Dismantle. Repair. - Comments

Wow. I can't believe its over. Like really over. I know it feels like its been going on forever, but from a reader's point of view it hasn't been going on nearly as long. You kept it flowing at a nice even pace and wrote it beautifully.

I so happy that Nick and Allegra worked out there issues. I know you know that I've been wishy-washy for awhile but I think that them working out their insecurities and getting back together was what was supposed to happen all along. Declan was a great, sweet guy but ultimately Allegra gave her heart away a long time ago. She never would've been happy with anyone except Nick.

I also have to say I'm glad she's finally at ease with her parents too. Her dad makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside when he acts all protective. Gotta love the third degree routine. :) Its great that her life is now complete. She's got her man and her family. What more could a girl ask for? Eventually they'll marry and have little Nicks and little Allegras and be an even bigger happy family. At least they will in my head ;)

So overall, I'm sad to see it go but it was wonderful while you wrote it. I know you said you weren't going to write anything else for awhile but you know you will always have a reader in me if and when you decide to post something again. And...I get you ATIMS chapter :) The wait will be worth it or I'll rewrite it until it is :D

Natalie, I feel like this story is never allowed to end. Because I am so devastated. I put off reading this chapter as long as I could because I know I didn't/still don't want it to end. That was such a beautiful ending. I loved how the two worlds 'collided'. You couldn't have ended it any better/ cuter. I'm so glad they got together. Thank you so so so much for writing such a beautiful story. Love stories are the best, and yours is the bestest =]

ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! its over!!! i don't know whether to be happy or sad! "/ I've been with this story since the very beginning and I love the fact that I never really knew what was going to happen in the future. I LOVE IT! :D

I Love your writing. I literally check for your updates like everyday. I know pathetic but what can i say =).
Anyway, I'm super happy that Nick and Allegra got back together since thats what i was hopeing for since they split and that last chapter made me cry. But now i feel pretty bad for Declan since he got cheated on twice and in a row too =(. Poor guy i kinda just wanna jump in the story and comfort him.

So as for the story. LoveLoveLove it and even though this one is coming to an end ='( i really do hope you continue to write and grace us Mibbaians with more captivating stories. <3<3

As I'm reading this from my dorm room, I feel like with this story, my childhood is ending. This just depressing now, ha. I loved this chapter. Obviously, because I know Nick and Legs are meant to be. That was the most passionate, wonderful, beautiful chapter ever. I adored it. You could feel EVERY emotion that everyone was going through. It was just wonderful!

Okay so first off that wasn't an obnoxious author's note. Mine are far worse. lol!

Second, i have to say honestly I kinda always knew they would get back together in the end but for awhile in the middle there I was questioning whether or not I really wanted them to or not. You know all about my whole flip-flopping between the boys. haha! I feel bad for Declan that he got the short end of the stick...twice!...and how betrayed he must feel. Poor guy! I just wanna hug Declan and tell him it'll be alright. I hope he gets his happy ending in the epilogue.

As for Allegra and Nick...I hope they'll be happy with each other. I mean they've been through so much together that I really hope they make it work. At least they know they can handle the ups and as well as the downs in their relationship now. I think their relationship will be stronger because of this rough patch they went through. :)

Now, what are we gonna see in the epilogue? Hmm.... Maybe a wedding? Or maybe a graduation? Or the buying of a first house? The possibilities are endless! Just get this written! haha! Take my out of my suspense! Update soon! Great chapter! :D

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! they're back together!!! YAY!!!!!! ohmygosh, you just made my day ahahaha i can't stop smiling!!!! please update soon!!!!!!!!! I just hope that one day, Declan understands what she's says about the love that her and Nick have, and come to, well not forgive her, but just understand why she did what she did.

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FINALLY TOGETHER (kinda)!!!! Update soon!

I think you should just keep writing and never ever end it. Because, it will save all of our minds :)

An amazing chapter. I love that they are back together. Upset for Declan but clearly it was going to happen.

Update soon :)

Yay im so happy they're FINALLY "together!" They both deserve happiness together! I honestly have been checking my email just to see if there was an email if this story has been updated. This is probably one of my favorite stories ever and I'm sad that it's ending as well
I can't wait til the epilogue. I will honestly cry at the end.

AHHHH update update!!!
I need to know what happens!

How am I supposed to respond to this chapter?! You make this so hard. Arrrg! *sigh*

Okay well first I'm glad that Allegra and Charlie are back to talking. That's good. They need each other even if they have other friends they rely on at times. I am a little bummed to hear that it didn't work out between Charlie and Kenny but I guess I kinda expected that. I mean Kenny was pretty pissed at Charlie when she confessed to him. Well at least both of them are happy with other people now. No sense in torturing yourself over something that will never be again.

I cannot believe that Allegra kissed Nick back!! I can see why he kissed her....which he shouldn't have because HELLO! he just made her cheat on her boyfriend. Way to be selfish and idiotic, Nick. I can understand why Allegra hasn't told Declan what happened yet. I think he'll equate her with that Savannah witch because he has been cheated on before and Allegra KNEW it and still kissed Nick. It's just not boding well for Allegra right now. Either way she's screwed and I think she hurt a really nice boy in the process. If Declan does find out about her and Nick's kiss (and I think he will) he will be crushed and possibly have a scar about getting into relationships again. They just haven't gone well for him in the past and that leaves a big mark on a person. So I don't know. I don't want her to hurt Declan but I don't see her being able to live with herself and the guilt for very much longer.

Plus it doesn't help that Declan practically shoved Nick on to her. He does not know what he got himself into. I think that Nick will go talk to Allegra, tell her that she needs to stay with Declan because he makes her happy, and will leave her alone from now on. And at some point he'll play that song for her and darn it she'll be all sobbing and crying and know she just can't stay in a relationship with Declan with the way she feels about Nick. So it will be well-played for Nick and Declan will be hurt. Nick will be the one to tell her he's giving her up and won't that just work so well for him. That's practically calling the girl to him. Girls fall for that stuff cuz they can't help it and isn't that just irksome? grr!

I can't believe there is only one chapter left! How is this possible?! :( But I'm making no guesses as to how it turns out. I have a feeling you'll have a twist at the end that no one will be expecting. Darn you and your drama! But....I'll be waiting anxiously to read how the story ends! <3

THEY KISSED. THEY FLIPPING KISSED. THEY KISSED. OH MY GOSH. THEY KISSED.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved that! And Declan! I loved how you made him realize that Nick and Allegra are perfect for one another. I liked how it wasn't a huge fight thing. Gosh, now in the next chapter they have to get together! so passionate!

Oh my goshhhh! I knew they would kiss while she was still with Declan! Ohhh man, dramaramarama! Anyways, it is so obvious Nick and Allegra are made for each other, especially after the long-awaited kiss. But Allegra is still just heartbroken, but obvious shes not over Nick, while Nick thinks she hates him and is now trying to let her go. I just hope and pray they get back together because everyone knowa they're meant to be. I can't wait til the last chapter and epilogue xomes out. I swear, everytime I get an email notification, I smile so big and get REALLY excited!

OMG she cheated on Declan!!!!!!!! She NEEDS to get back with Nick ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TWO?!?!!? ONLY TWO?! WHAT?! WHY????! This is so not fair!! Okay, so I know you've been wanting this to come to a close but really, its such a great and complicated story that I just love it. Seriously. I even talked about it with another person when they were categorizing what made a great story. This topped it. No joke. And she was talking about PUBLISHED books. Face it, you could totally be a published author.

Anywho, onto the real story comment. Okay so I don't think that Nick is a fool for keeping up his friendship with Allegra. I do think he is only torturing himself by doing so, but whatever works for him. I think that it was nice of Liza to realize and be okay with it that he didn't like her the way she likes him, but they could still be awesome friends. He could have an ally in her. Just saying. It seems like he has a great, easy relationship with his roommate. I nearly laughed when he came in the room all frustrated. Been there, done that! Gosh school and classes can be such a pain. haha! But its good that Nick has people to fall back on.

Now, Allegra. Denial is not good. She has got to know that Nick still likes her. What does she need? A blimp ad?! I don't know, I'm at the point where I kinda just want them back together so that I will stop feeling so torn apart reading about them and their longing for each other. It seriously does tear me apart. I think that at this point she will be the one to horribly ruin her relationship with Declan because of all these conflicting feelings towards Nick. Or (and this is the one that really takes it) Declan will be the one to step down because he knows he can't really compete with Nick. That one will totally make everyone feel sympathetic toward him, but will possibly be happy with the results. And coming from me, the person you've flip-flopped more times than I can count, that's saying something :P

I have no idea what you have planned for the remaining chapters (TWO! ONLY TWO!!) but I know they will be awesomely amazing, :) I only hope that all characters are happy at the end. That includes Charlie and Kenny. I still want to know what happens to them. ;)

Can't wait for more!!! Update soon!! Loved it!! <3

THERE CANNOT BE ONLY TWO CHAPTERS LEFT!?!? YOU HAVE TO HAVE MORE! SAGA'S ARE USUALLY MORE THAN TWO STORIES! MORE OF THIS!!
I'm glad that Nick has someone to confide in, like his roomate, like his roomate actually cares and isnt a little brat. AHH, shes jealous, that really makes me laugh. its just that their feelings for each other are so evident that Legs is oblivious. She needs to dump Declan and go onto Nick. Grr. We all knew that Liza and Nick werent going to become a couple though, it just doesnt fit, like Allegra and Declan. I loved the last text message that Liza sent to Legs because it is so true, there is really no use trying to compete. I honestly dont think that Nick is a fool, hes just trying to be a man and its sad that he has to be closed off about his feelings. o0o0o0o0o0 you bring up a good point about that. like im sure that she really is in denial about everything involving Nick. YES! and now her eyes are opened and then Nick and Allegra are going to live happily ever after! (:

Allegra is SO still in love with Nick, but she doesn't realise it yet...can't wait to see what happens! Update!

woops accidentally pressed submit lol
Anyways... you're the only person I'm subscribed to who's updating and it makes me so happy when I get an update email lol.
can't believe it's almost over :(
can't wait to see what happens thoughh.

Love this.
You're the only pers