Innocence and a Broken Heart - Comments

Boy, I wish Nathan was real so I can choke him to death.
Jeesum, you provoked some angry emotions out of me. This reminds me of a heartbreaking situation I was in. Boys suck, don't they?
Good update :D

wow... what an a-hole thing for him to do...
made me angry that he would do that... totally relateable in my case.
more soon???

awwwww :(
thats so sad! update soon. im really curious :)

=) I'm glad you left me a message on my profile telling me to read this because honestly how could have I ever lived without this story where finally things make sense because it reminds me a bit of myself? Thank you so much. And you don't have to review the one-shots I made for contests or anything. You kind of came later in the process of time so I deleted my stories already. So you cannot read them sorry =(. But I have one-shots so their there if you want to take a peak.

This is really good.

Yay! More tonight! Something to look forward to after work. Woot!

I loved this story! Mainly because it reminded me of the situation between a couple of my best friends at school. Keep writing, this story is amazing, and I can't wait for more updates :D

I like what I've read so far. It's different. Can you give me a little tiny hint though? See, I'm a sucker for romance stories with happy endings. Will I have that to look forward to with this? Anyway, I do like this a lot. I hope you'll be a frequent updater...not one of those that only updates once a month. Then I'd be sad. So yeah. Hint please?

I read the prologue & it sounds great! :)
Trust me, I'll read more as soon as I get the chance - I love reading and I'm interested as to what your story has to offer. In the meantime, return the favor? I'd love to get some feedback as well :)

This is awesome! Keep updating :D

this is amazing, i really like it. update soon please! : )

tis very good, imaginative and unique.
Theres a couple of spelling mistakes but we all make thm dunt we lolz
Can ya read mi story pleeze- it has a similar format where is goes between two periods of time

That was really good the beginning got me hooked into it <3

WOWOOWOWOW! THIS IS SO GOOD!!! lol :)
update soon :)

I didn't have to read it all to know that you were absolutely right. But I still craved more and had to read it. I can tell this story will turn out really well!

The prologue was pretty well-written. Sorry I couldn't read any more of it.
I would just advise you to watch out for your spelling and grammar.
There were a few mistakes here and there.
But other than that, it was good (:

oh wow. what he asked was totally unexpected. awesome chapter

I saw on your review of another story that you wanted reviews so decided to jump on the bandwagon! Well, what can I say? It's great to find a piece of fiction that deals with typically "young adult" issues in a much more mature way. I didn't particularly struggle with the time changes but you characterize perfectly and your description is mostly spot on. I hope you continue with this soon!

this is a cute story. Really cute.
:)
continue in what you do, but make it more clear
so ppl don't get confused, and unsuscribe which would be bad.

other then that it is really goood.

Wow, I never seem to know what to write. Anyway, when I got the request to read your story I didn't expect this at all. It's so very sweet and something that pretty much ever girl or guy can relate to. Your writing style is very descriptive and interesting which always makes someone want to read more. :) Can't wait for the rest of the story and I am definitely subscribing!

Oh and wearing his sweatshirt? Something every girl has done. Love it. :)