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  • Kira Yukimura

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    wow this is old and it's probably odd getting a comment on it now but oh my god this was absolutely amazing and ugh so many emotions XD
    I LOVED IT
    October 10th, 2012 at 10:16pm
  • Fangs Up.

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    This is amazing :D
    I just read it all in like 2 hours and it was sooo worth it :D
    May 31st, 2010 at 09:51pm
  • amberisariot

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    omg,I'm crying that's all I can say.
    Beautiful story
    February 27th, 2010 at 01:01am
  • Hezzarther

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    Cuute.
    February 10th, 2010 at 09:27pm
  • cannibal glow.

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    I love how you left it too but a sequel qould also be rather spiffy.
    The ending was totally cute, usually the whole marriage ending seems a little cliche but you totally made it your own and it worked perfectly. Loved it, the whole story was gorgeous.
    <3
    February 9th, 2010 at 10:22pm
  • fooleish

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    That was the cutest ending [i[ever. No shit. I was sure something bad was going to happen but I just awwed at the end when they got married. So cute.

    I kinda like it where you've left it, but if you wanna write a sequel, go ahead.
    Kudos to you for finishing your first chaptered fic though. Arms
    February 8th, 2010 at 11:37pm
  • Alex Gaskarth

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    :)great story.
    update soon please!
    January 25th, 2010 at 08:47pm
  • leighabelle

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    Gah, I love this story so much!
    So please, please update soon. I wanna know what happens next!!
    January 18th, 2010 at 04:58am
  • cannibal glow.

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    ^ Is also going to Glasgow show tehe

    I really love this story, it's like, I want them to get back together but Alex was such a complete prick that it's extremely confusing. Also, what Jack did to Andrew was quite saddening.

    You're a really gorgeous write, my favourite Jalex by far.

    <3
    January 17th, 2010 at 08:19pm
  • jack barakitten.

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    I love this story XD.

    I'm going to the Glasgow show (: I got M&G .. So .. I'm excited!!
    January 17th, 2010 at 05:22pm
  • fooleish

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    I wanna sit Jack down and tell him he can't just go around using people because he wants to get back at someone. IT'S NOT NICE.
    Yeah. I think Andrew's my favourite character at the mo'. Alex and Jack just have too many issues. >.>

    Alas, I'm not going on the Kerrang tour. But I'm seeing Lostprophets instead, so it's all good. :D
    January 17th, 2010 at 04:53pm
  • Alex Gaskarth

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    I'M SEEING THEM AT THE KERRANG TOUR! :D
    but at Liverpool. With meet and greets ;)

    amazing story btw! one of my fave jalex ones.
    January 17th, 2010 at 12:37pm
  • Alexander Gaskarth.

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    So I've just found your Jalex story here.

    -melt-

    I love it. :D Jack is so damn adorable ^____^

    Alex is a prick though. :/ Hope it all works out with themm D: I really love it. ^_^
    January 11th, 2010 at 03:41pm
  • fooleish

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    Aw, Jack. I kinda feel bad for Alex, but he really does deserve it.
    And now I feel bad for Andrew, because Jack's just using him, really.

    This is messed up. Love it, though. It's so adorable.
    January 10th, 2010 at 10:39pm
  • Anarchy in Words

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    I really, really like this story.

    D: I want to hug Jack so badly, but I hope that they eventually make up.
    January 3rd, 2010 at 04:48am
  • fooleish

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    Aw. Aw. Aw. I just wanna hug Jack right now. He doesn't deserve that.

    One thing... aren't there six billion people on the planet, not six million?
    January 2nd, 2010 at 05:27pm
  • UnFlappaBelle

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    I always thought May Barakat was younger too :S Ah well :P

    Can't wait for the next update :D
    January 2nd, 2010 at 05:25pm
  • Toasty.

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    Omfg. I really like this. Like, really, really. o_o
    Subbin'.
    January 1st, 2010 at 07:48pm
  • fooleish

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    That nearly broke my heart. Jack is the sweetest thing ever. I hate Alex right now. But Jack and Andrew are too cute.

    One thing that confuses me, you switched tenses for this chapter. Was that intentional? Because it kinda threw me off a little.
    December 26th, 2009 at 08:45pm
  • fooleish

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    Aw, sweet. I feel sorry for Alex, being all ostracised by everyone. I wonder what he did to May... or is it just that he broke up with her? Stupid boy.
    And as for your moron moment, it's not that bad. And anyway, it's fanfiction. It doesn't have to be true to life. File

    Have a good Christmas and New Year, too. :D
    December 20th, 2009 at 07:00pm