A Rollercoaster Kind of Rush - Comments

  • rockstaar.

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    I shuddered, my mind imagining poor, innocent and pure Danny being seduced by Phoebe.

    LMFAOOOOOOOO i legit just spit water alllllll over my uncles iphone which i stole to read this, because thats how dedicated i am. why is danny always the victim?
    and danny kristo WOULD have the rule of beer pong losers streaking around the block... my baby <3
    that pong game was hilarious, actually this whole chapter was hilarious.
    defenitly my favorite so far.

    AND DANNY IS HUGE HAHAHAHHAHH I WOULD KNOW.

    unfortunatly not. anyway. this girl is going to be an ishhh, i really want to know how avery reacts. and once my internet decides to return to me we will be planning..
    December 31st, 2009 at 07:35am
  • c is for carly.

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    ahaha. that beer pong game was hilarious.
    being awful at beer pong and being drunk definitley don't mix well.
    but i can't believe they had to streak! hahaha.
    annd although i don't like this girl on evans lap...
    i'm thinking maybe it'a good cause she wants the old evan back?
    yeah, i don't know. that really didn't make sense.
    anyways. love this. more soon. yeah? ((:
    December 30th, 2009 at 09:16pm
  • roxy278

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    Haha I loved the beer pong game.
    But I definitely didn't like the girl on Evans lap.
    Update soon! Please? =D
    December 30th, 2009 at 08:19pm
  • livjackson

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    greattt chapterrr!
    can't wait for moreee!
    December 30th, 2009 at 07:16pm
  • Rylie_

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    so i know jack squat about beer pong so this chapter kind of gave me some info on it. Yeah i know, i'm a goody, goody.

    a random chick perched up on Evan...oh heck no!!!

    I'm curious to see who this chick is and to hear Evan's reasoning for why she was on him.
    December 30th, 2009 at 04:52pm
  • laceybebe

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    "Hey! I'm just comforting her! I'm not scared of a mouse," he defended himself
    riiiiight.
    youre scared....admit it frats!

    "Is she a redhead?" I wondered, knowing not many people liked gingers
    lmao. poor pony.

    Even though Phoebe was dating Danny, it was different. He's not exactly flaming.
    aaahahah!!!

    A girl was perched comfortably on my boyfriend's lap. She smiled sweetly at him before he said something to her with pursed lips.
    ughhh! evan!

    so i really enjoyed the whole couples beer pong game.
    it was brilliant.
    im so sad that it toook me this long to read these updates!!!
    i fell in love with this story all over again
    so how about another update?
    =] <33333
    December 30th, 2009 at 03:44pm
  • trigger;bang

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    Okay, I've been waiting for this like all day!
    and it was definitely worth the wait.

    And dude, WTF?! I told you I blow at beer pong, it's not my fault.
    At least I had pony there to help me out, we're precious.

    LMFAO they had to streak? That is so classic.
    and hello, I would've brought you a blanket, just saying.....maybe.
    I probably wouldn't have shielded my eyes from Evan though lol.

    ALSO, you beat me in a shot race?
    I don't believe this.
    We'll have to have a real battle when we get to Nodak.

    "God, I love it when you drink," --legit goose bumps at that part, I swear to god.
    a little jealous of Evan and Avery, no big deal.

    So more soon please?
    like tomorrow.
    when I update for you thrice times!
    LOVE YOU <33333
    December 30th, 2009 at 12:40pm
  • MollyRhiannan

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    ummmm yay?! you updated!!
    but ohh man. what's up kendall's sleeve.
    but how could you NOT love a perfect guy?!
    we'lllll see!
    December 30th, 2009 at 06:02am
  • Miss Goldy Gopher

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    awwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeee hes so sweeeeeeeeeet she needs to leave him alone! poor boy. hahaha :)
    December 29th, 2009 at 06:25pm
  • Rylie_

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    Kendall's up to something!! I'm curious to see what the plan is. I'm liking this whole "turning Evan bad again" thing.

    Can't wait for the next update!
    December 29th, 2009 at 02:52pm
  • roxy278

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    Hmmm I wonder what the plan is.
    Can't wait to find out! =]
    December 29th, 2009 at 10:13am
  • dyana.22

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    i want to know to the plan :(
    December 29th, 2009 at 09:51am
  • rockstaar.

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    Mika's with Davey Toews, better known as the drunkest kid in North Dakota,"
    HAHAHAHHAHA!!! okay that made me laugh suuuuper hard.
    and i love that kendall has joined our trio of fun, make that quartet now.
    i can't wait for the next chapter,
    which i expect to be up very soon.
    because i want to see what avery does next,
    how evan reacts,
    andsomehotphoebedannysex.
    what?
    UPDATE. kloveyoubye.
    December 29th, 2009 at 08:12am
  • trigger;bang

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    oh hey, I LOVE YOU! just so you know..
    and possibly another update tonight?!!?!?! you spoil me...
    I also enjoy the fact that I'm the one with the idea at the end there...oh god I bring the dramz? haha
    I'm dying here, I need to know what happens!

    "Darcy, Mario, Benny and a few other guys were having a blast, dancing with each other, very closely I might add." -----ahahahahahahah, are you serious? The fact that I have absolutely no problem imagining this is too classic.
    I will also probably now never recover from the mental image of Matt Frattin "doing himself" as you so eloquently put it. That lovely image is seared into my memory, thanks bro.
    And please don't tell me that my idea is for you to hook up with Matt Frattin...because I will have to hate myself and I don't really want to do that especially now that Pony and I are togetherrrrrr.
    I'm hoping I don't turn out to be some fictional relationship ruiner, booooo me.

    So I'm in loooove with this and I think you should update ASAP.
    yeah right away or I'm not naming my child dwarf pony, and we both don't want to have to live in that kind of world. <333333 you!
    ;)
    December 29th, 2009 at 08:10am
  • c is for carly.

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    awe. poor evan.
    i can't imagine how difficult that is for avery.
    buttt, i def want the old evan back.
    or maybe something inbetween? dunno.
    i just love this... more soon, yeah?
    December 28th, 2009 at 05:59pm
  • Miss Goldy Gopher

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    awwww i love itttt! poor evan haha.
    December 28th, 2009 at 04:41pm
  • roxy278

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    Haha wow fighting over capp/frapps that's a good one! =]
    I hope she can turn the perfect Evan into the old Evan
    soon! =] Cant wait for more.
    December 27th, 2009 at 09:33am
  • layna loves her caps

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    poor evan. it seems like he can never win...
    December 27th, 2009 at 08:14am
  • MollyRhiannan

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    gahh he's so cute =]
    and pretttty much act like the perfect man.
    if only they really existed...
    December 27th, 2009 at 06:21am
  • dyana.22

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    LOL im excited.

    PS. c'yes Canada!!!!
    December 27th, 2009 at 06:09am