Too Blind to See It! - Comments

I’m more of a Staal fan. I love the way he plays. I wonder if he has sex like he plays hockey.
dont we all?

"Wait really? Four... of you?" She said pointing up and down at him.

I was afraid where her dirty mind would take her. Her eyes drifted toward me, and she bit her lip to keep from saying what she was thinking.
HHAHAH!!!! I reeeeally love Phoebe.

This chapter was hilarious! you had me laughing so hard a million times!
i love that the cowboy turned out to travis zajac. and that he was jealous when phoebe wanted to meet mstaal.
im so happy you threw your love for all things staal in here. every story should have a staal in it.
and like i said before, i love how completely different jenna and phoebe are. i love that contrast.

i wonder what zach told marc about jenna. clearly there was some talk about her.
the title for this is so perfect because obviously zach is crazy about jenna. i can see it already.
cant wait for more!!!! so get on it =]

I just found this and it's amaaaaazing.
Phoebe is hilarious.
I like that her & Jenna are total opposites but they're best friends.
Zach Parise is fucking perfect...legit.
More soon. <3

oh my goodness i love it!!!! and i love that its all mine :)

i cant wait to see how everyone knows about ....her...
i cant believe btw, that the gf would beg her to go out with her man...if he were my man i def wouldn't be allowing that haha.
and i do wanna see phoebe end up with travis lol
i sense some competition btwn zach and marc...hmmm i LOVE this. you dont even know.
thank you, thank you, thank you for it.
u better update it tomorrow! haha

"Holy shit Jenna!" she said standing up and pointing, "That's my cowboy."
i was waiting for that hahahahahahhaha!!!!

I thanked the man for his help, and saw that Phoebe was already outside the doors looking in through a small crack.
HAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!

The fact that he was practically instructing me to look at his naked chest sent tingles through my body.
*drools*

Phoebe could call me Snow White all she wanted, but I was overwhelmed by how extremely turned on it made me.
LOL!

"Will you keep my Zachy company at dinner? I really want to go out with my girlfriends." Allison whined out her words as she sprang up and down in her heals. I noticed Zach roll his eyes.
*jaws drops*
IS SHE FUCKING DUMB!? ohh myyy goodd! If oyu are dating Zach Parise, I don't care how hot you are... you do NOT send him out on a dinner date with another girl. stupid. stupid. stupid.

Without caring if her boyfriend would be alone for dinner, she was gone in all her fake glory. (Oh that was judgmental wasn't it?)
LMFAO!!!! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHA! HILARIOUS!

Phoebe smiled and nodded, but I heard Travis say, "Staal? Why do you want to meet him?"
TRAV!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!!! :D

AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
I LOVED THIS!
and I squealed out loud when I saw this was updated <3
ohh woow.. i really really really love this story
and I'm so beyond stoked for the rest that I'm pretty sure I won't be able to wait!
MORE SOON PLEASEEE!!! <3

ohhh and I basically love phoebe..
just saying :D

Phoebe is crazy! But come on, who doesn't love Marc Staal. The story got more awesome when he came in. Marc and Zach in one story= sexy! Woah! Zach just showed up on my tv as I wrote that. Ha!

Anyway, good job! Can't wait for more.

MEMO TO REAL LIFE PHEOBE: The fictious Pheebs owes me a new laptop after her antics caused me to snort milk out of my nose and spray it all over the screen.

Just kidding....lol....but she is honestly the most hilarious, dirty, bestest best friend in the entire world. I would kill to hang out with these two. I just adored this chapter; it was awesome seeing the best friends together and seeing their unique personalities. Total polar opposites! It was fantastic and makes the story so believable! I definitely can't wait to read more!

O
my
zach
parise!!!
Yessssss another zach update!!!!!:)<33333333333
and you see I have a relationship with Travis were if I see him I always laugh from everything he said/done to me like prAnk wise and when you talked about him abou the cowboy when she screamed the cowboy I cried I was laughing sooooooooo hard!!!;)<333333 more soon!!!!!

Another Parise story!!!! I'm excited for this one.

Can't wait for more!

Omg Parise story! Yay!
Loving it already! I can't wait for more!

I'd be lying if I said I never thought about kissing him. I actually thought about it a lot
her and millions of other girls. lol.

I nearly passed out when he put his hand on the my thigh and disconnected my stocking from the garter belt.
woahhhh

"I never would have pegged you for a french maid Jenna."
he knew it was her?!

I’m a good boy Jenna. I don’t cheat.
he should get on dumping that girlfriend then.

this was amazing! i have been waiting for this ever since you told me you were writing it and it completely lived up to my expectations =]
i really like how sweet you have him being because i can picture him as that sugar sweet type of guy.
and yes i realize that he doesnt cheat...but he likes jenna. he realy likes her. i can tell. i found it ridiculously cute when he knew for sure that it was her because of her scar. and the whole pie thing. he remembers little otherwise insignificant things about her. ughhh. i want a zach parise!!!
also, i love that phoebe and jenna are the complete opposite. jenna needs someone to bring her out of her shell.
i can't wait for more!!! this is just another story that i can harass you about now because im hooked =]

Awesome start!!! I am looking forward to where you are going to take this!! :D

I have been waiting for this! And it was so worth it!!! You're actually the one that got me hooked on him with your first story (he's a little too old for me and I'm more into Brodeur, but I can still admire a hot young thing) and you've got me appreciating him! I was so glad that find out that you had posted this and I loved it! Can't wait to read more! I'm so excited!!!!

ohhhhhh thank you!!!!! i love it and you have ..... her....pegged to a tee!! you better post again soon!

Truth is I love to write. Writing is my life. I like it so much that I sometimes get lost in my work. I not only write articles for the school paper, and term papers for class; I also write stories. My stories are my passion really. A couple years ago I started a story and somewhere between then and now my characters became my friends. They live the life I gave them and go on adventures that I control. I'd much rather sit home and spend time with characters that I know and love then smash bodies in a smelly club with half naked women and intoxicated men.
true or false.. that describes my life... TRUE.

The music was so loud I couldn't really even hear what he said, at least not until he asked me if I wanted to go someplace a little more quiet.
YES!!!!!! OH MY GOD YES! I'D GO WITH HIM!!! :D

was wrong... it wasn't a kiss he was after, and I nearly passed out when he put his hand on the my thigh and disconnected my stocking from the garter belt.
whoa.. innocent zachy no more :d

Something you'll learn about me is that I always do the right thing, Leaving my neighbor in the hallway begging me to let him in and waking up the rest of the building was not the right thing.
good.

Jenna, I’m sorry, really. My friend Travis saw your friend wiggling her butt and wanted to go meet her.
oh my god. for some reason the frase "wiggling her butt" coming out of zach parise's mouth has about killed me with laughter. *snorts and dies laughing* I'm legit crying. wow, maybe I need a life! :D

OH MY GOD!
I CAN'T EVEN BELIEVE THIS.. BUT I ALREADY LOVE THIS AS MUCH AS STAAL!
OH MY GOD!!!!
I want more, I'm sooo interested in this.. I wanna know what happens..
I wanna know about his girlfriend, and I loved the little summary page..
it made me really curious.. OHH BOYYY!!!!
EEEKKKKK!!!!!!!!! I'm so exciteddd!
more soon please?!? :D :D :D :D

More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!!!!<3 I lve Travis zajac!!!
He is life!! And no there is no one more perfect out there!!Sidney Crosby doesn't even cone CLOSE!!! I LOVE TRAVIS ZAJAC AND ZACH PARISE!!!!<3

1) yessssss new zach parise story!! <3( my boyfriend) there isn't enough of these!!:(
2) first comment!!!!
3) great keep going!!
4) you need to have travis zajac in here they are like partners in crime
5) can't wait for my oshie story!!!