Biting Seduction - Comments

amazing, as always.
can't wait for the next update.
:D

I'd killed my best friend and today was the best day of my life- that should be an oxymoron.

The last line was briliant XD loved it!
I just loved the chapter, glad to know more about Brian :)
Look forward to more! =D

Okay is it really that bad that the very last line is in my opinion the best last line of any fanfic and chapter I have ever read in my entire weirdness life?

And OMCG MATT BITE BRIAN! I ALWAYS KNEW HE WAS A GAY VAMPIRE!!!!!!!!!! (........once I was talking to I can't remember who and we were staring at this one picture and Brian has vampire bites on his hand and we know the vampire of the band is Matt and we decided he was a gay vampire)
And of course they'd make Johnny take care of the body... He's their tiny little man.
Hihi tiny little man <3
*cough*
Hmm at start I thought it was Leana who Brian (wth I nearly typed Sebastien) bit and I was like "WHAT? NO WAY! Can't be no just...no way! Ouch!" and then I realized it wasn't XDD
And what else I had to commmmmmmmment hmmmmmmm.....I can't remember lol.
Anyway you know I looooove you ficyfic and can't wait for more !! <3

duuuuhuhuhuhuhude, I dont know whether its cos of all the movies we've been watchin lately or cos youve been around Ef for enough time or if black humor is just now starting to pour out of your pores, but THAT LAST LINE was so epic I had a friggin rollercoaster of emotions just cos of it alone.

eveyrhting else in the chapter was cool too, but THAT friggin MADE the chapter.

so, basically, Brian IS 60?

oh whoa! I wasn't expected her to attack her, let alone bit her and let her die :(
but that's understandable if she didn't wanted to breah the bond she had with Brian ^_^'
Loved it! look forward to more!

I have a confession.
Me prefering Aimee's death wasn't because of how much I like death in fanfics. It was because of the bond with Brian too...

Ah this chapter was so good. I love it when you do flashbacks and I looooove it when you describe Brian's feelings through Zoe and, well, I just love your writing so fucking much and you effing know it!!
Oh yeah, and I love youu <33
Can't wait for more!!!!! WRITE WRITE WRITE ! <3

duuuuuude.

I disgust myself. I mean seriously. I should be all hatin cos she just killed her best friend. but what am I? I'm fucking awwing at the fact she did it cos of Brian.

oh and, it better be that he's been a vampire for 40 years. O_o

how sad. i can't wait for the next update.

I feel kinda sick that I'm glad she didn't break her bond with Brian....

is it 40 years from the day he was turned into a vampire? Or 40 years from the year he was really born? Please please please please turn it back, to 30 or 20 years! Please please please!

So, Brian is 40? NO! Change that, please! That means in the end of itall, he'll die about 40 years before she does, and that would be absolutely heartbreaking!

you have me hooked to this story! update soon please!!

This is the best vampire fic, no, fic in general that I have ever read. It's cute and romantic at the same time, and it makes me smile constantly. I subscribed, and I am sure to be ecstatic when you update next.

I loveeeeee this story <33333333333
Brian and Zoe are adorable together. more soon, please?

I really think that if you wanted to, you could make me your bitch right now.

i can't wait for more

I'm actually really curious to figure out what the deal will be with her family and stuff. I can't wait to find out!

Well you know most of my random comments aboutthe chapter until you WERE LAME AND LEFT ME.
Soooooooooo all I have to say is that this was AMAZING and I so love your describing...of anything, you just describe everything so perfectly! Feelings, atmosphere, I don't have words 'cause I'm too tired but like...you're an amazing writer and since the first fanfic I've ever read of you (...) until this very last chapter you just keep getting better and that makes me proud!!
So keep rockin' and all and keep writin' and all and keep Finnin' and all and ... okay I need sleep and I need sleep now.
So last thing, this chapter totally cheered me up 'cause I love you writing and all and I love Brian and all <3 Thanks <3

AND UPDATE SOON, WITH NO SCHOOL EXCUSES BECAUSE I DON'T CARE; ALRIGHT?! ALRIGHT! 'CAUSE MY NAME IS SAINT JIMMY AND DON'T YOU FUCKING WEAR IT OUT!
...yes fine I'll shut up and go to sleep.

holey crap.

I mean, for the first time ever, the awesomeness of a chapter makes me completely speechless.
I love how you could write so much into ONE single chapter, and still not make it overly long or anything, yet still make it so compact and natural. just wow.

"I only feared to love him first for he would feel it."

oh. my. god.
janis style.
this single little line is something SO powerful and beautiful.
can I like sacrifice myself at the altar of your awesome talent or something?