The Essence of Sin - Comments

I really do enjoy this story-I was reading it on Quizilla so I can't to see what happens at the end!!!

Okay so I checked out this story because I was bored and wanted something new to read, and I only have this to say

I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY, EVERYTHING ABOUT IT AND I AM ADDICTED TO IT

I'm not even kidding, i love it >3
I love all the characters, Kara and the boys, they are so sweet and protective yet they all have thier own personalities that make them thier own. I escpecially love Caleb and the Twins.
I just love that this story has romance but action as well. You don't really get a lot of those stories here on mibba. I was literally hooked since the first chapter and you had me sold at thier first hiest.
Agghhhh! So I just wanted to say that i love this story and please continue it. I am totally subscribing!

Awesome update!! :) :)

lol Princess is expecting a boy...I've definitely been watching too much TV since I've been on spring break because that actually sounded like an interesting idea. XD I'm just kidding. That's actually a very scary idea...Princess has a bit of a temper...Hormones gone wild + temper = funny for me but scary for the guys.

I love spring break. <3

You know what?
I LOVE ALL THE GUYS!!!
Really. Every single one of them has this sweet way of showing his love to Klara. And the princess name calling is just adorable.
I'm completely and utterly in love with this.

I love it when stories surprise me.
And this story DEFINETLY surprises me...
God, from drunk party to murder party?
I really didn't expect that...omg...
You see, I'm just REALLY surprised. haha

oops...guess what I just saw?
I mixed Lenny and Caleb up!!!!!!!!!
I'M SO SORRY!!!!
I REALLY AM!!!!!!!!!!!

Just one (really unimportant) question.
When Kara asked Lenny how old he was, he said seven. So that means he's two years older than her, right?
Well, in the character description he's only one year older....

It's really not important, I was just curious of how old he really is then.

Btw, I subscribed (of course I did ;)

You know what?
This story is amazing.
I'm sure you've heard that a lot already, but still, I hope it doesn't get old. ;)
- Because I could say it over and over again.

This story has really made its way up to my most favourites stories. I can't even describe how stunned I am.

You have amazing writing skills.
I just love how you started this story. The beginning is always important because that's what makes readers go on reading - or not. But your prologue really made me want to read more (LOTS more).

Your story ideas are completely new, different - and that's what I love. I love it when people think of new things to create their own world. It attracts me. I can't stop anymore when I started reading those "new worlds".

Such stories as yours always seem to take me with them in their world. I love that feeling.

Your characters are unique and special in their own way. Every single one of them has this THING about him/her that just makes me like (or hate) them. I really want to find out more about each and every one of them (if there is).

I'll say it one more time:
This story is amazing.
And I love it.

Amazing....made my crappy day a lot better lol
Looking forward to the next updates :)

Yay for spring break!

Updates makes everything so much better! Thanks for finding the time. Are you by any chance on Spring break like I am? =3

there were soo many updates today! :) That's super exciting! Loved the updates. Keep up the story, it is one of a kind.
~Mantis3216

love it lots!!....Awesome!
update soon please?
:)

Awesome story...love it :D
Can't wait to read the rest of it

I have been waiting for an update for so long, this story is awesome! sorry I havn't commented more. Loved! the update
~Mantis

I was scrolling down to comment and I saw that NeutiquamErro had commented! I love her story "Summer Storms" I like how on Mibba we can see other people's comments...It gives a better feel of community, you know?

Hmm.. I haven't read that before!

the characters all seem like younger versions of Ms. Mauraders robin hood story