Dismantle. Repair. - Comments

Sorry this has taken me so long to comment but here it is now.

This is a really good chapter. So suspenseful. :) I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. It is nearly exactly how I saw it going down. I knew Kenny would find out first and that he would be angry as hell. And in a way that's understandable, but seriously, in my opinion all they did was kiss. And even then they pulled back quickly knowing it was wrong and that they were under the influence of bad doubts and alcohol. I really don't think that's such an awful cheating. I mean they didn't sleep together. Granted they should've just told Kenny and Allegra what happened directly afterwards, but we can't go back in time. *sigh* I feel so bad for Charlie. Kenny broke up with her in a fit of rage that maybe wasn't totally called for. I mean he needed to listen to her instead of just yelling that she cheated on him. I don't think he gave her a fair chance and now he's crushed her heart (granted his is in the same shape). I just feel really sad for her. Nick is keeping a better handle on things, but I don't know for how much longer. He's gotta tell Allegra the news and that will be oh man. haha. I just hope he is the one to tell her and not anyone else. I can see a huge scene going down in my head with Declan being there to console her and maybe punching Nick (not in Allegra's presence). I'll be waiting to see how you write it :)

Now I must say that you wrote this chapter brilliantly. Well you always write brilliantly, but this chapter in particular was great. I could see it playing out like a movie in my head as I read it. I could see the brunch scene awkwardness, Charlie's crushed face when Kenny broke up with her, Nick's panic when she came crying to his room with Kenny's threat, and Dawn's bitchy calm face when she planted the seeds of doubt in Kenny's head. God, I really want to maim her now. Can we please go through with one of my ideas for getting rid of her? Pretty please? No one would miss her. I'm positive of that. And its not like Nick will take her back after the stunts she's pulled. She's gonna be bitchy and pathetic forever so why not just take her out of her misery. Have I convinced you yet? :D

I can't wait to read the chapter!!! I desperately want to know what's going to happen and how Allegra will find out! I NEED TO KNOW!!! Please please please!!!!!! Awesome chapter, sis! A+++ from me :)

OHHHH MY GODDDDDDDDDDDDD. I hate dawn. She is such a biotch. Like, lets be serious. But whats gonna happen when nick tells her. Because they are in different states. IDKKKK im excited for all of this drama!!!!! yayyyyy

awesome chapter!!!

Update :]

They DO need to tell Allegra

I seriously want to cry. This all can't be happening. I want lovey dovey stuff again. My romantic heart can't take all of this ='[

AH! yeah I did picture that happening, Kenny findin out first etc. PLEASE don't wait to long to update!(:

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Goddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd!!
This has to be the best chapter in a while. Like they are all fantastic but OMG the drama!!!

I knew something like this would happen, And i kinda figured that someone like evil devil Dawn would be like BAM i see you. But holy crap!

And then Kenny comes, oh my god! Charlie's reaction was perfect! I am so excited to see what happens in the next chapter, Its going to be BIG

I wonder how Dawn is going to tell Legs...... hmmmmmm

AWESOME UPDATE!!! :)

FREAKING A!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT THE HELL?!?! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! I HATE YOU!! (and I mean that in the best way possible.) No, wait....I HATE FREAKING DAWN THE SLUT!! Let me get my new machete so that I can cut her to little-- okay little graphic there but you know what finishes that thought. Just read my mind sis. Read it.

Okay so Nick and Charlie. I get why there were feeling the way they were. Really I do. Typically teenage doubts about love. It happens even when the partners are closer together unlike these two couples. What I don't condone is then blaming the alcohol. Yes, they were upset and yes, they were a little on the tipsy side, but that still doesn't mean they weren't in control of their actions. Obviously Nick's brain worked a little bit if he pushed her away. But seriously, when you teased me with a thought FROM THE FREAKING BEGINNING my mind went way worse than this so in a way that's a positive thing. I think you can forgive a kiss. Just my opinion though. (Look at GID. haha. I think TC3 is moving towards the good, but other people have a different opinion...)

As for Kenny reappearing...I think that Charlie will feel so guilty (or Nick will, but more than likely Charlie) and she'll spill the beans to him. Then he'll talk to Allegra and tell her about it cuz he's hurt and then the whole huge bag of worms will be open and dear god help them all! *heavy sigh* I swear you're gonna give me heart failure with this story. That's a good thing though. LOL.

Well I think my little rant/temper tantrum is done. haha! I can't wait to see what happens next! Seriously you need to update like really soon! Please! I need to know!! I love you sis! Oh and if you need more incentive, I'd really like to inflict pain and suffering on Dawn so yeah, all the more reason to update :) haha!! Sorry it took so long to comment. Hope it was worth it.

Okay So I am mad....I had no clue you updated...for like five chapters! I haven't gotten an email for this story being updated at all!!!! I was planning to re read the whole thing for funzies, then I saw there were chapters I haven't even read yet!!! AHHH! and That is why I haven't commented in a while!

Okay, so nick and his insecurities...are you serious? i think legs is becoming the man in the relationship now...well if there is one, after the fact that he kinda you know KISSED HER BEST FRIEND, WHICH I TOTALLY KNEW WAS COMING!, I knew one of them was going to the other sooner or later, seeing as how BOTH of their other halves are gone! It was only a matter of time.

I was screaming at the top of my lungs reading the last chapter, prefferably yelling at nick, his whole calm thing, could come off as if he wanted to kiss her, with the whole Dawn video. Leg's could ask herself (of him, if she sees the video) why he wasn't freaking out, like Charlie.

and when Kenny came to surprise charlie, I was all like "Take that bitch!" rofl, I couldn't help myself, I was feeling sorry for Allegra, because Kenny gets one stab in the back, Allegra gets two, from both sides.

And here is the thing, Nick could have explained to Allegra what had happened right after it happened, and I bet legs wouldn't be mad, because the truth is more important to her. He could have done the same thing she did when Declan kissed her! Called and explained and reassured, that is it! But NOOOOO! He just HAS to be a idiot and keep it a secret. Oh I can't wait for Declan, her dad, joe, Kevin AND Kenny to beat up on his ass.

He has hurt allegra to many times, to many...She doesn't deserve all this pain, from the deceit in her family, to the lies of her boyfriend and best friend. I am shocked she hasn't asked herself if her whole life is a lie. because it kind of is.

Overall good chapter, pulled alot of emotions out of me, mostly anger but that is beside the point. lol. :) UPDATE REAL SOON!

I KNEW THIS WOULD HAPPEN!!! Ok, not the video or the Kenny surprising her in such a romantic way that has me totally jealous of him, but of the Charlie and Nick thing! Oh my gosh. I CANNOT BELIEVE THIS JUST HAPPENED! IT'S NOT ALLOWABLE. GO FIX THIS NOW. RIGHT NOW I TELL YOU!

Ahhhh...!!!!!!!! For some reason I was getting suspicious when Charlie and nick were getting close but ahh! I don't this will be good. But I love love love this story<3!

I can't believ Nick and Charlie kissed! I was like, "what just happened there?" Somethings gonna happen and I think it won't be a good turn out. Dawn has evidence! Geez she needs to back off! But wonderful update, Nataile. And...have I told you that I am obsessed with this story? I absolutly love it :D
Update soon! <3

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SUCHA GREAT STORYY<33 i want more!haha

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Okay seriously that was a fabulous chapter and sooo worth the wait. :)

I don't think they were too mushy. I think they were just the right amount of mushy. I mean you kinda had to expect that they would be all over each other after not seeing each other for two months. I mean come on, that's a given. But I did love how well you wrote it. I mean I could practically see them. I saw the run and jump at the door, I saw them in the grocery store, I saw them snuggling on the bed...very good writing skills. :) I thought it was cute how her mom was freaking out, but her dad was all chill about it. That was great. I have to say I really do like Steven. And Nick's family is just as great. Joe is a hoot! And Frankie practically tripping over his words he couldn't get them out fast enough was sweet.

As for the points to ponder...Yeah I'm definitely pondering them (Damn you!). I wonder what he is leaving out. What can't or won't he tell her? Is it something he's ashamed of? Does it lead to the blowup from the prologue? And what's with the pressuring? I only half believe his reasoning there. There's better be some explaining going on in the next chapter. I for sure know that her life isn't gonna be all hunky dory once whatever Nick is hiding gets out. Maybe Steven will do a smackdown on Nick. That could be fun. I mean no one hurts his little girl ;) Or maybe Declan will do it since he has experience with hurt. Who knows (oh wait, you do!)

All I know is that I can't wait to see what happens!!! I definitely want you to update as soon as possible!! :) I'm still loving it and I as much as I dread it I wanna get to the Dismantle part. Update soon! :)

Wow, it has been a while since Nick and Allegra have been together. So much of this chapter reminded me of my boyfriend and I, haha. That was cute :) Also, Nick's insecurities, I guess I could understand. But Allegra is totally right. And uh oh. Is Nick hiding something?!

I loved the chapter:) What isn't Nick telling her

That was such a sad story. But the hug at the end made things a bunch better,
And we need nick! AHHH I cant wait until Thanksgiving, so she can see him. Dun Dun Dun what will happen? I hope something dramatic (but NOT a break-up)

Update soon Please :)

Before I forget, I cannot wait for the next chapter. Have I mentioned lately how much those two need to be physically by each other again? Oh, I haven't? Well, they do ;)

And wowzers. First off, way too make me cry at the end. That was one heck of an emotional roller coaster you just put me on. Secondly, that was insanely crazy. That is one heck of a story. Honestly, I'm kind of speechless, so I can't say much more than: perfect.