A Rollercoaster Kind of Rush - Comments

As much as I love Vandy, asdkgljebglkugr that was so not cool on her part :(
And uh, yeah, this needs to be fixed right now. lol
so happy that you're updating again :D

totally just discovered this story.
I really really like it and I hope you update soon :)
Would love to see how this ends

why why why why why why Avery!! as dreamy as Chris VandeVelde is, think about Evan! I really hope this wasn't the end, cause I want to know if she can work things out or if things are permanently screwed up.

so glad you updated this again :)

Not gonna lie, I did a little happy dance when I saw this was updated. Welcome back!!

I'm sad to see it end but I know it has to. Can't wait to see how you end it.

I really like this, and I especially like when he was kinda mean to her. cuz to be honest, avery is kidn of annoying me with being all mean to him, trying to get a reaction from him. I mean, I understand WHY she is, but she deserves some meanness back! YEAH! Course, that's basically the whole point of the story.. so this comment is useless.. I am sorry, truly i am. I just am trying to help you get your 12 comments lol cuz i want another chapter! so happy writing!

Update soon! I really like it! :)
Just so you know it was this story that got me into Evan Trupp, now he's like one of my favorites :)

:)
Even though I do love your story
I'm not just gonna say that xDD

I honestly don't see why she wants someone who would treat her like dirt anyways. I just wish she could fall in love with this Evan instead of trying to change him back. Cause if she keeps pushing him, she's gonna get what she asked for, then she's gonna bitch about him being mean :/

Kindaa a lose-lose type situation. She should just be happy she has him and not Lily [[//shudder xD]]

Okay, now Evan is just irritating me.
For reals.
Go back to being a meanie.
And more soon...sorry people suck at commenting.
:/

Ok so great update and I'm a little confused about how she was having a breakdown and why her heart broke? I thought that she would be happy that he said he loves her too?? And I def agree with you on the comment thing and you didn't sound like a bitch just a author who wants some good feedback not crap. Hope this helped and if you could explain it to me that would rock

loveloveloveeee.
the way you write emotions is literally incredible.
so realistic.
i'm gonna cry when this is over.
probably not as much as oshie, but i'll let a tear slip (:

I love the story! Avery is so relatable with the whole wanting the bad boy but then when she gets it changing her mind and wanting the sweet side. I think she really needs to talk to Evan about it instead of trying to scheme him back to his old ways. Anyway I love it and can't wait to see where you go with this story!

For you and Kendall? dlkfjalkdfj HI.

Anyway I'm really happy you posted this so I got my morning happiness. And for some reason I found it really funny when she spilled the milk, I have no idea why... Probably because I'm running on no sleep. Whatever. It was funny. And I can't decide if i like Good Evan or Bad Evan better... because Good Ev is so sweet but obviously Bad Ev is more fun. And I can't believe he apologized... oh man.

You need to get your twelve comments ASAP which you should obviously if people have any sense to them because i love this story as you know. Post soon love you oooookbye

I kind of liked this chapter despite the shortness :)

and for concrit: I think it's great how you manage to describe being completely in love with someone, having second thoughts about them and at the same time feeling completely heartbroken (like in the last sentence of this chapter) I don't know how you do it, but it works :) *thumbs up*

yesss, another update!
so happy! and so quick?
you spoil me, you really do.
and ugh, you know I feel you about the comments, so let's not even go there.
people are retarded, you're amazing. typical.

I'm so jealous of Avery...
spending your days with trupper (even when he's being a bit a of an ass) and matty...
it doesn't get much better than that.

God, you make this so difficult.
I still can't decide whether or not like I like bad or good Evan more.
I think Avery's struggling with the same thing ;)

I can't believe Evan apologized!
I totally thought he was going to go back to being an asshole, you had me fooled.
I love Matthew, so tentative and unsure. Such a teddybear, I can't wait til you guys get married.

Even though this was short, I still loved it.
I can't wait for you to update again!
this better get more than 12 comments, as soon as possible or I will be pissed.
okayiloveyouthemost <3333;

i still love this story :)

Avery is a hot mess.
More soon yes?

I loved the update! I cant wait to see what happens between the two! post more soon!

I love you.
I woke up all tired and hating life and than baaaaaaaam an update. Thanks for informing me of this, by the way, considering I almost didn't even check.
Okay, so Ev totally should have said something about her being in jail. I bet he was just confused. Poor little Evan isn't sure how to handle a criminal girlfriend... way to be, Avery. And he's so PMS-y, jesus christ. Come up with one mood, boy! But at least at the end there was a glimmer of old douchey Evan...not that that's particularly a good thing? Wow my brain hurts right now from trying to sort through all of these made up emotions.. bahahah.

PS i agree with Kendall.... I think the Sioux should start winning again. Like the 8-1 beatdown of SCSU? Pooor Mike Lee I almost cried for him. Almost. But obvi not really because we won and Danny scored and had two assists yayayayayayyayy <3333

/end rant. Okay. I love this. don't end it soon. LOVEYOUBYE

yes, an update?!
so stoked, love this story to death but you know that!
i love our word count competitions.

so first of all:
“I feel terrible,” Kendall groaned, leaning against Pony’s little car that was always parked right next to Evan’s truck. Bromance. With a sigh, I nodded. ---I laughed out loud. So true, the boys are in such a committed bromance, it's slightly ridiculous.
I can't believe you wrote about Chay being not able to play...that seriously brought a tear to my eye. I miss him so much. I do feel SO bad.
P.S. Everyone vote Chay for Hobey, ANYWAYS...

I can't believe Evan didn't have more of a reaction to Avery getting arrested, I mean usually that situation evokes a little more emotion.
He's being far too sweet.
However, the end kind of broke my heart...but I guess she finally got what she wanted, he's acting like an ass again. But I really don't like the fact that Evan is acting like this because the sioux are losing, I would very much like them to WIN again.
I wonder if they start winning again, Evan will go back to his god guy ways or will things stay the same? Is there something more there than just the frustration of the team losing?
I want to know.

So I'm so happy you decided to update.
and I would like you to do it again, VERY SOON.
i miss it! :)
However, I'm not stoked that this is apparently ending soon.
I don't think I can let that happen!
looooveyouuu<3333;

Update soon! Cause i love this story!
Ha ha starting a bar fight, something i would do.. lol.
I like Avery :)