Dismantle. Repair. - Comments

  • XRoyal.Blue.HeartsX

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    Oh Nicholas, what on earth did you do....

    Great prologue, but you must update soon! I have to know what he did...

    ^__^
    November 3rd, 2009 at 06:08am
  • dramaqueen5454

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    You are such a great writer! You have kept my intrest throughout this series. I can't whait for the next chapter =]
    November 3rd, 2009 at 03:28am
  • shades.and.ink

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    ahhhhhhh so emotional! im already making waaaay too many assumptions about what all of that meant & i'm probably blowing it all out of proportion hahah! can't wait for the rest! =D
    November 2nd, 2009 at 09:55pm
  • Bre the Human

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    Whoa.
    A lot of drama in that Prologue.
    It sounds very exciting,
    I honestly can't wait to read more of this.
    You are a very good writer :]
    November 2nd, 2009 at 03:53pm
  • Serendipity

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    I can't wait to read the rest of this!
    November 1st, 2009 at 11:10pm
  • tone-ya x3

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    bahhh!!! as if FGGTJB wasn't amazing enough, you do it again! with merely the PROLOGUE! :D

    you simply MUST update as soon as you can! i need to know what happens to nick and legs! eeep!!! :O
    November 1st, 2009 at 08:23pm
  • C'est Moi C:

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    Oh Wow!
    I can't wait for this story :D
    November 1st, 2009 at 06:14pm
  • BubblegummmChewer

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    gosh.
    what's wrong with you?
    *shakes head in disgust*
    it's like you have fun, knowing I'm literally sitting here.. trying to figure out what to say to get you to write more, because my head is going crazy trying to figure out what sweet, innocent Nick did... O.O
    you owe me. chapter. now.
    November 1st, 2009 at 03:02am
  • Be My Escape

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    Yes, they should be repaired quickly. Gosh, such a heartbreaking and heartwrenching first chapter. It was so brilliantly written. The emotions were just jumping off the page. Gosh, what the heck did Nick do?! Have sex with Dawn or something?!
    November 1st, 2009 at 02:32am
  • Be My Escape

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    Yes, they should be repaired quickly. Gosh, such a heartbreaking and heartwrenching first chapter. It was so brilliantly written. The emotions were just jumping off the page. Gosh, what the heck did Nick do?! Have sex with Dawn or something?!
    November 1st, 2009 at 02:32am
  • FlyWithMe;;

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    OMJ this looks sooooo awesome!!!
    Update very soon!! :)
    October 31st, 2009 at 08:28pm
  • LeaveThisTown

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    Oh my gosh. Words cannot describe how excited I am for this story =]
    It's going to be amazing
    October 31st, 2009 at 08:22pm
  • somebody_who_cares

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    OMG UPDATE! :]
    October 31st, 2009 at 07:27pm
  • summer sun.

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    uhmm i agree with everyone else.. you should update now because this is going to kill me if I do not find out what Nick did. He is such an idiot somethingsss! <3
    October 31st, 2009 at 07:11pm
  • goodnight.my.love

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    Update now please!! :D

    And what the heck did Nick do? Hopefully nothing too terribly stupid, but from the sounds of it, it WAS stupid. Ugh. D: That boy can be so dense sometimes.

    Anyway, the death threats? I'll save those for another time. :D
    October 31st, 2009 at 04:31pm
  • lyriquement votre;;

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    I didn't think death threats till you mentioned it... ;)
    Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update!
    October 31st, 2009 at 11:23am
  • ExFRIEND

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    OMFG I LOVE IT update soon xD
    October 31st, 2009 at 07:13am
  • supermcawesome

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    How can you just leave it at that................ rawr

    but seriously.. that was so good! please update sooon, hows tthe college life treating you? i hope its going well :]
    October 31st, 2009 at 06:35am
  • tworebels.love

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    The only thing keeping me from not killing you is the fact that it says "Repair" so that means they HAVE to get back together....right?...they better! hahah.
    I love this already and can't wait :)
    October 31st, 2009 at 06:01am
  • xoxomusic363

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    I'm subscribed!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P I haven't read the prologue yet, but I shall read it soon. :) I just don't have time right now. And when I do read it, I shall comment it :)
    October 31st, 2009 at 05:48am