I'm trying to be more constructive with my comments so here goes: I really love your style and how well you balance the dialog and such. And I don't like Dick.
I read your story on Quizilla, Lori Hart, and all I have to say is that you know how to set the the scene for any story. You make the characters come alive.
As much as I adore the story, I think I just may love your writing more.