On the Other Side of Nowhere - Comments

  • SkyLyte

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    Hi! I hope you're doing okay.
    December 9th, 2013 at 01:36am
  • who cried wolf?

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    update please :)
    July 24th, 2012 at 04:21pm
  • love.thy.goldfish

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    Ruby red suspenders? I'm in love.
    Could you write more? I'd love to read it! I like Ava. Usually I prefer sassy heroines who are strong, or ones who are on their way to being strong and sassy, but I like Ava. She seems honest, not in the way that she doesn't lie but in the way that she's an honest portrayal of a person. She also doesn't lie to herself, as far as I've noticed, which I like. Did Dylan write her lyrics on the bathroom wall? That might be one of the cutest and weirdest things I've ever heard of in romance.
    January 5th, 2012 at 09:32pm
  • love.thy.goldfish

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    I'm on chapter two; I like French Toast. I hope he has a bigger part in the story =)
    January 5th, 2012 at 08:38pm
  • who cried wolf?

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    this is just adorable!! please update soon :)
    July 6th, 2011 at 04:41pm
  • SnoOkms

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    Are you planning on ever finishing this story? It was in my opinion, one of your bests so far.
    March 1st, 2011 at 12:28pm
  • Never Nothing

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    I love it and I'm glad you ditched quizilla but I really hope you update soon as you haven't updated since forever ago :(

    Hope you get your laptop fixed too, keep writing.
    February 7th, 2011 at 08:27am
  • hahamelissax3

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    It's a really good story, and I've really missed your writing after you left quizilla.. but you haven't posted in a year, and I'm quite worried about you (and your writing) even though your laptop is broken and you're trying to get it fixed. Hope everything's okay!
    November 7th, 2010 at 07:16am
  • LILU

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    YOU SHOULD REALLY TAKE THIS DOWN YOU FUCKING BITCH! AFTER THE LORI HART INCIDENT SOMEONE SHOULD REALLY FUCKING HURT YOU. SERIOUSLY? YOUR LAPTOP SUFFERED? SHUT THE FUCK UP! AND NEVER WRITE AGAIN YOU FUCKING CUNT! :) And, oh, yeah, I know I'll get banned; but it was toally worth it.
    October 28th, 2010 at 11:29pm
  • xlaura17x

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    Oh Lordy, this is amazing! NEW OBSESSION! xox
    October 12th, 2010 at 08:51pm
  • Reckless

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    I really, really like this story. Dylan and Ava are so cute :)
    I'm subscribing!
    August 21st, 2010 at 11:40pm
  • Makeme8P

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    This is amazing! One of your best work :) The imagery and metaphors are amazing, I can't stop reading. The last chapter kept me hanging lol, but anywayz keep up the goodwork! :D
    August 7th, 2010 at 12:54am
  • southpaw

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    This reads like a cute indie movie that I'd watch over and over. I love every single character - even the background characters are interesting and have a developed personality. Hands down this is one of the best stories I've read on Mibba - and Ava and Dylan are freakin' adorable. :D
    June 30th, 2010 at 12:29am
  • lexay.

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    i miss this story.
    June 19th, 2010 at 01:07am
  • Kichixchan

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    I really luvvv your writing. :) And I love this story more~^-^ It's so cute and realistic.
    May 2nd, 2010 at 05:37am
  • RetroUpsideDown

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    I was just re-reading this, and then I realized that I've never commented. Which is sort of silly cuz' you're story is pretty much the deal breaker for me joining Mibba. (best decision ever) So I just wanted to say how cool and creative this story is. And how much FUN it is to read.

    This might sound weird, but I'm going to say it anyways. You you are one of the internet authors that inspired me the most to start writing for myself. And now I got myself on the PF good fiction list. So thanks.

    :)
    April 2nd, 2010 at 06:00pm
  • kelsea124

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    This is a really great story, you can probably spead it over a large amount of chapters. Please update :)
    March 31st, 2010 at 03:47am
  • renee;

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    You're such a great author :] This is wonderful. I kept on reading, I got addicted for some reason. It makes me excited, because I know there's something more in the end :) Aaah, well I'm talking too much now! Well anyway, you're writing style is REALLY great. I've been reading your stories in Quizilla and I, um, followed you here. hehe..
    March 29th, 2010 at 02:46pm
  • xoStella

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    i really like this story and i gotta say, your a much different writer than a lot of the other people on here, and i think that helps make the story even better. =)
    March 21st, 2010 at 10:37pm
  • Never Coming Back

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    I miss this story. I saw this video and thought about this story for some reason. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6iTxYFfMNUU
    March 16th, 2010 at 09:25pm