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  • somebody_who_cares

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    November 22nd, 2009 at 01:48am
  • JonasBaby3000

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    OMG. Please, please, please, please, please don't let Nana die!! That's what my gut is telling me is going to happen. Please.
    November 21st, 2009 at 10:05pm
  • Be My Escape

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    Aw man. That was a long chapter... haha. But that made me VERY happy. =]. This chapter was so heartfelt. I'm soOOOO happy that Nick showed up and made Allegra stop crying, for now. I really hope her grandma gets better!
    November 21st, 2009 at 07:52pm
  • Serendipity

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    loved it :)
    November 21st, 2009 at 05:49pm
  • glitter on the floor

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    reallly gooooood
    November 21st, 2009 at 07:30am
  • drama-queen-ak

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    ahh i freaked when i saw it was updated!!
    so awesome!!
    November 21st, 2009 at 07:27am
  • skye_is_the_limit

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    aww i love this so far.
    pleeeease update soon (: lol
    November 18th, 2009 at 03:01am
  • Bre the Human

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    It was a good chapter :]] I can't wait for more. I can already tell that this story is going to have a lot of new changes!
    November 10th, 2009 at 08:18pm
  • bridestar

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    oooooooohh... i love it already!!
    im excited :D
    November 10th, 2009 at 06:39am
  • Be My Escape

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    Just giving you a headsup that the picture isn't there for the story...
    Great chapter though. The emotions at the end were so vivid. It was so depressing and sad except everything was so realistic. Great job like always. =].
    November 7th, 2009 at 09:13pm
  • drama-queen-ak

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    ahhhhhhhh i freaked out when i saw you updated!
    its sooo cute. but sad.
    update soon please :)
    November 7th, 2009 at 05:03am
  • shades.and.ink

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    oh goodness.....i'm so excited to find out all the drama goodness that's gonna happen now =)
    aw man Allegra can't lose her Nana now too! =( no. no no no no no. hahaha but i guess i will just have to sit and wait (not so very) patiently for the rest of the tale to unfold! Much better than working on a lab report I must say! Keep up the excellent work! Love the emotion in your writing!
    November 7th, 2009 at 02:45am
  • Serendipity

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    Aww, that was really sad but cute at the same time :) Keep up the good work!!
    November 6th, 2009 at 08:12pm
  • lovelyriv

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    okay, so i really did cry when i was reading. it was very emotional for me to read considering my grandmother died last year.
    November 6th, 2009 at 04:37pm
  • Calling Back

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    amazing!
    i cant wait for the next one!
    November 6th, 2009 at 04:07pm
  • somebody_who_cares

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    November 6th, 2009 at 06:13am
  • catgirl87

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    So let me break this awesome chapter down into parts....

    1)The graduation: Sooo cute Kenny and Charlie! I wanted to hug Kenny with Allegra to let him know how happy I was for him. And the whole mom thing was hilarious! Total mom. Allegra's emotions were just right as was Charlie's. The happy girlfriend suits her well. I hope she doesn't go into a stupor when she has to be away from Kenny for a long time. But at least they have the summer to be together.

    2)Nick and Allegra: OMG. They are soo cute together. And laying in the bed, uh yeah, my dirty little brain went to not so pleasant thoughts when Nick told her he had a place they could go. And then it was the restaurant and I felt so stupid for thinking what I did. haha! And he plays the worried boyfriend so well. Though I can see that being annoying. Traffic is traffic. You can't help it. I want more of Nallegra happiness, missy!

    3) Allegra and her nana: I feel so bad for her nana. I can see how she'd be depressed. I wonder if Allegra can get her out of her funk or if it will bring Allegra down with her. Nick will help Allegra. I'm sure of it. Though I still wanna know what he does from your prologue, missy! That last part made me sad to hear about her nana missing her pop-pop.

    Update soon! But i'm glad you got this out in a week! Super fabulous and I love you little sis! <3
    November 6th, 2009 at 05:23am
  • glitter on the floor

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    poor nana :[
    November 6th, 2009 at 05:07am
  • xoxomusic363

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    Finally read the updates!!!!! :) I just know I am going to cry in this story :( but I love it :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P & I feel so bad for her Nana :(

    Love it :) :D :P
    November 6th, 2009 at 04:48am
  • supermcawesome

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    Update?
    November 3rd, 2009 at 07:55am