A Rollercoaster Kind of Rush - Comments

plz plz plz pzl plz post more of ur story!!!!! i love it and i cant wait to read the rest of it!!!!

duuuuuuude this chapter seriously is amazing.
no words.
and it's not even that your amazing writing was.... well amazing,
it's that you had BRETT HEXTALL!!
woo.

glad you got your inspiration back :]

i'm starting to kinda feel bad for evan. poor guy.
but i have faith in him. (cross your fingers)
... yikes! getting arrested is never good.
and lily totally deserved that punch in the face. slut.
another update soon would be lovely. (:

love. love. love.

Haha take that Lily!
But it sucks she got arrested. I wonder what Evan's going to do.
More soon! =]

so happy this story is back! dying to know how evan will react. omg hopefully this wont drive him into lilly's arms! =0 great chapter, cant wait for updates

Oh shit.
That's my girl, though.
Lily totally deserved it, obviously.
So happy your inspiration is back.
More soon. <3

i love this story! i cant wait for you to post more!

did she have to get arrested? but the more drama the better it is! will evan come to the rescue??

I'M SO THRILLED YOUR INSPIRATION IS BACK YAYAYAYAYAYYY.

“Here’s to not being a slut,” Danny toasted before we both poured the harsh liquid down our throats. Bacardi 151. Obviously Kristo had the intention of getting us completely wasted.
That's my Dannnnny. My sweet, pure, innocent, broken hearted Daniel. What a champ.

And I loved this chapter. Especially that it was at Judy's Tavern, too, lmfao. Helllllo ironic twist of fate. And I'm glad she took down Skankasshoefashooo. Defenite win. And I really want to read the next chapter when Evan discovers her total badassness, and flips out, oooobbbviousllyy.................. right? ahahah you best get your subs soon because i expect an update pronto.
mmmkkloveyoubye

OMG I cant believe she got arrested! I cant wait to see how Evan reacts! I hope they can work through their relationship though, because they are so cute. I think if she just talked to him they could sort it out. Post more soon!

Beat that whore Av!! Lilly deserves every little bump and bruise. That's what she gets for messing with Evan Trupp's girl. Dang!! she got arrested. I kinda saw that coming when the cops were called. I'm really curious to see how Evan reacts to her calling him and this whole thing.

I'm so excited for more!!!

ohhh hey, so I love you for updating this, I missed it too much.
so are you ready for another one of my epic comments...?
I think so and yeah, they're amazing.

so gaaahhhh, I know she's obviously still mad at Evan but I had bad vibes as soon as she lied to him. I just knew this was going to end badly. I'm glad she felt guilty, I did too haha. But Evan was a dick, so I don't know. You play with my emotions too much.
The way Evan reacted, he obviously knew she was lying too....he seemed so sad. Avery better cheer him up.

“You’re underage,” he pointed out. Kendall swiftly smacked his shoulder, causing him to let out a pathetic whine. When Kendall leaned in for a kiss, we all adverted our focus away from them." --SO you already knew how much I would enjoy that. I love how when we kiss everyone looks away..it's too beautiful and touching for the naked eye....clearly. Or not, whatevs. Technically everyone in that little gathering was underage...just a thought and an insight into the north dakota legal system.

And now for Kendall's favourite quote of the chapter!: "I may be a piece of trash, sweetheart, but at least I have the boy, and didn’t have to suck dick to get there,"
--You amaze me, simply amaze me. Can you just right me smarmy one liners that I can use in my stories? THANK YOU.

oh, and another thing: “Yeah, nice lace panties,” Pony grinned, also stepping outside. Danny rolled his eyes at his fellow ginger. Why the eff is pony looking at her panties? NOT DOWN. We're in love, you should start writing about that more. okay sounds good.

“You look like hell, Av,” Kendall commented. I was going to reply with a snarky come back, but Phoebe hit a sore spot, making me pull my head back and wince. --Could I be more subtle? Sometimes I'm a bitch, that's okay. I'm really loving the fact that she got into a bar fight though, that's fucking epic. So much drama, you're killing me!!! She really needed to teach that bitch Lily a lesson. However, I feel like Pony would have at least some moral obligation to her cause like, Hello that's you're roommate's sister, but NOOOOO.

Okay so finally, I cannot wait to see what happens when Evan finds out about Avery.
Will he be understanding or will he flip out? Knowing good boy Evan he'll probably be her knight in shinning armor. Typical. However, I'm really starting to miss bad boy Evan. Just sayin'.

So update again sooon?
Matt will be out later today, promise you.
klove you and this story too much but you already know that don't you?
okaybyeee <33333;

First I'd like to mention that I forgot that Joe was living with me and Danny... in this case, it's good for Daniel that he has me because now he doesn't have to lay in bed staring at the wall listening to Whats Left of Me while Gleas fucks his girlfriend. So you're welcome, Danny <3333

Um I loved this update. And I love that she's going crazy because Evan is being all sweet and ... boring. Except for the whole Lilly thing, but she's a whore so it's to be expected.
And the ending was super cute, Jeremy's text made me laugh. Oh Truppers.
And thaaanks for the shoutout, doll.
I misssss youuuu.
And I'm really proud you planned this all by yourself. See, what do you need me for?!

GOOOO TEAM USAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
love you kbyeee

Loved it. As usual.
But that's typical with your stories.

Possibly the cutest ending ever. I loved her neighbors text, even though it probably shouldn't have been funny, I couldn't help but giggle ((:

I want them to fight! I want to see old evan!!

oh alyssa.
why does evan trupp have to be so perfect?!
she just can't stay mad at him.
looooveee it!

i love Evannnn haha (= i can't wait for you to update again haha.

Aww, he followed her home.
That's cute, but legit annoying.
I probably would have smacked him, not too hard though, wouldn't want to ruin that face.
And her going out there in the hallway with him?
Adorable.
More soon. <3

I have legit been waiting to read this all day!
traveling for 14 hours straight...it was the only thing keep me going, i swear.
but anyways,

"You left?! Were you okay to drive? You didn't die did you?! The text from Kendall read." -- Yeah, cause I'm that kind of responisble... you're giving me mad credit in this story, i thank you.
AND SERIOUSLY? you know how I feel about Avery and Evan together, they're meant to be. When she wouldn't listen to him my heart was freaking breaking. I'm glad she broke down at the end though, so adorable.

"I wanted him to push open the door, ignore my threats to call the cops. Then he would push me against the wall and crash his lips against mine to shut me up." --Yes please, I would also enjoy that thank you.

Seriously, this whole Lily situation needs to end, it's tearing me apart....haha I may be too emotionally invested in this story, OH WELL.

Update soooon pleaseeee?
ohhhkay, love youuuu ALUUU <3333;

The wait was worth it, let me tell you that.

The part where she was wanting him to open the door and make her listen, it made my heart break alittle. I aww-ed at that part.

Can't wait for more :)