'll get banned; but it was toally worth it.
This is amazing! One of your best work :) The imagery and metaphors are amazing, I can't stop reading. The last chapter kept me hanging lol, but anywayz keep up the goodwork! :D
This reads like a cute indie movie that I'd watch over and over. I love every single character - even the background characters are interesting and have a developed personality. Hands down this is one of the best stories I've read on Mibba - and Ava and Dylan are freakin' adorable. :D
I was just re-reading this, and then I realized that I've never commented. Which is sort of silly cuz' you're story is pretty much the deal breaker for me joining Mibba. (best decision ever) So I just wanted to say how cool and creative this story is. And how much FUN it is to read.
This might sound weird, but I'm going to say it anyways. You you are one of the internet authors that inspired me the most to start writing for myself. And now I got myself on the PF good fiction list. So thanks.
You're such a great author :] This is wonderful. I kept on reading, I got addicted for some reason. It makes me excited, because I know there's something more in the end :) Aaah, well I'm talking too much now! Well anyway, you're writing style is REALLY great. I've been reading your stories in Quizilla and I, um, followed you here. hehe..
i really like this story and i gotta say, your a much different writer than a lot of the other people on here, and i think that helps make the story even better. =)