Aw man. That was a long chapter... haha. But that made me VERY happy. =]. This chapter was so heartfelt. I'm soOOOO happy that Nick showed up and made Allegra stop crying, for now. I really hope her grandma gets better!
Just giving you a headsup that the picture isn't there for the story... Great chapter though. The emotions at the end were so vivid. It was so depressing and sad except everything was so realistic. Great job like always. =].
oh goodness.....i'm so excited to find out all the drama goodness that's gonna happen now =) aw man Allegra can't lose her Nana now too! =( no. no no no no no. hahaha but i guess i will just have to sit and wait (not so very) patiently for the rest of the tale to unfold! Much better than working on a lab report I must say! Keep up the excellent work! Love the emotion in your writing!
So let me break this awesome chapter down into parts....
1)The graduation: Sooo cute Kenny and Charlie! I wanted to hug Kenny with Allegra to let him know how happy I was for him. And the whole mom thing was hilarious! Total mom. Allegra's emotions were just right as was Charlie's. The happy girlfriend suits her well. I hope she doesn't go into a stupor when she has to be away from Kenny for a long time. But at least they have the summer to be together.
2)Nick and Allegra: OMG. They are soo cute together. And laying in the bed, uh yeah, my dirty little brain went to not so pleasant thoughts when Nick told her he had a place they could go. And then it was the restaurant and I felt so stupid for thinking what I did. haha! And he plays the worried boyfriend so well. Though I can see that being annoying. Traffic is traffic. You can't help it. I want more of Nallegra happiness, missy!
3) Allegra and her nana: I feel so bad for her nana. I can see how she'd be depressed. I wonder if Allegra can get her out of her funk or if it will bring Allegra down with her. Nick will help Allegra. I'm sure of it. Though I still wanna know what he does from your prologue, missy! That last part made me sad to hear about her nana missing her pop-pop.
Update soon! But i'm glad you got this out in a week! Super fabulous and I love you little sis! <3
Finally read the updates!!!!! :) I just know I am going to cry in this story :( but I love it :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P & I feel so bad for her Nana :(