But It's Better If You Swear to Shake It Up. - Comments

Poor William!
Good Chapter though!!!

quit saying your a bad writer that was really good

quit saying your a bad writer that was really good

quit saying your a bad writer that was really good

quit saying your a bad writer that was really good

Yay for an update!
Can't wait to read more!

"It's only sexy when you talk dirty."

"How do you know it's dirty if you can't speak it?"

"Who said I couldn't understand you?"

love it.
completely.
and d'aww to william and carson :)

It's awesome keep writing :D

cute update

Sunny-Lee:

Favourite lines: What? What? What?!” they asked, as I jumped on the counter. Business was slow at this time of day, so I wasn't disrupting customers or anything.

“We're having twins!” I yelled and they both looked at me confused. “You know, Brendon and I?”
--- Because I’d totally be like “Like… me and you? Me and you are having twins?”

AND

“This calls for celebration. Carson, get the blender!” Brooke yelled, running back to grab a bunch of stuff to make me a smoothie.
---HA HA HA! I was like “Why are they celebrating with a blender O_O”

AND

“I am too! Look, there's a bump right here!” I said, lifting up my shirt and showing her the ever growing bump on my lower stomach. She smiled and put her hand to it before walking back behind the counter.
---It was cute, Brooke just placed her hand on Cali’s tummy. I liked it *shrugged*

AND

but maybe I can talk my husband into talking me out to dinner. Or the movies, because those sound like fun,” I said, thinking.
--- Because that last sentence was like exactly what you said to me on MSN...

AND

“No you didn't! You liar,” I said and she shook her head while taking a drink of her own. Brooke gave her a look and she pulled five dollars out of her pocket and stuffed it into the cash register.
---HA HA HA HA! I’m so funny… making Carson pay for her drink but you get a free one.

AND

You bat your eyelashes at him and he undresses you with his eyes. It was an obvious scene
--- I just liked it? Lol

AND

“Well, Pete's pretty small height wise, and he doesn't have that big of a build,” Brendon added and I nodded.

“He's a short little man,” I giggled.
---Ha ha, Mr. Boss man’s a short little man...

AND

“Whatever. Guess we won't find out for another five months,” I told him.

“Hopefully.”
---Awwh, Brendon’s worried!

Anyways, as always, I love the updates with Brooke in them, I’m self-obsessed. I’m totally ending this here because I liked a lot of lines…
Sunny-Lee <3

I love your long comments. And these were like my favortie lines too.

Favourite lines: What? What? What?!” they asked, as I jumped on the counter. Business was slow at this time of day, so I wasn't disrupting customers or anything.

“We're having twins!” I yelled and they both looked at me confused. “You know, Brendon and I?”
--- Because I’d totally be like “Like… me and you? Me and you are having twins?”

AND

“This calls for celebration. Carson, get the blender!” Brooke yelled, running back to grab a bunch of stuff to make me a smoothie.
---HA HA HA! I was like “Why are they celebrating with a blender O_O”

AND

“I am too! Look, there's a bump right here!” I said, lifting up my shirt and showing her the ever growing bump on my lower stomach. She smiled and put her hand to it before walking back behind the counter.
---It was cute, Brooke just placed her hand on Cali’s tummy. I liked it *shrugged*

AND

but maybe I can talk my husband into talking me out to dinner. Or the movies, because those sound like fun,” I said, thinking.
--- Because that last sentence was like exactly what you said to me on MSN...

AND

“No you didn't! You liar,” I said and she shook her head while taking a drink of her own. Brooke gave her a look and she pulled five dollars out of her pocket and stuffed it into the cash register.
---HA HA HA HA! I’m so funny… making Carson pay for her drink but you get a free one.

AND

You bat your eyelashes at him and he undresses you with his eyes. It was an obvious scene
--- I just liked it? Lol

AND

“Well, Pete's pretty small height wise, and he doesn't have that big of a build,” Brendon added and I nodded.

“He's a short little man,” I giggled.
---Ha ha, Mr. Boss man’s a short little man...

AND

“Whatever. Guess we won't find out for another five months,” I told him.

“Hopefully.”
---Awwh, Brendon’s worried!

Anyways, as always, I love the updates with Brooke in them, I’m self-obsessed. I’m totally ending this here because I liked a lot of lines…
Sunny-Lee <3

Wow... that's a logn message up there.
Which is sad because this will be short.
Because I didn't save my favourite lines.
And don't remember them at all. *sad face*
But I do remember that I loved how excited brendon was when he finally found out.
I also love the name Sunnie for Kara's baby, which makes me happy.
i also loved that Cali went to tell me that she's gots twins :)
I'd want identical twins too, of the same gender. :)
Although it is possible to have different gendre identical twins...
Sunny-lee <3

Favourite lines: “What's your problem, baby boy?” he asked, putting his hand on his cheek. “I think he pooped,” he then informed me as a nasty expression crossed his face.
- - -Because I started thinking about it and was like “HA! His face was near the smell!

AND

“Why are you changing your shirt?” Brooke asked him as he slipped the dirty one over his head.

“Kingston pissed on him,” Pete laughed from the corner.

“Again?” Gabe asked and he nodded. “Geez. That's what, the tenth time?”

“No. It's the second. He peed on Pete this morning, remember?” Ryan answered.
- - - Ha ha, poor Ryan and Pete, getting peed on., Don’t they know how to change a diaper? Cover the baby’s “area” so the air doesn’t make them have to pee… Jeesh.

AND

Ryan placed Kingston carefully down in Brendon's arms.

“Hey little man,” he said, smiling down at him. Kingston's brown eyes were open wide staring up at Brendon fully alert.
- - - Because it was just SOOO Cute how Brendon said “hey little man” sorry… I [heart] Brendon.

AND

“You know what, you guys. I think we should give you a baby shower,” she told Ryan and Pete.

“A baby shower? Isn't that a girl thing?” Pete asked.

“I thought guys weren't allowed at baby showers,” Ryan said.

“So what? We can have a nontraditional baby shower. You are a nontraditional couple, anyway,” Brooke said and they shrugged.

“If you want to set it up,” Ryan said and Brooke smiled.

“I do.”
- - -Because it kinda sounds like I’m evil, and/or really nice… lol, either way, made me smile.

AND

“I love you, too, Cals,” he answered, his lips ghosting over my stomach with each word. Yet again we were interrupted by the door opening. He didn't move from me as the doctor walked through the door, smiling down at us.
- - -It was such an endearing moment, it just made me let J

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“Brendon, no! Our baby is not deformed. Look closer. There's two of them,” I told him, but he still looked confused. “Brendon we're having twins!”
--- Well,a ctually I liked the whole thing starting from the 3 hands thing, but I decided to make this comment not last 3 pages of the thread.

I liked this one a lot, I usually like them when I’m in it though, so that’s not a surprise. YAY!
Ted’s still being a jerk.
Sunny-Lee <3

OHEMGEES.
TWINS?!?!?!?!?!?
YESSSSS.
:D

Twins?
I can see Brendon now.
Wow, great update, can't wait to read more!

go bden and cali!

omfg.
TWINSIESS!
d'aww so cute ^-^

Sunny-Lee:

Favourite line: "Ryan's ecstatic. Pete said he has to pry Kingston out of Ry's arms just so he can hold him. He's really happy, too. It's so sweet to see them like that. They're parents now, you know? I never really imagined Ryan and I being parents," he said.

"I never imagined myself being a mom right now either, but I wouldn't give it up for anything," I told him and he nodded.
- - - Because it was cute.
I liked this chapter, but it wasn't the usual funny, which is completely fine too. It was soft, and kind of sleepy, just like Kara and Sunnie :) Both of whom i love very much, especially Sunnie xD
Sunny-Lee <3

They can't all be funny. I like writing sweet chapters too. And I'm usually sleepy when I write. Haha, I guess it carries over.

Favourite line: "Ryan's ecstatic. Pete said he has to pry Kingston out of Ry's arms just so he can hold him. He's really happy, too. It's so sweet to see them like that. They're parents now, you know? I never really imagined Ryan and I being parents," he said.

"I never imagined myself being a mom right now either, but I wouldn't give it up for anything," I told him and he nodded.
- - - Because it was cute.
I liked this chapter, but it wasn't the usual funny, which is completely fine too. It was soft, and kind of sleepy, just like Kara and Sunnie :) Both of whom i love very much, especially Sunnie xD
Sunny-Lee <3

Awe. I'm not much of a baby person, but that was adorable and kinda changed my mind a little :)