But It's Better If You Swear to Shake It Up. - Comments

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Favourite lines: “Mm, Brend, we did it,” she stated.

“Did what?” I asked her.

“We successfully made it through our first night as parents.”
--- AWHHH! That was the cutest thing ever :D

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“Okay, Mollie-kins, what's your deal now?”
--- *grins* I called you Mollie-kins in my last chapter. THE NICKNAME STUCK! WOO!

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“You should have seen him when the pregnancy test was positive. He was practically jumping up and down, and half of his speech was in Spanish, so I have no idea what he said when he found out,” she laughed.
--- Awhhh, Gabe <3

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“Hi, Kingston!” Cali said and Kingston turned to look at her through sleepy brown eyes.

“Does he ever show expression?” I laughed at his blank face while Pete looked at him smiling.
---Wow, you really channeled your Inner Sunny there with Cali… HI KINGSTON! *giggles*

No, I got confused with the Ryan thing when she was explaining the names. And was like “WHAT?!?! She’s naming a kid Ryan?!?! I thought they were Liliana and Mollie!!!?!? So yeah...
Help for the sequel? What kind of help?
Sunny-Lee <3

amazi ng ending

Omg that was a cute way to end it!
Im sad its over.
But Im happy there is going to be a sequal!
I cant wait to see what its about!

i didnt know some babies didnt cry when they were born.
well, i did know that some didnt cry but i always thought that meant there was something wrong.
only one more chapter to go... omg.

Sunny-Lee:

Favourite lines: "Liliana...." I thought for a minute. "Ryan."

"What?"
- - - Because that was a “WTF?” Moment until She explained it. Lol

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Brendon nodded before looking back down at the girls. His girls. Our girls. "God, they're beautiful."

"Of course they are. I told you they were going to look just like you," I said and Brendon smiled.

"They have your nose," he told me and I shook my head.

"No they don't. Everything about them is you. And I hope it stays that way."
- - - Because it was totally the most adorable thing to say ever! And it was a nice ending.

It was a short update, and so I only had 2 favourite lines, because the first part was spent freaking out… lol
Sunny-Lee <3
P.S: I feel lost without you replying to my massive favourite line comments.
*is lost from last time*
WHERE AM I!?!?!
*giggles while looking at a map, slightly freaking out*

I already told you what the twin's names were. That shouldn't have confused you.

I'm sorry. I had no idea what to say to your last one, honestly. I'm sorry, I hope you weren't too lost. And you found your way back.

One more chapter to go! And i need your help for the sequel.

Favourite lines: "Liliana...." I thought for a minute. "Ryan."

"What?"
- - - Because that was a “WTF?” Moment until She explained it. Lol

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Brendon nodded before looking back down at the girls. His girls. Our girls. "God, they're beautiful."

"Of course they are. I told you they were going to look just like you," I said and Brendon smiled.

"They have your nose," he told me and I shook my head.

"No they don't. Everything about them is you. And I hope it stays that way."
- - - Because it was totally the most adorable thing to say ever! And it was a nice ending.

It was a short update, and so I only had 2 favourite lines, because the first part was spent freaking out… lol
Sunny-Lee <3
P.S: I feel lost without you replying to my massive favourite line comments.
*is lost from last time*
WHERE AM I!?!?!
*giggles while looking at a map, slightly freaking out*

cute names for the babies

Omg this story is so good.
Im glad I talked you into updating it.
Update update update !!!
Whatever happened to Dani?!

OH MY GOD CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you gotta hate them... but this one was good:)

omg shes in labor!!!

Favourite Lines: "Brendon, you don't even want to start with me right now. I feel like a fucking weighted beach ball. I have two babies inside my stomach that are due to come out any fucking day now. And when that day comes, I'm the one who has to push them out of my vagina! You have no idea how terrified, irritated, emotional, and uncomfortable I feel. So until you experience something like this, I suggest you shut the fuck up and do whatever I ask you two because you put these two little girls in my fucking womb and made me like this!" I told him and he put his hands up in a surrendering fashion before ducking away into the kitchen.
- - - HA HA HA HA HA! Way to go Cali! That’s the way to yell at someone when you’re massively preggers :)

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At that moment the baby decided she was going to let out a loud yell in complete gibberish, and I looked at Kara with my eyebrows raised.

"Well, Sunnie doesn't think so," I told her and she laughed.

"Guess not."
- - - Ha ha, I love when babies do that, and interrupt a completely serious and intense conversation :) Totally the best time to scream loud baby gibberish!

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"Where's Gabe?" I asked Izey.

"Who knows. Last time I saw him, he was trying to help William with their new little love child," she answered.

"Do I want to know?"

"Mindy thought it would be 'helpful' to Will if he got a fake baby to take care of to prepare himself for when the baby comes and he has to take her. So she bought him one, and now he has to run around with it. And Gabe has sort of adopted it. So it's a little Gabilliam love child," she answered and I laughed.
- - - Awhh! HA HA HA! Gabilliam =Love That made me laugh. I want Gabe to get a baby, but at least he got a fake one to raise with Will :)

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"Well, Gabriel, my dear, sweet Gabriel who wants me to actually have a real baby with him, fell asleep with the kid on the couch, and ended up dropping it on it's head when he rolled over. William freaked out on him and started yelling at him and hitting him, and Gabe just sat up and looked at him before falling back to sleep," she said and I laughed.
- - - HA HA HA HA HA! ‘Nuff said.

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"Probably go crying to the next person in line," I said, then turned at hearing my door open and close. "Oh! Is my baby boy here?"

"Yes! WIlliam has arrived!" William twirled into the room, followed by Gabe who was holding a bundle of baby blue in his arms.

"Well, I was talking about Kingston, but you'll work, too, Bilvy," I told him and he smiled.
- - - HA HA HA! That’s cute :) I love William. Yes, I say that a lot… Have I mentioned to you about how much Prince Caspian resembles William Beckett? I was like “SMALL WILLIAM BECKETT!?!?!” it was awesome :) I love Narnia :)…Did you know that at the end of the books they all find out that they died on the train and Narnia actually was fake and that they’re dead? Sorry to ruin the whole thing for everyone who actually reads my massive comments besides Katie…and also sorry for ruining Narnia for you as well Katie…

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"Yeah, there's a little baby!" I said, swiping the carrier away from Pete and taking it back to the couch with me. I unbuckled Kingston, who was smiling and blowing bubbles at me, and picked him up and held him close to my chest. He grinned at William, who had taken a place sitting next to me, and reached over to touch the male's cheek. And as soon as his tiny fist came in contact with Bill's hair, he tugged on it sharply, making the man hiss in pain.

"Ow, boy! You shouldn't pull hair, that's not nice!" William pointed a finger and I rolled my eyes.

"Say, 'well then you should get a haircut, Uncle Will'," I said and he laughed, making the baby in turn snort.
- - -HA HA HA! About the hair pulling, HA HA! About the ‘well then you should get a haircut, Uncle Will’ Awhhh to Kingston snorting :)

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"Ow!" I sucked in a sharp breath of air and sat up, hands immediately finding their way to my stomach.

"What's wrong?" Gabe asked, turning to look at me and getting everyone else's attention.

"I don't know. My stomach, the babies," I groaned and felt Brendon kneel down in front of me.

"What's wrong with the twins, Cali?" he asked and I shook my head.

"Don't know. I think I need to go to the hospital," I said, standing up with his help. I stood still for a moment, leaning on Brendon as Gabe grabbed my arm to steady me.

"Are you going to be able to walk?" Brendon asked me, holding me and looking at me seriously.

"Yeah, just give me a minute," I said, breathing heavily.

"Shit, Cali! You're bleeding!" Pete said, and I felt the front of my jeans, pulling my hand up to see blood on my fingertips. I looked up into Brendon's horrified face as a sob left my throat.
- - - Okay, so at first, I’m like ‘she’s just going into labour’ and then I was like “WHAT BLOOD?!?!?!” *hyperventilates* *dies* *waits patiently in the afterlife to be revived*
And so, in conclusion, I did in fact hyperventilate, and WHAT ONLY A FEW CHAPTERS?!?!?!
WOO! GO SEQUELS!
YAY! Go choosing favourite parts alike :)
I was going to say that I never have favourite parts to my own stories, but then I realized I’d be lying… lol
ILY! <3 xox
Sunny-Lee <3

cute update

Hahaha, i totally know who does 'Jackass'. It's none other than the wonderfully talented....... GREEN DAY!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE the story by the way ;)

Sunny-Lee:

Favourite lines: "Yeah, but I don't have to be so exclusive with condoms. I don't think I've ever had to look over a box to make sure whether it's effective or not," I told her, looking over one of the boxes in my hand.

"Well, maybe you should, because they must not be working that well if we're sitting here doing this," she told me, grabbing four boxes and walking away towards the cash register. I put the box back down on the shelf and followed after her.
- - - First of all because it was funny and I enjoy Izey’s mean-ness and yet not mean-ness and secondly because it said ‘sitting’ when in fact, they were standing :)

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"Open the fucking door," I told her and it came open.

"There isn't enough room in here for you," she told me and I rolled my eyes.

"Then maybe you should leave."

"You both should leave. I do need to pee to actually take these tests," Izey said, trying to push me out the door.

"Why do I have to leave? I've seen you naked a million times, and this could possibly be my child," I told her and she shot me a look.
- - - Because Victoria is hilarious :) She’s totally like ‘you don’t need to know before I do if she’s preggers!” *giggles*

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"I think you guys should have a baby," William said and she looked at him. "Seriously. You guys would make pretty babies."
- - - AWHHHH! WILLIAM IS SOOO ADORABLE! [heart]William[heart]

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"Yeah, you and Gabe would make pretty babies, too, but I don't see that happening anytime soon," Izey told him and he laughed.
- - - HA HA HA! It was right after the line above, but I didn’t read it until after I put down that I liked that line and so it’s a different section…

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"You don't know. We've been known to do some pretty weird things," he said and I shrugged.

"There you go then, Gabe. If you want babies, you can go see William," she said and I laughed.

"You're funny, babe," I told her, kissing her nose. "No, the only person I want to make pretty little babies with is you."
- - - HA HA HA! I did it again! I get too caught up in picking favourite lines :) I STILL love William because of what he said and because he’s sexy. I like what izey said after Will, and then it was adorable what Gabe said last. *breathes deeply*

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"You know. you're the only person I've let call me Bell since my grandmother died. My mom's not even allowed to call me that," she told me and I wrapped my arms around her.

"I wonder why that is."

"Because I absolutely love you. And it sounds amazing when you say my name," she said, giving me a quick kiss. "And I know you won't take no for an answer."

"I love you, too," I said, ignoring her last sentence and she rolled her eyes.
- - - Awweh! ‘nuff said.

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"Somebody needs to. You'll be good with her. You're obviously supposed to have her, and it could be worse," I told him.

"How you figure?"

"She could leave you with twins."

"That's not funny."
- - - HA HA HA HA HA! It totally is funny! *giggles* I always like last lines of chapters… because you choose the end of the chapter for a reason, you know?

O_O My dragon is SOOO not planning to eat me! How could you say that?!?! I just sleep in her warm tummy, GOSH Get it right! *giggles*
:D I had a nice long favourite line section there for you, did you enjoy it?
Where are all your other commenters? It actually told me that you updated (because Ted loves us currently) although you also told me...
Sunny-Lee <3

This was an extremely long commnent. Haha. I told you, nobody else comments except for you. It's annoying. And you're long comments are nice. You chose all my favorite parts, too.

Favourite lines: "Yeah, but I don't have to be so exclusive with condoms. I don't think I've ever had to look over a box to make sure whether it's effective or not," I told her, looking over one of the boxes in my hand.

"Well, maybe you should, because they must not be working that well if we're sitting here doing this," she told me, grabbing four boxes and walking away towards the cash register. I put the box back down on the shelf and followed after her.
- - - First of all because it was funny and I enjoy Izey’s mean-ness and yet not mean-ness and secondly because it said ‘sitting’ when in fact, they were standing :)

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"Open the fucking door," I told her and it came open.

"There isn't enough room in here for you," she told me and I rolled my eyes.

"Then maybe you should leave."

"You both should leave. I do need to pee to actually take these tests," Izey said, trying to push me out the door.

"Why do I have to leave? I've seen you naked a million times, and this could possibly be my child," I told her and she shot me a look.
- - - Because Victoria is hilarious :) She’s totally like ‘you don’t need to know before I do if she’s preggers!” *giggles*

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"I think you guys should have a baby," William said and she looked at him. "Seriously. You guys would make pretty babies."
- - - AWHHHH! WILLIAM IS SOOO ADORABLE! [heart]William[heart]

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"Yeah, you and Gabe would make pretty babies, too, but I don't see that happening anytime soon," Izey told him and he laughed.
- - - HA HA HA! It was right after the line above, but I didn’t read it until after I put down that I liked that line and so it’s a different section…

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"You don't know. We've been known to do some pretty weird things," he said and I shrugged.

"There you go then, Gabe. If you want babies, you can go see William," she said and I laughed.

"You're funny, babe," I told her, kissing her nose. "No, the only person I want to make pretty little babies with is you."
- - - HA HA HA! I did it again! I get too caught up in picking favourite lines :) I STILL love William because of what he said and because he’s sexy. I like what izey said after Will, and then it was adorable what Gabe said last. *breathes deeply*

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"You know. you're the only person I've let call me Bell since my grandmother died. My mom's not even allowed to call me that," she told me and I wrapped my arms around her.

"I wonder why that is."

"Because I absolutely love you. And it sounds amazing when you say my name," she said, giving me a quick kiss. "And I know you won't take no for an answer."

"I love you, too," I said, ignoring her last sentence and she rolled her eyes.
- - - Awweh! ‘nuff said.

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"Somebody needs to. You'll be good with her. You're obviously supposed to have her, and it could be worse," I told him.

"How you figure?"

"She could leave you with twins."

"That's not funny."
- - - HA HA HA HA HA! It totally is funny! *giggles* I always like last lines of chapters… because you choose the end of the chapter for a reason, you know?

O_O My dragon is SOOO not planning to eat me! How could you say that?!?! I just sleep in her warm tummy, GOSH Get it right! *giggles*
:D I had a nice long favourite line section there for you, did you enjoy it?
Where are all your other commenters? It actually told me that you updated (because Ted loves us currently) although you also told me...
Sunny-Lee <3

Sunny-Lee:

Favourite lines: "Shut up, Wentz. Wait until Joe knocks you up. You'll feel it, too," I told her, rolling my eyes and she smiled before standing up to hug me.

"And let's hope that's a long time from now," she smiled, patting my back and I laughed.

"A very long time. I don't think Joe deserves to be castrated at such a young age," I said, smiling at him as Pete grinned.

"No, I like my dick in my pants," Joe said, covering his crotch.

"And that's exactly where it should stay," Pete agreed as Hurley walked in the room.
- - - Because it was funny, what can I say? It was quite hilarious 

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"Don't call me a fucking skank! That's not what happened and you know it!" Izey yelled away from the phone and I heard him yell back. "He thinks I'm cheating on him!" she said, this time to me.

"Why?"

"I don't know! Because he's a crazy nut job!" Izey yelled.

"Because I found you in bed with Nate! What the hell would you think?" Gabe yelled in the background and my eyes went wide.

"Izey, what did you do?" I asked her and I could almost feel the angry tears that she had pouring from her eyes.

"We weren't doing anything!" she yelled, probably for the millionth time.

"Then why were you laying in bed with him?" Gabe yelled at her.

"He was comforting me!" she yelled back at him.

"Why would he need to be comforting you?" Gabe asked, his voicing rising just a bit more.

"Because I think I'm pregnant!" she yelled, letting out a sob, and my mouth fell open.
- - - Because it was like BAM! TWIST! And I was like “O_O Izey preggers again?!?! SHE DIDN’T WANT THE FIRST ONE! THIS IS UNHEALTHY! TWO PREGNANCIES SO CLOSE TOGETHER?!?” and so yeah, I had a nice reaction for you :)

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"I'm upset that you told my best friend something you couldn't even tell me. Especially since this would be a huge part of my life, too," he said. "But the only time I was mad was when I thought I caught you with Nate."
- - - Because it was adorable! And you’re like “AWHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!” with a lot more exclamation points :)

I have a matress to sleep on.... and a warm dragon that has fire to cook my meals.
What's so Harry Potter? My Dragon? Or your carpet?
*raises eyebrow*
Sunny-Lee <3

Haha, I thought a twist would be good.
Your dragon's Harry Potter, duh! He's probably planning on eating you anyway.

Favourite lines: "Shut up, Wentz. Wait until Joe knocks you up. You'll feel it, too," I told her, rolling my eyes and she smiled before standing up to hug me.

"And let's hope that's a long time from now," she smiled, patting my back and I laughed.

"A very long time. I don't think Joe deserves to be castrated at such a young age," I said, smiling at him as Pete grinned.

"No, I like my dick in my pants," Joe said, covering his crotch.

"And that's exactly where it should stay," Pete agreed as Hurley walked in the room.
- - - Because it was funny, what can I say? It was quite hilarious 

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"Don't call me a fucking skank! That's not what happened and you know it!" Izey yelled away from the phone and I heard him yell back. "He thinks I'm cheating on him!" she said, this time to me.

"Why?"

"I don't know! Because he's a crazy nut job!" Izey yelled.

"Because I found you in bed with Nate! What the hell would you think?" Gabe yelled in the background and my eyes went wide.

"Izey, what did you do?" I asked her and I could almost feel the angry tears that she had pouring from her eyes.

"We weren't doing anything!" she yelled, probably for the millionth time.

"Then why were you laying in bed with him?" Gabe yelled at her.

"He was comforting me!" she yelled back at him.

"Why would he need to be comforting you?" Gabe asked, his voicing rising just a bit more.

"Because I think I'm pregnant!" she yelled, letting out a sob, and my mouth fell open.
- - - Because it was like BAM! TWIST! And I was like “O_O Izey preggers again?!?! SHE DIDN’T WANT THE FIRST ONE! THIS IS UNHEALTHY! TWO PREGNANCIES SO CLOSE TOGETHER?!?” and so yeah, I had a nice reaction for you :)

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"I'm upset that you told my best friend something you couldn't even tell me. Especially since this would be a huge part of my life, too," he said. "But the only time I was mad was when I thought I caught you with Nate."
- - - Because it was adorable! And you’re like “AWHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!” with a lot more exclamation points :)

I have a matress to sleep on.... and a warm dragon that has fire to cook my meals.
What's so Harry Potter? My Dragon? Or your carpet?
*raises eyebrow*
Sunny-Lee <3

That sounds dirty, Sunny-Lee.
And don't diss my carpet, ho! You're just jealous because you have a dumb dragon and not a soft carpet that you can sleep on. That's just so.... Harry Potter.

Favourite line: I believe you know Taylar. She was the nurse who took care of Kingston when he was first born," she told me.

"Yeah, we know Taylar. She was very sweet."

"Well, she's my best friend here. And right now she's on vacation to visit her boyfriend, Adam," Macy explained.

It took me a minute to understand what she was saying and then my face broke into a smile.

"No way! I didn't know she was Sisky's girlfriend!" I said, surprised.

"Fiance as of tonight. If she says yes that is."

"Holy shit! I really had no idea!"

"Yeah, it's really quite cute if you ask me," she laughed.

"I bet. So what about you? Are you dating one of my friends that I should know about?" I asked her and she laughed.

"No. Sorry to disappoint."

I smiled and sat back, running my fingers over Kingston's forehead.
- - - Because it was just cute, i don't know what else to say.

Magic carpet?!? Have you SEEN Aladin? That was like 70 years ago, YOU keep up with the times!
You're the one riding them!
I have a genetically reproduced DRAGON to fly around on. lol
Sunny-Lee <3

Sunny-Lee:

AWHHH! You totally made me hyperventilate and get all teary!
And we'r enot even that attached to Kingston yet because he hasn't been a major character for long enough!
*gets emotional*

Favourite line, and yet not: It didn't even register in my brain that we were at the hospital until I was being rushed out of the ambulance as they ran him into the emergency room. I couldn't go any further, the doctor wouldn't let me in the room with him. I didn't know where Pete was and I felt helpless just standing outside the room my son was in, feeling like I couldn't do anything for him. I didn't know what else to do, so I did the only thing I could think of. I did something I haven't done in years.

I dropped down to my knees and prayed.
- - - It was just a really adorable way to end it :) or more... *cries*

I laughed at the fact that Cali's baby's name is going to be Mollie because of the whole fact that we have a character named Mollie durrr.
Yes, that would be rather awkward if we added Mollie in there when she's Brendon's girlfriend... and yet his daughter O_O
Lets not go incest here.
Here's a comment, too bad you have to ride your dog to get to it because your horses ran away. *giggles*
Sunny-Lee <3

Awwhh, Sunny-Lee loves Kingston! I planned this for a long time, this is what I was looking up last night. I didn't want you to help me because I didn't want to ruin the chapter for you.

No, I'm not going incest in here. That's very gross. And I didn't ride my dog. I flew on my magic carpet. Keep up with the times!