Too Blind to See It! - Comments

I found this story today and read straight through. I love it.

Oh my!!! Just found this and read it straight through. Amazing. Just the right mix of everything!!!! Bravo!!

I really loved this story, but that doesn't surprise me because I love all of your stories. I would love to see a sequel, but you left it on a really great note. I am very impressed again and completely obsessed with another one of your stories. Thank you for being such a great writer and sharing your gift with the rest of us. =D

Well, another great story! I loved this one just like all of your others. You continue to amaze me with your great writing and awesome and fun characters. Jenna was sweet and Phoebe was totally funny. I loved the way she was with Jenna, kidding her about all the sex stuff, but being a great best friend. Now I only have one more story to go I think.....then what am I gonna do??? I guess you're just going to have to keep writing awesome stories just for me!!! :D

I just read this entire story in the last 2 days, & I loved it!
Hope you decide to do a sequel!
Great job!

Loved, loved, loved, loved it!!!!!!!!! I'm a little late but I loved the ending. I just knew that it was Phoebe and Travis getting married, And that was just perfect :) Loved this :) :) :) :D:D:D:P:P:P

A little late, but damn I'm going to miss this.
It quickly became one of my favorite stories on here.
The evolution of the relationship between Jenna & Zach was so real & so amazing.
Amazing story. <3

Ah the penalty box. Once upon a time when I was a pup...I bet it wasn't as good as it would be with Parise, though.

I did enjoy this story, but I think you picked a good stopping point. The scary part about this story is that I can actually picture him being like this, he seems like a sweetheart. An adorable puppy eyed sweetheart, even if he did play for the Sioux and the Devils.

good story. you should continue. I lliked it a lot! :)

I'M SORRY!! i know i suck. this comment is about 7 years too late.

Okay, i have to say it, that graphic of my honey is a little creepy LOL

I was surprised with the opening wedding. not gonna lie. I was like, well, this is a little NOT jenna and zach's style. then it made sense once it was phoebe and travis. i loved zach's little dig at her white dress by the way, that was cute.

Zach held Jenna tightly afterwards whispering words of endearment, love and devotion while twisting the nearly flawless two and a half carat tiffany diamond solitaire around her finger-- there's no way this can happen in real life right? because if so sign me up!

“Disappointed?” she teased. “Sorry your boyfriend couldn’t make it. I--haha i would totally say that. way to be sassy!

. Her legs, made heavy by skates, instinctively wrapped around his waist. He blindly grappled with the door of the penalty box and carried her inside.-- sign me up for this too. i got tingly in all the right places LOL-- it is my fantasy after all haha

“I’ve fantasized about this you know Jenna. Making love to you here. Just like this.”-- haha actually it's probably the other way around.

WOW i finally got my zach parise penalty box sex lol. it was awesome! i loved how you wrote it and it makes it even more special that you wrote it all for me. i have a wonderful friend :)

"Don't think for a moment I'm not excited to make you my wife. To start a family." He cooed.-- *sigh* wouldn't that be nice.

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!! for writing this wonderful story! and the best part is that it's all mine! i'm bummed it had to end, but all good things must i suppose. I'm not closing the door on a sequel (and you know i'll be bugging you for one) i LOVED reading this, i loved getting wrapped up in the drama and the loved the fact that he was such a gentleman. they really were perfect for each other. see, not everyone has to sleep around to snag a hockey player and get the happily ever after lol. thanks for writing this...i love you :) (i shouldn't have to say it, but i will anyway-- in a non creepy way haha)

That was an amazing ending! I loved this story! I definitely think you should do a sequel! ;) <3

It wasn't the hottest kiss she'd ever had, or the sweetest, but it was the most meaningful and the most memorable, and the only one that ever reduced her to tears.
so sweet <3

Jenna turned to Zach. "I can't believe they actually got married."
I KNEW IT! HAHAHA! YOU TRIED TO TRICK ME! I KNEW IT! HAHAHAHA!

Zach got a big smirk. "I can't believe Phoebe wore white."
LOL!

Is she on drugs?" Jenna asked Travis.
LOL! gotta love the best friends

“Disappointed?” she teased. “Sorry your boyfriend couldn’t make it. It was his wedding night you know. Did you really think Pheebs was going to let him go this morning?”
LOL cute :D

Zach stood on the ice in shoes, and Jenna’s skates made her almost as tall as him. He pulled her into him. “I never had a coach as pretty as you.”
god this whole story just makes me have hope for men <3 what a sweetheart

“You’ve never had a coach this bossy either. Get your skates on and hit the ice Parise!” she demanded, and took a swing for his butt./i]
LOL!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!

In one fluid motion Zach reached around and caught her before she hit the ice.  “Nice coach. Real nice!” he said laughing.
HAHAHAHAHHA! OH MY GOD! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!

“Is this the way you practice with Travis?” she asked, already intoxicated by his dimpled smirk.
gee.. i hope not.. or i will be disappointed.. hahaha

Jenna stiffened. “Here?” She squeaked out.
oh boy...... i'm with jenna.. COLD. nips be out!

He smirked at her, dimples shining brightly. "God I love you."
you know.. now that i think about it.. i would FOR SURE be willing to have sex with zach parise on/near the ice if I could make him smile like that, tell me he loves me, and oh yeah, i guess the sex wouldnt be too bad :p

he sounds of skin on skin, of two lovers giving in to each other in a public place, making fantasy - reality, resonated around the penalty box.
i bet the glass fogged up. lets be honest.

Nope, because when I marry you I want to do it in front of everyone I know, everyone you know. I want the whole world to know that we are married. That I've found my own little slice of heaven. I want it to be perfect for you Jenna, the wedding of your dreams."
*sigh* i love you zach.. marry me :(

"Don't think for a moment I'm not excited to make you my wife. To start a family." He cooed.
BABIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!

More than that he knew he'd found the woman of his dreams, the future mother of his children, the light of his life, and though their wedding was a full hockey season away, he knew better than anyone - Good things come to those who wait.
i love this. such a PERFECT ending. love love love love love.

sigh. you know how much i love this.
and how it is such a bittersweet ending for me :(
this was really really fantastic. i loved these two.. because they were so perfect. this story was soooo amazing, with the adorable fluff and the drama that was added into it with marc staal and then when zach was a douche for those couple chapters. It had everything and was very well written.
you know I will miss this :( I only begged for it all the time :p
and i would LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE X 2093480284301 a sequel :) but whatever you want to do is fine :) <3
and since i can no longer say more soon to this (even though i want to demand babies) i will have to say that you need to update staals. i NEED eric and caitlin.. :(
this was AMAZING :) sad to see it go :( sequel?? yep.
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i loved this story so much
you did such an amazing job with it
totally wouldnt mind a sequel but its obviously your call
cant wait to read your next amazing story

Even though we'd already discussed it, I legit squealed when I finally read Travis and Pheebs getting married! I know they weren't the main couple in this story, but I loved them most of all. Maybe it's because they seemed real. They had their share of issues to get past and the had to really fight to make things work between them. It didn't just come easily. And he loved her for who she was and wanted nothing more than to 'heal' her and be that one man that she could love and be happy with for the rest of her life. So I feel the most happy for those two. And I thought her choice of outfit -given her personality- was perfect. I mean if hugely pregnant women can get married in churches in white dresses, than Pheebs should be allowed to marry in white too!!! If there was ever going to be a sequel, I'd love to read tons more about these two :)

As usual, you write some of the hottest smut I've ever read. While they're not my fave couple in the world, they certainly do have a sex life that is to be envied. I loved the penalty box idea (although I know it isn't exactly their style and you probably weren't that comfortable putting them in that situation) and I thought that you handled it exceptionally well.

And I really liked their loving, tender little moment at the Venetian where she expressed a bit of regret that it wasn't them that had gotten married and Zach saying that he wasn't because when it did happen, he wanted the entire world to know. Love him. He's precious.

I really enjoyed this story! But I always love anything you produce, you know that!!!

omg amazing story!!! is there gonna b a sequel cuz i loved her n zach n want 2 c where their relationship goes. :)

I'm kind of depressed now that it's over! I loved it so much. I hope you do a sequel down the road.

awww i loved this! all the way to the very end.
i had a feeling it was phoebe getting married. but this was amazing.
such a great story!

So I love this story! <33
I'm so sad to see it end but that was the perfect ending.
<333 (:

That was an amazing end to a fantastic story. I loved it. I like that it was Phoebe that was getting married in the beginning and not Jenna. And the practice, omg. She's one lucky gal. haha. Great work!!!!

seriously loved every thing about this story!!
it was AMAZING!! =)