Biting Seduction - Comments

I LOVED THE UPDATE XD!!!!
I wonder who's going to fall for the other first ^_^'
Loved it, hope you'll get to update soon!

hun, you know how AWEFUL it is to comment this while you stare my back ?
oh yes you do you super vision freak, dont try to fool me !

AND STOP LAUGHING AT ME AS WELL.

and making that face.

AHEM.
aww for Jimjim & Leana ! ^^ its bout time you get some girls in this ! and kudos for FINALLEEEEH bringing Jimmy in. Maybe Brandon can keep his legs for somet ime now. ^^
(STOP COMMENTING MY COMMENTS WHILE I WRITE THEM, CHEESES.)

AW LAWL, hostel <3 love that movie, I do I do I doooo. Hmm. shouldn't she be all into it, for the blood and all, now that she's a vampire? oh well. Guess she's too nice for that.
& I love how you're developing their characteristics ! Brian IS indeed one cocky ass, but who's complaining?

I do wonder how graphic you're gonna go with the upcoming shower scene.. *eyebrow wiggle*

GAWD I LOVE YOUR FACE WHEN I WRITE THIS, muhahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaa.

Oh well.
cwfm! damn you for going to school tomorrow, that is SO going to fuck up your writing pace/speed.

love it so far can't wait for the next update.

i love it now for the drama.

Gosh. So cute together :)

loveliness!

I loved the update, and the one-shot HellGates wrote =D
I love your writing! look forward to more! =D please? ^_^"

I am so not surprised at all by this chapter, dear Finn <3
*sigh* JIIIIIIIIIIIMMMMMMMMMMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY <3333333333333 What a tall giant guy :mrgreen:

Uhh yeah anyway...
You wrote the feelings thing amazingly! I bet it was confusing, but you did an AMAZING job <3 And I cannot wait for more and I love it and I love your writing and I love you and I run out of things to love <3
Update soon or Boyd is getting stabbed fifty fucking times by a horn of a certain unicorn... ;)
<3

great story!
please update soon!:D

Wow, this is really well written. I really like it, update soon.

okay, call me horrible, sick and twisted person.. but SERIOUSLY,

" Mr. Walker's skull, perhaps?"

made me laugh SOOOO HARD.
AND ITS NOT EVEN FUNNY,IT'S SERIOUS AND BIG AND WOO AND FIRST-TIME-VAMPIRE-STATE-FOR-HER and everything, but I COULDNT HELP MYSELF.
DAIUSFASIUOHF.

So umm yeah. just wanted to put that out there.

howle cheeses woman, I loved how you described her feelings as she smelled the blood, it was coool, an in sync with the vampire legends but still original ya know?
hahaha, and I love how you totally planned everything before hand JUST to make them spend two days together in ONE room. I can tell whats going to happen, but I LIKE IT.

Ahem.
cwfm ! ^^

oh and, after this upcoming two days fuck fest-I MEAN, transformation phase, ofc, transformation phase, I want more info on ALL of the guys and their chicks and all that. I'm half-demanding. JIMMMEEEH ! always remember that me & Ef still have Boyd.

Damn. I was kind of hoping she would have attacked that man. Lol. I love the update :)

oh my fucking holy shitttt!
this story is AMAZING <3
more soon pleaseeee :D!

You know what I like about this story? It's different from the Twilight wannabe stories =]
don't misinterprete me, I love Twilight, but Twilight is Twilight and I love your story =D look forward to more!

OMCG AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME THE DESCRIBING OF BLOOD JUST OMCG AWESOME! <3
AND AWWW BRIAN OMCG SUCH A CUTE LITTLE GUILTY VAMPIRE !!!
You kinda made me want to write the scene where he kills the family, if I'll be bored enough tomorrow at school ;) (Not as my own anything, of course, just for fun!!)
Anddd what else I wanted to comment. OH HEY! *slaps* Jimmy's the ONLY one to be yet introduced for real! :O Shame on you, you little Finnish thing.
OH YEA THAT!! I love your way of vampire-ing. Like at parts it reminds me of Twilight vampires, which makes sense knowing you, but that's way better than Twilight style. I so love the whole black state thing and the sleeping animal and just...everything. Have I ever told you I love your writing? No? Never? Not even once? Wow.
....okay I'll shut up, can't wait for more!!! <3

I just started reading this story, HellGates told me about it =]
I like it so far, look forward to more! XD

hun, the following will be completely and utterly fangirlie, but you'll have to excuse me the euphoria your updates cause me.

ZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWCCCKKY !
ohmigod. I LOVELOVELOOOOOOVED HIM. I KNOW THIS IS A BRIAN FIC AND ALL, BUT HOWLY CHEESES I LOVE HIM. I THINK I DIED LAUGHING. AND I CAN TOTALLY IMAGINE HIM BEING ALL LIKE THAT. LE SIGH. DID I MENTION I LOVE HIM?

Ahem.

OH AND ! I love the answers to my questions ! I knew they werent assholes but I was kinda hoping for something else than a Cullen-way-of-doing-it. so kudos for that one, if you ask me, the law enforces could use couple of vampires.

the end was sooooooooooo full on in your face. my face. you know what I mean. anyway. he killed a family of five? bloody hell.

cwfm as always <3

Loving this so far, it's awesome :)

i love this story so much!!
its so good
hope you update soon!
:D

love it, can't wait for more